The Lone Star Creator

Creation flow, similar to I Am God, has well-drawn characters. The protagonist Lin Heng is a creator and a father. God's first twelve children have passed away, and God no longer focuses on the Light race. It's not poisonous at the moment, the grass jelly shouldn't be considered as such now, and the food and grass are definitely enough.

It is much better than another creation "historical" poem with a score of 6.0. Although it still looks a bit like a fusion of Chinese and Western, the narrative is smooth and the rhythm is moderate. It is still worth reading.

It's a pretty good book. The main character is the God of Creation. He created the world because he was lonely. He created an intelligent race that is similar to humans (but all of them are golden retrievers), and then watched them develop civilization on the planet. It has magic elements. At the same time, in the creation of the protagonist, the mercy of God is more reflected in the protagonist than the majesty of God. This book is similar to Qidian's "I Am God", but it lacks some mythology and epic feel (but this book is free 😎) In short, if you like creation stories, you can take a look. You will have a different experience compared to the creation stories commonly found on Tomato now.

After reading it, it is qualified as a plain article, but not qualified as a creation article. The main reason for failure is that the timeline is too long, but the rest is okay. Let's talk about the shortcomings. At present, there are only light people, so what is the subsequent development? Is it a single development or the development of all races? Is there any difference between the 10,000 light descendants created and the subsequent naturally born light descendants? Or the difference? If it is the development of all races, then isn't the stakes for Guangyi a bit high? After all, all kinds of blessings can be strengthened by the moon. If it is the development of all races, the light people will be the mainstream, and the others will be vassals. This does not meet the standards of the development of all races. It mainly depends on how the author writes it. Let me talk about my personal thoughts. There is a difference between the 10,000 light descendants created and the subsequent naturally born light descendants. As time goes by and the number of descendants increases, the initial bloodline will become thinner and thinner, and the physical appearance will become closer and closer to that of modern people. This is also in line with the difference in how the protagonist treats his children at the beginning. For the protagonist, the first ten light descendants are his own children, and the other light descendants will basically not even look at them. Secondly, the worldview is a Western fantasy, so the mainland's light race is destined to break out in a world-class war, which can also be regarded as a civil war of racial conflicts. From then on, the protagonist and other created gods lived in seclusion behind the scenes, similar to group portraits. As time passed, the world became godless, and gods became history. There were only some documentary records, until the light race made a fatal mistake, and the protagonist finally woke up. , Even if it is a child created by oneself, but as time goes by, the subsequent light descendants are no longer the original ones, so the protagonist makes up his mind to save the mistakes he made at the beginning and take back those gifts. This will not make the subsequent light descendants destined to be superior to others, but to be on an equal footing with other races. The strength of a race is always earned by oneself and not given by others. At this moment, God is no longer history or legend. I don't know why, but I have a strong premonition that the author's follow-up story is pretty much the same as what I said above 🤦. Author, please give me a shout and see if my premonition is correct. I have also read the newly updated chapters, and I can only say that chapters 86, 87, and 88 brought this king to life, especially the king's self-narration in the mural chapter. I take back what I said at the beginning that the plain writing is qualified. How can this be qualified? There are clearly two brushes in this.

1. To be honest, I don't feel any better so far, especially the first 100 chapters are very bland, just like playing house, and there are only a few battle scenes after the 100th chapter. 2. The behind-the-scenes creation story must either have the epic feel of the creation story, or the behind-the-scenes creation story, but obviously I don't feel either way now. 3. The author is recommended to refer to the behind-the-scenes highlights of the book "I Transformed into a Planet and I Was Discovered by Earthlings". I feel that the highlights of this book are very good, but it is a pity that the author has not updated it. When I first read the title of the author's book, I thought it was similar to this. This is why I gave it four stars, because I prefer the behind-the-scenes creation question. 4. "After Evolving from an Eagle to an Angel, I Defeat the Gods", I feel that the early stage of this book has a very epic feel, and the later stage is full of matryoshka answers. I feel that if I can write about ten thousand races fighting for hegemony, it would be quite cool. 5. I also feel that there are too few gods in this world, and according to the two rules set by the protagonist, if the three gods can manage the world well, then there will definitely be no large-scale war, and it will be difficult to write epic thoughts. 6. It is suggested that the author can add a few more gods. The sky, ocean, and earth are the three main gods. You can add some gods of water, fire, forest, death, etc., And then let the protagonist sleep. It will be difficult to manage the three main gods if there are too many gods. Some gods make believers go to war, and they will be bolder when they find that the protagonist has not intervened. In this way, it can create an epic feeling of all races fighting for hegemony. 7. Finally, if the author can combine the characteristics of the above two books, I think this book will be very beautiful.

The writing is very good, although some parts are still not mature enough. I hope it will get better and better. If you surpass me, you will be a god. That author is the invincible king of bad endings. Yeah, I hope it can be completed well and it is best to write more 😄 😘 👍 😎 [sending heartfelt wishes]

Well, I feel that the biggest problem is that the description is too detailed and does not have an epic feel. It can describe the Spring and Autumn Period now like "I am God", and describe the past history as a scene/word that has not been clearly described in the book. This will give a strong sense of déjà vu. Then there is the fact that the protagonist (currently in the early stages) is like a nanny rather than a god. Or the protagonist has too much humanity. He has spent hundreds of millions of years in space, but he still has a lot of humanity. Why do you think a person can still retain enough humanity after hundreds of millions of years? Finally, the protagonist's goal gives me the same feeling (my goal is the emotion of the stars and the sea). It's too um~ too purposeful. Being purposeful doesn't mean it's bad, but it's a civilized tone that is set too early and there is no drama/conflict (I think this is the reason why this book can only be written in detail, there is no room for water) The progress of civilization in this book is so slow that it's easy to get stuck writing it. To This book is actually very good. I compared it with "I am God". I cannot ask a free writer to write the quality of a platinum writer. The three-dimensional characters described by the author, the ups and downs of the plot, and the coherence of the article are all very good. Five-star praise, support good book authors

It's really beautiful. God has divinity and also the humanity that he used to have as a human being. And his ten children are all good representatives of humanity, allowing the protagonist's divinity to be completely covered and no longer human. Otherwise, it would be a bit unreasonable to resurrect anyone you want. Really beautiful

Like it very much! When watching it, it gave people a feeling of historical changes and wanting to leave everyone behind, but this is not possible for history, so I felt a little mixed while watching it, but in short, this is the feeling I want! Great author, I hope you can arrange some scenes for the protagonist in the future. The protagonist can walk the earth as a clone, and the protagonist can interact with the three gods or the Lord of the Underworld. I hope the three gods can have more scenes! What is the character background of the three gods and the lord of the underworld? Even if they don't take special care of the "Lightborn" clan under the instructions of the protagonist, what do they think of them? What kind of patronage or favorite offspring do they have? Are there any new stories about the "Lightborn" tribe? All in all, I'm really looking forward to it!

The early viewing feels very smooth, not toxic for the time being, the protagonist has the feeling of a creation god, the creation sand table Liuliang Caowen