A Grass-type Pokémon Master's Ranch Story

Finally, it is tied. The male protagonist is Daiwu, and he is updated steadily. He is still such a sensible author, and the number of updates every time is guaranteed. The daily writing is good, and the combat writing is also very comfortable, but I feel that there are a few emotional lines in the middle that seem a bit stiff, and Dawu is a bit OOC, but it is good enough. Is the author using AI? I suggest you can use it, but it does not support multiple uses, because the AI ​​is really stiff. The setting of the heroine by the author is already great, and the descriptions are very good and soulful. If you rely too much on AI, you will lose this soul. Keep up the good work, keep it up! Can you please reveal the emotional line? Emotions can be ambiguous or long-lasting, with a sense of ritual or a sense of crisis, but it is best to be sweet rather than sad (I have eaten too many knives recently, so I came here to watch some warm daily life 🤦)

The author writes well. It's been a long time since I've found a Pokémon novel with a female protagonist that suits my taste. The cultivation novels I've seen before were too boring and I lost interest after reading a few chapters. This one is not only about cultivation but also about battles. It's very interesting [Blow kiss]

I really like this feeling that gradually develops into a warm feeling, but I feel like I missed seeing it. I imagine a picture of the ranch at a moment∀, and I am very curious about what the layout of the ranch is [full] Okay, there are quite a few chapters in the back that are like writing an essay, with a total score and a general structure, and the ending is lyrical and looks forward to the future, and how old is the heroine? She is so mature, stable, and calm. I am very curious about how such a heroine falls in love. I feel that her lover should be the land and Pokémon. A baby with such a personality always feels that there is a wall when getting along with other people in the book. They are just friends and casual acquaintances. Ah, how outrageous! How do you feel? It's all about the heroine's highlights. Yeah, but after all, it's a heroine story, so I can understand it. But it may be that the heroine grows up too fast and Qinghe is too immature. She always feels that she is completely overwhelmed by poverty alleviation, whether in terms of thoughts, abilities, or emotional intelligence. They are obviously good treasures. Why should we focus on this aspect of the description? Qinghe has more support from the family than the heroine. Why does the role of grandfather have almost no role? [Pause face ] Except for the heroine, who is calm and collected, the female characters in this book are almost all other female characters, best friends, employees, and champion fans. Women have many kinds of personalities, some are introverted and calm, some are lively but careful. Please allow women to be diverse 🥺 and not just one-sided. Okay, okay, I said it looks weird, but it turns out the author is a man. I see. Difference in perspective.

🥰🥰 This fanfic is a love letter to all Pokémon lovers. It carries the love for Pokémon and outlines the purest adventure world with gentle words. The protagonist's journey is ordinary and great. There are no earth-shattering achievements, only the little things accompanying Pokémon, but they are enough to touch people's hearts. The author uses delicate brushwork to write about the beauty and warmth of the Pokémon world, awakening our childhood admiration and yearning for elves. There are no complicated plots, no bloody plots, only original intention, love and companionship. After reading the whole book, I was healed. It is worth reading for all Pokémon fans. The characters' emotions are delicate and not pretentious, the daily Pokémon are super sweet, and it's super fun to follow them! 😘😘😘😘

The style is warm and healing, the heroine is a very gentle person, and the Pokémon are also very powerful. The emotional line is thousands of miles long, and the water flows slowly. It is not dramatic, but it penetrates and moisturizes things silently. But to be honest, even in the current timeline, Daigo has just obtained the key to super evolution and he will not only have this strength. It feels that this season has been seriously weakened.

The idea is okay. It's just that AI tastes quite good.

The overall structure is relatively soothing. Not pushing too much into one thing. A class development system written normally. But one thing I have to complain about is the male protagonist. I have not read the original work. I feel that from various comments, I can feel that the male protagonist in the original movie should be gentle and knowledgeable. But in the later stages, especially when the heroine wanted to meet the hero's parents for the first time, I felt that some of the hero's behavior and the family's behavior were OOC. Because to be honest, on such a big day when we meet for the first time, do you think you would bring an outsider in? Probably not. Even if there is a last-minute invitation, I can reply here by saying, "I'm sorry, there are some special things going on today, and it's temporarily inconvenient to refuse." But I agreed, what's the concept? No matter how urgent it is, I will refuse it unless it is an urgent matter. As for drinking tea, do you think he is anxious? Therefore, it is unnecessary to conflict for the sake of conflict and completely change the character. Because if you follow up and say that if we meet again, there will be no problem if there is such a conflict. But you shouldn't arrange it like this in the first scene, as it will appear that the whole family's personality has completely collapsed. And I haven't seen the subsequent development yet. I'll check it out right away if there is any conflict. But I'm just going to put in a bit of trouble here. Under normal circumstances, I would definitely refuse. This is first of all common sense that any ordinary family should have. It was my first time meeting, especially my first time meeting my parents. There are some weird ones, or there are some, just like the family ones, he will bring his seven aunts and eight aunts together for the first time. This is true, and I admit that such a situation exists in our reality, but more of an ordinary family will only meet your parents, and then if you have time, get along almost the same, and then meet your family again, this is the order. He would definitely not say yes in the first meeting. Even if it is a weird ordinary family, the seven aunts and eight aunts do not include friends, right? And this should be a sign of respect for people, right? His last-minute offer is more important than the one I booked long ago, isn't it? Obviously before this, the male protagonist's parents were looking forward to it and attaching great importance to the female protagonist, so they had to come up with such a thing~·

It looks good, the author's writing is very graphic, the farm life is very warm, and the battles really fit the Pokémon world. I have read half of the updated chapters. Dahei and Erhei are old employees. I am worried for them. Their treatment is not at the same level as other Pokémon. They have to patrol day and night and serve as the first line of defense. The casualty rate is considered a very high job. It turns out that the author seems to have forgotten them and they have not evolved so far.

No need to say more about the duration and time. No skipping chapters. Can be expressed. The writing is delicate, true and interesting. And it allows readers to be immersed in the scene. Shows us a real, interesting and beautiful world of elves

Where does the mega evolution of Menas come from? After being popularized in the comment area and a bit AI-oriented, I finally felt a slight sense of disobedience when reading the article. I hope the author writes the article based on objective research and writes his own characteristics.