No Ability to Travel Through Time? I Developed Secretly with Myself

This is a new author here, just starting out, and there are so few people. I don't have enough experience, but I want to enjoy reading it, so I just follow my preferences and write wherever I think of the outline. I don't know if this is the right way to write it, or if it will be too procrastinating. Thank you all. I have written hundreds of thousands of words. When everyone is reading, if you have any comments, you can put them forward in the comments or discussion area. As long as there are a few posts every day, I will mostly change what needs to be changed. Of course, don't quarrel [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's very interesting. I hope that there will be no CP/no female protagonist as stated in the introduction, and readers must not be tricked into killing them. Come on, it's really well written and very enjoyable to read. It's better than the novels I've read before. The writing at the back is very good, but Chen Chen upgrades a bit slowly, and the atmosphere between the female clones and Zhixia gives people a weird feeling every time they blush, which makes people a little bit uncomfortable. But fortunately, after reading the chapters, every clone is very good. I hope I don't kill anyone. After all, it can be seen that Chen Chen really treats each clone as a family member. If they are gone, Chen Chen will definitely cry sadly. Xie Xiran is so crazy and cute, but Chenchen is even cuter. There are also updates soon. I'm afraid I'll finish reading them in two days.

I have read Chapter 21 so far, and I feel very eager to read it. This is a novel with a theme that is not new, but very innovative (his avatar will not always be a male, and has different personalities. I have always wanted to find a doppelgänger novel like this, and the author finally wrote it). Maybe it is because I have read less novels like this, but I personally think it is very good. (As for why I didn't give it five stars, it's because many people read five-star reviews and think it's a human machine [laughs crookedly]) But there are still some problems. For example, when describing sentence fragmentation, when describing the Vientiane Heavenly Palace, you will find that there are many long paragraphs of description. In fact, as a person, you should divide it into more paragraphs and give more periods. There is another problem, that is, the author, your book will be popular, but! Your book will definitely be criticized for the first few chapters! Because your protagonist has not achieved the personality they want. This is what the person who gave three stars in the 33 book reviews said "doesn't have the qualifications to be a king." But I think it's pretty good, so you have to add something more emphasized in the introduction: "The protagonist's early personality is relatively unconventional, and what I want to describe is a person's slow transformation." If that's what it means, I remember the first one, but it's best to add the introduction as well. For those of you who read my book review, if you have no book to read or want to read a clone novel, and you still have time to read this book, then! Please read my book review! If I gave the previous four stars because I was afraid that the author would be high-profile and deliberately gave it, then my four stars are an encouragement to the author, asking him to work hard and improve. I can say I have seen over 60 now Zhang, if you really want to see it, I can emphasize to you, don't be too smart Son! Don't be smart! Because this is a new author, this book has many shortcomings Point, although the author may be unhappy by saying this, it is true There are many realities, for example: there is no sense of a large organization. No organization In the early stage of development, which is the so-called novice village, the author directly wrote about the early and middle stages for him. More than 60 pictures used to include more than 60 pictures with very few fighting scenes! No What passion. Low concept of money and props. Start contacting the official when your level is very low. You don't have to worry about someone being radical within the official. They will bring someone with a higher level and use a special device to directly check your level. If you find that your level is low (although the official statement is that it is a branch or not a strong branch), When you meet an unfathomable person in a fantasy world, you think that the official can't find your level in your territory and you are shocked. You don't think about whether you have any props.) You directly use force on the clone and put all the responsibility on yourself. You are afraid that the organization will ignore the people (even though you said you are on the side of the official) and so on... But! There are still advantages, it is not limited to traditional points Shen Wen has innovated the clone, which is composed of some sudden changes of the protagonist. Thinking suddenly creates some different clones, giving It brings readers some different reading and a novel experience of group portrait writing. This is what I see Motivation to go on. If you also like its advantages, you can Keep reading! ! !

A super interesting book about the behind-the-scenes of the clones. I spent two days catching up on the latest chapter and read it as soon as I woke up. I really haven't read enough. There is still no heroine who can focus on her career. The character of each clone is vividly shaped. The author will update it as soon as possible!

I like the setting of the author very much, but the original character of the protagonist is too... Well, I can't describe it. It just feels weird. Secondly, the protagonist group has been fighting monsters for more than a hundred chapters. It is not a big challenge. It feels a bit harsh. After all, the first few zodiac signs, including Sloth, are all S-level and above. Logically speaking, they should be much higher than ordinary superpowers or even A-level superpowers, but they are not much higher now; the author's writing is still good. I can't stand many novels. After reading Tomato Peak and The Ten Deadly Sins I haven't found a book that I can continue to read, but what the author wrote made me shine. My ideas and the author's are almost coincident (except for the character of the main body and the character of the snake). Finally, I would like to emphasize that the author's setting really poked me. I really hope that the author will keep writing and not stop updating. After all, it is difficult to find a satisfactory novel setting. It is not easy to find a needle in a haystack. I hope the author will persevere. Finally, I hope there will be no BE and Hu'an CP. Thank you! (Personal opinion) 😘🤧🙃 I feel that the development of the plot is not too amazing and is a bit bland. I really hope that the author will stick to it and write it well before typing so many words to express his opinion. I have been reading for several years and I have never typed so many words. Later, I can also try to write some fusion abilities. For example, fuse low-level abilities with each other to create more powerful abilities. It is similar to the synthesis in Mc. You can also differentiate low-level abilities and attach them to powerful abilities for non-staff use (cannot reach the level of members within the organization). Get a sense of belonging, increase trust, and look up to the mystery and strength of the organization; there are powers that are not only the ones you describe, but also include but are not limited to: metal cards and the like. A person can also have multiple skills at the same time. Of course, they cannot be repeated. This depends on the author's imagination. At the same time, there must not be too many entities. I hope these can provide ideas for the author 🙂

The subject matter is always old, but the advantage is that the first viewing experience is good, I hope it will not fall apart later. The more the organization is written, the bigger it becomes. A villain cannot be like the protagonist. When the protagonist becomes stronger, he will also become stronger.

So beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘He is a god It was my rose that illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist and I was so cute that I shed tears Not only will the world no longer be short of water, it will be the nemesis of depression 😋 It will also be the alarm clock of vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flowed out of the corners of my mouth and flooded the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, I was so good that I shed tears, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water

I don't know how many stars I'm going to give, so I'll give it a few reasons, just in case it turns out to be good later, and I'll also ask the author. How was this clone divided? How often? Or is it a level upgrade? I feel that the personalities of the protagonist and the clone are too different. Logically speaking, they should be the same, but the protagonist feels like a little wife, so why not let Chenlong be the protagonist?

I have read more than 100 chapters so far, and overall it is pretty good. At least the various supporting characters are not stereotypes, but have their own characteristics, and their abilities are carefully designed. There are still some pitfalls at the moment, let's see how to fill them later. If there is one level at each level, all the commanders will be level 70. I hope there will be more people later and they won't give half a chapter to each episode. I read more than 400 chapters in one go, but I was a little confused at the end. I just went to college and dug too many holes. I might read it after I finish it. If I follow the book at this pace, I really can't remember what happened before. Reading this book reminded me of The Lost City of Wild Beasts. The author still has great potential.

I like the core setting of this clone style the most: the main body keeps the original heart, and the clone opens up the world. Unlike the cookie-cutter protagonist who makes a strong appearance and makes a counterattack in the face, this article focuses on the sense of control behind the scenes. There are many avatars with different personalities and complementary abilities. Some are killing and scheming, while others are dormant and cultivating their power, weaving a complete power network from all walks of life. The protagonist uses his clone as a pawn to leverage the entire worldview.

The author looks at me [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] After reading Chapter 67, I really can't help but want to comment (suggest). The key to this kind of subject is the mystery and heritage of the organization. Wanxiang is a hidden organization that protects the ordinary world. It has said that it will not interfere with the ordinary world. As a result, even the little monsters in the dust peak have to report ( Isn't he a weirdo in the eyes of a level 70 commander?) Zishu's self-promotion really put the organization under pressure. I really can't bear to lead people to level up later. I'm afraid I've really forgotten the purpose of the organization. I don't care if the upgrade is slow, but the main thing is that I want to see the big scene (the kind that faces the world). The reactions of various countries and the reactions of netizens in their own countries are starting to take off. Isn't this exciting? I hope there will be a similar scene in the future where the protagonist can solve a world boss and show his face in front of the whole world. There is also the background. Now it is as if this organization has appeared out of thin air. There is no sense of being hidden in history. You can create a few relics that symbolize all things and let others discover it, so that the background and mystery will rise (this point. I created the containment organization. The writing is okay, and I don't mean to offend). Of course, this is just striving for excellence, and it doesn't matter if you don't write it down. In addition, it is good to diversify the characters of the clones, but it feels a bit cheap to reveal the true character. The members of the hidden organization must have a sense of alienation after all, right? I'm afraid that after Zishu came out, it really shattered other people's filter on everything... And the writing style, I think it is quite comfortable and not bad. Others say it is a novice article. The writing style is okay, but the concept is a bit noisy? So far, it seems that there is no big main plot, the scope of activities, the map and the characters introduced, and the scope of the state agencies are quite small. Of course, I have just read Chapter 67, and I hope it will improve in the future. Anyway, I will definitely finish this book, because the subject is so appealing to me, but I just feel it's a bit of a pity. Also, the book's rating is a bit low, it must be over 8 points. I still admire the author a lot, but I feel that the results are a bit dismal, haha ​​[face covering] give me a five-star support, I hope the author can persevere [sending my heart] I will comment back later

The advantage of this book is that the clone can really be viewed as a real, independent person. The protagonist also treats the clone as a friend. It will not be like the protagonist in other clone novels who treat the clone as a consumable, or the clone is not good to the protagonist. Moreover, the author's writing is not bad, it belongs to the middle class. The combat power is indeed a bit confusing. In the early stage, I felt that the protagonist and the clone were really not very strong. The author also replied in the review that he would improve the combat power in the future. However, in fact, in the early stage, it was not very aggrieved, and there was no such vicious plot. For those who say that the protagonist is a bit crazy, the author said that the appearance of the clone will complete the protagonist's personality. Therefore, the protagonist's personality in the early stage will make people feel very strange, but in the later stage, the interaction between the protagonist and the clone is still very loving. I hope you can stick with it. As a new author, the author is indeed a little green in the early stage, but the author is growing and improving, and the author is also working hard to give back the love of readers. I hope the author can stick to it. The score of this book is only more than seven points, which is really regrettable. Most people basically gave up the book after seeing the early stage. I really hope you stick with it, it will still be very interesting later on.

Personally, I think it's quite interesting. I originally just wanted to find a novel to kill time, but I couldn't stop reading it. All the positive characters are very interesting and I like them all. The author must give them a good ending [I almost cried]

In reality, the rating of this book should be above 8. It is around 6 o'clock now. It must be a new problem. Anyway, I have found so many books about supernatural organizations. This one is the best one, but it is a bit short. Good luck to the author.

It's very interesting, the subject matter is very novel, the author's writing is very good, each clone has its own independent and distinct character, very vivid feeling, the protagonist is not ambiguous at all, it is very comfortable to watch, I highly recommend it, even though the stereotype of group portraits for me is that I will die, I am still worried that the knives will be more and more in the back, but it is really good-looking, highly recommended! ! !

I've finished reading it, and it's quite interesting, with some foreshadowing, and it's not a brainless novel. It's the author's first book, but I really didn't think it was poorly written. The plot is also intertwined and very addictive. Perhaps the only drawback is that this is the author's first book, so it only has over 700 chapters, and I feel like I could write more. But it didn't end so suddenly. I can only say that it was expected and unreasonable, but it was really much better than most novels. I hope whoever writes the next book will be as good as him [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Although I really like watching it, the combat power is high and low, and the progress is pushed a bit too fast, and it is uncoordinatedly fast. I have already been exposed to high-level ones, but I am still low-level, and the upgrade progress is very slow, and I am still on the original map, and there is no high-level map opened, especially It's some middle-level people who can't find it, or a few levels of people. It may also be a follow-up setting, such as the nature of the protagonist is very high or something, but I just can't understand it now. For me, there are many flaws now, but those are flaws that can be fixed. I am currently making up for the settings off-site.

The content of the book is very good and interesting. It is a good book with the texture of clones. The characters of the clones with their titles or names individually marked are very clear. I hope those foreshadowings will not turn into traps in the future. There is known information. There will be at least 100 clones in the future, and at least 36 will have their own personality descriptions and independent names. It is very difficult and smooth so far. It may become a magical book in the future.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. Each character has a distinct personality. They are growing step by step and expanding the scope of the organization. They are invincible in front of others. The most important thing is that the author is highly interactive and responds to every sentence. It's super good! There are more special ones every day. I enjoyed reading it. I've been reading this book all day long and I'm halfway through it [laughs][laughs]

The author gives you a piece of advice. The quality of "Seance" must be high, very high. Otherwise, when the protagonist becomes stronger in the later stage, the exception of "a secluded organization that came to the ordinary world with an exception because of the seance" will become inexplicable. At the same time, it is also to give the protagonist an opponent, rather than blindly crushing [eating melon]

Jiang Ci still pisses me off. The commander of a city has no righteousness. Maybe it's because he has different values. He ruined a city for his family. Alas, no wonder there are so many traitors. It's really easy to get rid of him, but the four stars are still stable.

A super nice book! ! ! There is no cp, no heroine, and no vulgar plot. It is very comfortable to watch. Each character is well-shaped and there are no rigid roles. The protagonist also has very upright views.

At first glance, the main body and the clone can still be lively and mature? I thought he was schizophrenic [covering face] or that the clone was someone pretending to be someone else. Why do you have to ask the clone everything? It's only when you make a clone that it looks like the main body [face covering], other than that, it's still a good author, come on.

This article was discovered by the protagonist after he awakened his powers. Every time he levels up, he gets a clone. Each clone has its own distinct personality and different powers. The sentences are relatively fluent. It reads well, and the update frequency is faster than that of ordinary authors.

Very good, well detailed. There are not too many clones but they are enough. In fact, the author can consider making the protagonist and clones have a more "family" atmosphere. Also, if the clones want to be diverse, can the clones have several villains?

I just watched it, it's very interesting and the plot is relatively smooth. Some of the good-looking themes you see on Tomato are not new, but the content is very innovative. I lied to you. I'm about to see the latest chapter.

I like each character very much and have distinct personalities.

I won't say how wonderful it looks, but you can clearly see the author's intentions. It's a bit immature in many aspects, but overall it's considered excellent. This score is a bit too low. Up, up, up, up, up, up, give me up!

It's good-looking (✪▽✪), but for me personally it's not as interesting as some novels that are very interesting when I first read them. The more I read, the more I get tired of them. But this article is very interesting. Every time Lin Chen levels up, he will have a clone with a different personality and appearance. The most important thing is that the author is very active. Basically, most of the review authors have replied. 😘😘😘 And Le Zichen is pretty cool😋😋😋

This book is good to read. The twelve zodiac signs and the protagonist behind the scenes create an organization and live in seclusion behind the scenes!