I'm Not a Superstar, but I'll Die If I Don't Debut

There are 62 chapters in progress. The early writing was very messy and jumpy. ①In Chapter 1, the male protagonist talks to the SS, but the SS's dialogue is not written, which is very confusing. ② "Double quotation marks" are used in dialogues, and "double quotation marks" are also used in many places' psychological activities, and it is difficult to tell which one is which. ③ Chapter 14 ["Ryusuke. You..."] Starts here. It is written very quickly and messily. It lacks a lot of content. It feels like the content is in the author's mind but he cannot write it out. ④Chapter 33 is about writing a play within a play, but the actor's lines mention the male protagonist's name twice. This should be the name of the role played. ⑤The transition from scene A to point B, as well as the jump from reality to memory, are very abrupt and without any warning, thus adding to the chaos of the novel. All in all, the front part is very confusing, but because the subject matter is novel and the show within the show is so interesting, I have watched so many of them. The problems in the front are reduced a lot in the latter, but ⑤ has not improved. I hope the chapters will be revised (especially Chapter 1), otherwise it will be a pity for this book. Looking forward to the follow-up, recommend, don't cheat, don't be unfinished, finish the review 👍

Halfway through, there may be some drama at the beginning. For example, although he is from a Korean entertainment background, he does not pay much attention to the titles of seniors and seniors, and there is actually someone who calls the director by his first name. ? (What does it mean?) But the two scripts written later are very good. The depth of the plot, the emotional rendering, and the interesting plot are all very good. They are very enjoyable to watch. The author will make some typos, and I feel that after a few chapters, the author will automatically forget to set the Chinese and Korean settings and switch repeatedly to the Chinese and Korean backgrounds. If you can tolerate a little bit of this, then this is still a work worth watching. The semi-growth type is quite enjoyable, and the protagonist's character is also rich in connotation.

The theme of "Flying Kiss" is very novel. It was originally from South Korea, and the acting career started at the age of 8 or 9. It allows readers to feel more growth and changes, or to see the world from a child's perspective (although I have experienced it many times). I have a very upright perspective, and three updates a day is not much. "Flying Kiss" Although I don't know if those movies have prototypes, but the overall atmosphere of the language can be felt through the screen.

Big, I like it so much. Even if you stopped updating for 2 months, I like it so much. Can you please not leave?

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It's a cool novel about the entertainment industry. It's cool, but it's bland, but the rhythm is comfortable. Let's talk about the character first. The protagonist, who has been reincarnated four times, is a bit eccentric and has a strong sense of class. However, because of his young age after rebirth, these have all been transformed into cuteness. The arc of the character... The writing is cool, but the characterization is a little thin. Apart from the protagonist, there are no supporting characters that are impressive. The foreshadowing of the good brother is hidden too far away, so the impression of him is almost gone the second time I see him. In short, food and grass +1 ... Well, now it is possible that the problem with this book has come out. Now is not the time to talk about the plot. The top priority is to change the various random settings and timelines in the article... What does it mean to be a ten-year-old fourth-grade elementary school student who is now 15 years old? What is it to be a 10-year-old second-grade elementary school student who is 180cm tall? Seven years have passed now, but our protagonist has just turned ten. Did my brain go crazy when I was writing the article... Or is this actually the world view of Conan?

To sum up, the punctuation is a bit messy, but you can probably still make out who said what. And the subject matter is relatively new, so I watched it with great interest. After that, I hope the author will work hard to update and continue to improve the shortcomings. Come on!

It's very interesting to watch now, but the update is discontinued. Please update, QAQ author. Come on.

There were some expression problems in the early stage and it was very unsmooth. Secondly, I feel that the protagonist is too awesome (maybe I didn't express it clearly enough). A ten-year-old child is both a master composer and an acting genius, and then he can give accurate methods when hearing other people's voices, whether it's singing or dancing. It feels a bit distorted to me. After that, it's a standard cool article. The pace is very comfortable. The cool part may be that others praise the protagonist and the protagonist's various achievements. In short, it can give me the motivation to pursue it.

I really liked it, it was a great read, but there was always a feeling that the protagonist would be burned out. Highly recommended. I hope there won't be any setbacks later. It's a great article.