If Kotonoha Hadn't Died and Turned into a Ghost

I finally found the double ghost if line😭😭😭Although it's a bit OOC, Kotonoha seems to be a ghost and lazily gives off the feeling of a sickly beauty. At the same time, as long as Tong Mo is around, her brain seems to be disconnected from the server, but as long as Tong Mo leaves here, it is her territory. Overall, it is still very beautiful [shy][like] Why did Tongmo Kotonoha die again in the end? We don't want to see Atonement, really.

Nice! ! ! I cried when I saw it. It was very touching. Although it felt a bit OOC, the author wrote the kind of madness that I wanted that belongs to Tong Qin. The description of emotions is very touching. If you like Tong Qin, you must read it. But as expected, the relationship between humans and ghosts will be wiped out... It's so sad. If there is a next life, they will all live a happy life... [Crying] [crying] [crying] I can't do it anymore... I'm here to review it anyway. I really don't want to see Tong Qin's double death. They're both on the if line. Why can't they be happy... [Crying] [crying] [crying] Tong Motui doesn't want to watch Atonement... I'll give it 2 stars in the later stage, it's better in the early stage [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes]

Oh my God, the whole family of three are crazy 😋‼ ️Kotonoha becomes crazy after becoming a ghost and feels a bit OOC. People who can't accept it can avoid lightning. But from my point of view, this is normal. After most people become ghosts, they will forget their memories of the human period, leaving only obsessions. Just like Yiwozuo, the obsession is to become stronger. Kotonoha's obsession is Inosuke, and the source of her power comes from her desire to protect her children. Oh my god, so crazy‼ ️ I feel like it's quite normal for the two of them to die in the ending. It's reasonable and unexpected. [Chigua] After all, the breath of the sun is not a joke. If they didn't die, human society would not be finished. This ending feels pretty good. Let's be good people as a family of three in the next life.

The early stage is really good, Tong Qin Wu Dao is very sweet, especially the setting of the evil couple, I really love it. Kotonoha can finally be happy in the fan work, but in the later stage it becomes a bit blurry and deviated from the original work. It feels like it has nothing to do with it, but it is already a fairy. It's great to work hard! [Laughs] I've almost finished reading it. I'll give it three stars after chapter 15. The first part is really good. After reading the last part, it's very scary [crying], but the writing is still good.

Just one word looks cool! ! ! If you like the good-guy ending of Demon Slayer, don't watch it. But I don't really care about this, so it just looks very good. Aren't they an evil couple? In the end, he was still beaten to death by the protagonist group. Moreover, the pig redeemed itself and 666 readers were unhappy! ! !

Reading this fanfic also fulfills the fantasy of Kotonoha turning into a ghost and being with Tomo. It was okay in the early stage, but it was so brutal later on that they all died. Although the character setting was a bit OOC, it was well written.

It looks good. This kind of contrast may sound ooc, but it's really good-looking.

I read this book in one day and felt a lot. When Kotonoha finally exposed herself, I shed tears. I didn't know why. I knew how sinful she was, but I couldn't help but sigh for her. Inosuke, go forward, your mother who loves you most will always stand behind you

This book is really good! Lazy people are sincere! Tongmo and Kotonoha are simply an evil couple! ! It's really beautiful! A family of three! I can't do it anymore! It's really super, super, super good-looking!

I'm not a human machine, I'm not a human machine, I'm not a human machine, I'm not a human machine, I'm not a human machine

Please don't let Kotonoha Mommy die, please let Momomo Kotonoha Mommy and Inosuke's family be happy (^o^)o

It's very beautiful, and the section of Infinite City also shocked me very much. From an objective point of view, it's also very, very, very, very, very beautiful. Why can't I just say it's very beautiful, because the author is only a primary school student, so I can't quite read it. If there are experts out there, can you fill it in?

The writing of this article is very good, but it is very sad. I cried many times (maybe because my tear level is low). Although the final ending is that the protagonist team wins, it is acceptable, but I still hope that the author can write a few extra stories. I have seen too much sadism, and I want to eat something sweet. When I read the end, everyone in the comment area felt that they were cheated. When I saw it at the time, I thought everyone was so cute☺️Finally, I wish the author more and more people will read this article, and I hope the author's article will become more and more popular!

The character of Kotonoha who turned into a ghost has really changed a lot, I like it [Adoration]

Is this the author's own design? The three lunatics are so good-looking

It looks like a pure evil person, but it should be cleared up in the end. I don't like to be cleared up, so I quit.

The motherly love of Kotonoha is clearly written. Although it is a bit oo c, it is still delicious ❤️

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This is my most, most, most favorite book, but one thing I don't like is that Tongmo was killed in the end, Kotonoha jumped off a cliff and blew herself up for the sake of the child, and Inosuke was left alone and turned back to an ordinary person. At the end, I really cried, and no one criticized me anymore in the end.

Wow, the fried chicken looks great

Bad people are really the best to be beaten! ! ! ! ! ! It's not OOC at all when written in big letters

It makes me so happy to see this family, but it's just a little too little.

This one is also very awesome. Although it is a bit OOC, it is very delicious.

Oh my god, my god, it's so beautiful. Come on [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I really like it [adoration][adoration]

It's really beautiful. This setting is so cool.

It's so beautiful. I like it very much. It's really well written.

I cried when I read it. The author wrote it very well and the content was very touching [crying]

The rice cooked by the teacher is very delicious

Why does it feel like Kotonoha's character after becoming a ghost is very similar to Inosha_?

Uh, you're awesome, teacher. Uh, that's so awesome. I love you, teacher.