Online Game: The Ninja World

The stars are either telling how good the book is, or making suggestions to use less AI (don't deny it). Too many adjectives affect listening, and there are sometimes first-person and sometimes third-person perspectives, which affects listening. The most important thing in writing is to fix the perspective. Personally, I recommend third person. The writing ideas of this book are still okay, and I read in the comment section that there is too much about reality, because I just saw the game. If this is true, then it is putting the cart before the horse. People who come to listen to or read the book want to see the world of Naruto as the main body, and the real world can be written less.

This is the first time I've seen this way of modifying a game! I hope I can hold on and not collapse

A great book. The main engine has made steady progress step by step. There are traces to follow and it is no exaggeration. Highly recommended by a 10-year old bookworm

The writing is skillful and does not use a lot of repetitive words.

Come on, the subject matter is very good

Combining the ninja world is indeed very interesting, but~ forget it, five stars encourage it

It's getting more and more exciting, worth watching It's a pity that there is too much written about reality, which is a bit verbose

The subject matter is novel and good.

The book is on Tomato. . . What a pity. . . Going to the starting point should be more popular, the writing is good, and the writing power is still there.

I like ninja novels with this kind of story. It takes ninjas out of the scope of Naruto and is more to my taste.