Those Who Don't Know How to Coax Their Wives Are Not Allowed to Be Reborn.

I've read Two Worlds, and overall it's pretty good, and the writing is very smooth. But I have two questions. First: before the first World Attacker was reborn, it could be seen that he always thought that the one he liked was Bai Yueguang. After rebirth, this problem was not solved. Second: The attacker in the second world died because he was indirectly harmed and was afraid of it. However, after he was reborn, something did not make him unafraid, so he got close to him inexplicably. Third: The protagonists of the two worlds fall in love with each other inexplicably. They fall in love without any opportunity or reason. I was very confused when I read it. There was also a quarrel scene in the article, which may be a personal preference. I think the quarrel still needs a little friction. There was too much foreshadowing in the front to predict the quarrel, but in the end it was reconciled in a sentence or two. It felt like a punch on cotton. It made me uncomfortable watching it:-) But the plot line is still good.

I've finished reading the first story. It's not a scumbag's cleansing, but it's a chance for a reunion (?). The plot is relatively bland and succinct, with no major abuse: After the two of them broke up peacefully in their previous life (the author didn't write down the reason for the breakup), I don't know what I did to cause the world to collapse, and I'm close to rebirth/pacifying Shou to ensure the smooth operation of the world. In this life, Gong has lingering feelings and takes the initiative to pursue his wife after seeing his true feelings. Shou likes Gong and falls in love with her at first sight. After a little twists and turns, the relationship between the two warmed up. The writing is okay, suitable for sweet writing lovers who like to eat some cookies?

The first few units are okay, the writing is OK, and there are no particularly big problems with the plot, but be careful with the fifth unit. First of all, Shou had a sweetheart who he "liked" at the beginning. Although it was later explained that Shou didn't know what liking was and thought he might like that person, it was a fact that he was closer to that sweetheart, and other people thought that Shou liked this sweetheart. This was clearly stated in the article. On this basis, the love between Gong and Shou is a bit like catching up with Zi. Later, Gong and Shou got together, Zhu Ma got anxious and drugged Shou. Gong asked Shou how to solve the problem, but Shou actually said directly, "Let's forget it." Later, Gong said to leave it to Gong and his brother to solve the problem. Gong told Shou not to be soft-hearted, and he relented again after answering the phone. It is understandable that Shou's character is innocent, and they grew up together, but to Gong, Gong is a bit like that little ugly one, because Gong is uncomfortable with this matter, Shou is only sad for a few days, and Shou's brother helps Shou to find Gong's steps (actually it feels a bit threatening: "Don't see my brother again if you don't come to dinner").

The author's ideas are clear and thorough, and the articles are interestingly described. I like the author's novels the most. Every protagonist is vividly and richly portrayed, which makes me want to keep reading every day.

OK, let's just give it a pounding here. It's simply delicious. If you like fast-paced reading, you've found the right book. It's just a fairy How can people find articles that don't conflict with them at all? Delicious😋😋😋😋😋

It's okay. I like the fourth world better. I haven't watched the fifth one. Others are okay. I feel that the third world is a bit too hard. The second world, well, the character design is not clear enough, so it's a bit rushed to post. The shortcomings are mutually beneficial. Overall, it's okay, okay.

Units 2 and 4 are good to watch [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [adoration] [love] [love] [love]

Well, there are a lot of animals. Does the author have animals or wants to raise them?

I want to watch the extras from my previous life, is that okay? My good author, write some It's finally updated. I've been waiting for a long time. It's a happy day today. The author hurry up and write more, write more and keep waiting.

It's very beautiful😍, and the emotions are also very delicate.

Marking 🏷️ is okay, no need to swipe twice

Come on, come on! I read a book in the evening and I fainted.

The second world started well, sweet and doting on each other

It's beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration] I like every story so far [shy]

Super nice [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss], I really like this style [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's really beautiful. Every young couple is sweet and at ease. I beg the author to update it soon [shy][shy]

It's very interesting to read, every story is novel and very interesting. I like it, please update more. Okay, it looks great.