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It's quite good-looking, it's a growth style of writing, and it's getting better and better. At that time, I discovered this article when I was reading dozens of chapters. After reading it, I felt that it was verbose, saying one sentence over and over again, and it also had a strong AI flavor. However, because this type of fandom is the only one that can be read, I decided to read it and see if there would be any changes. I read it again today, and it has reached 160. It feels so good. It's really beautiful to me. After entering the Sea of ​​Stars, I feel that all the shortcomings I found when reading the novel are gone. The author has made great progress👍🏻The plot is also super smooth, and I also think the images are very beautiful. What I am most satisfied with is that the author arranged many beautiful men to admire the heroine, but the writing is not greasy, and our heroine is not wronged at all. It is beautiful and enjoyable to watch. I finally understand what the original novel is like, and it is so refreshing. Also, cut off all the peach blossoms of 🌰 and turn them into secrets, which is so refreshing. We 🌰 are so beautiful, strong, and pure, falling in love and getting married with Wan'er ☺️ What a great author, I'm going to go to xhs and lof to recommend it to other people, you must keep writing it, I'm sure if others don't read it! What's going on? I posted three times suggesting that new chapters should be limited to 300 chapters to prevent delisting. All the comments were swallowed. I can't even see them. Forget it, I'll post them again in the book review. I hope the author will seriously consider it.

Awesome, the front may be a bit boring, but the back is very interesting, okay [laughs] The original characters also have their own characteristics, but the ancestor who loves to laugh is a little unlucky [almost crying] The author didn't write Xuan Gu without OOC, it was quite restored, and he loves backstabbing, but without these, Xuan Gu is not Xuan Gu, and Xiao Zui is not Xiao Zui [Blowing kiss]

Beautiful! I really recommend it. It has broadened the original work, the plot is more original, the story setting is logically harmonious, and the characters are fully described. After entering the sea of ​​chaos in the later stage, it took off all the way. The writing is getting better and better, especially the rewriting of some of the original female characters. Hehe, I have already seen so many peach blossoms that I am not happy. The heroine has become a good best friend and helps each other to advance and retreat. It is so cool! Looking forward to the sequel!

I read the first part day and night, it's very good, and it's not an exaggeration to say it's the top of the fandom. From a useless handyman to a sect's abandoned son and then to flying across the sea of ​​​​stars, the author describes the protagonist's life in detail, the skills he cultivates and the dangerous journey along the way. He combines the second creation with the original work very cleverly. The most shocking thing is that he was imprisoned by the transformed demon to fight back and betray him. The text and plot are all top-notch! The only shortcoming is that the emotional line is relatively blunt, especially the plot of Han Yuan's betrayal. She easily colludes with the prison in order to maintain the stability of her current life. If the protagonist is really a canary and wants to escape, this child will be a knife in the heart. When she found out, she couldn't believe it. The reaction was reasonable, but it was not written too much and it was a bit vague. There are relatively few personal epiphanies and feelings of growth, and they only become more lively and vivid in the interaction with Qing Yi (when he was as heartbroken as being struck by lightning during his final betrayal).

When I love mortals the most, I always think about what it will be like to be in this world. I want to help Han Li, but I am afraid of destroying his opportunity. This film is very good. The protagonist has his own opportunity setting, and the conceived practice method has a lot of feeling. There is no sense of disobedience in the integration. It does not rely on Han Li, it is not a pendant, and it really feels like walking side by side. Come on, author.

I was completely hooked as soon as I opened it. The plot is so compact and the twists and turns are so endless that I even forgot about being sleepy. Even if my eyelids are twitching or it's dead of night, I can't bear to put down the page, I just want to catch up to the ending in one go. The writing is vivid and engaging, and the more you read, the more addictive you become. Anyone who understands the joy of staying up late and chewing it all knows that it is worth it if you close your eyes!

Yes, the blogger can add some powerful natal instruments for the heroine, suitable for women, such as musical instruments such as Guqin, Pipa is the most suitable, Pipa is the most suitable instrument for music cultivation and killing. If the heroine travels in modern times, modern music must not be found in the world of immortality. House of Flying Daggers is most suitable for Pipa Playing can produce greater lethality. As a natal instrument, a musical instrument is suitable for a woman's elegance and can kill enemies. It is most suitable. If this book is not suitable for musical instruments, there can be a heroine whose natal instrument is the pipa, and there are other magical instruments to assist such as the umbrella sword, which is the most perfect combination of offense and defense. [Smile][Smile]

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I just saw about a dozen or twenty of them, they are pretty good.

The author's writing is good and his writing style is very good. I hope the author can keep updating it.

That's awesome, the answer is not based on ordinary people's plot, but based on your own conditions! This is awesome

It's okay, interesting. Practice hard. The five spiritual roots of mortals. Cultivation is too difficult

[Like] [Like] [Like] I hope to read the novel. At least there is some follow-up to follow up with Lao Mo, come on. I can't get it without a few thousand chapters [laughing]

It's really beautiful. I like it very much.

It's pretty cool. Han Qin is cautious enough and works hard.

Come on, the protagonist is very sane and good-looking

It's quite interesting. You have to keep writing and update it quickly. Read the original novel and then think about the following plots. I think it will be the chapter of "Looking to the Sea of ​​Stars" and "Returning to Tiannan". Come on

Good. It's rare to find someone who can understand it and has clear and clear ideas.

It's pretty, nothing bad about it

Beautiful and innovative! ! ! Come on big When will the Chaotic Star Sea dungeon be opened? Looking forward to it

Yes, you must survive. Please support me with five stars.

A girl more cautious than Han Laomo

Not bad. It's not toxic at the moment. I hope it can be stabilized. Come on.

It's okay, I'm looking forward to the chaotic sea of ​​stars [blowing kisses]

The cover of the book really looks like the new Nangong Wan image