Pirate: the Succubus of the Sea? Being Chased Down Means It's Annoying

I don't understand why this book has such a low rating and I almost missed it. The writing is very to my liking, and one point will be deducted for the part before the beginning of the main text. From time to time, it is a bit of a running narrative, which is uncomfortable to read, but it is very good after the main text begins. It can be said that it is gradually getting better. I particularly like the portrayal of Elizabeth, she is 10,000 times more lovable than that brat named Lufei Wang! However, there are some small bugs from time to time. For example, Elizabeth did not hear the red-haired inner words, which does not match the previous description. I don't know if the author forgot about it after writing high or something.

The writing is very good, the author's idea is very novel, there is no system or messy training system, and the fighting style is very pure and pirate-like. The protagonist eats the Yamata no Orochi fruit and the dark fruit. How to eat the double fruits is also explained. It is a new way that I have never seen before. Ps: Not the author's trumpet [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

To be honest, the author should try not to write about indigenous people when writing fan fiction, even if it is about unsystematic time travel. Because many people read fanfics because of regrets, hoping to make up for their regrets through the creations of these fanfic authors. Moreover, Tomato🍅 is famous for its cool writing, and there are also a lot of cool writing by fans. I can tell this book has a good idea and its own style. I gave it 5 stars and hope to keep up the good work.

I think it's pretty good, at least it doesn't overwhelm the combat power. The author has his own understanding of pirates. Maybe the only disadvantage is that the protagonist is a complete native, and the overall plot direction is very different from the original work (I don't think it's a big deal). Oh, and Xia Qi was kidnapped. This probably touched the point of most people (me too, but the author made it clear later that there was nothing wrong), but many people just gave up without reading the rest. The author had better change it here (personal suggestion) [Thinking]

After reading a few chapters, there was a "time travel" tag, but it didn't look like a time traveler.

Very interesting pirate fanfic

Come on, brother, it's okay

It's okay, I feel okay so far [eating melon]

I feel okay, Momo can help me die.

I couldn't help but come here to rate more than 20 chapters. I don't know what will happen next. Please support me here. Look at my rating records and you will know the value of my praise. Chapter 40, there is no water injection at the moment, it is very interesting, comparable to other fics with one or two hundred chapters, don't miss it

It's a very interesting pirate book, I hope the author will work hard!

More in line with the original work, the plot is exciting

I highly recommend this book, it is 99% rare among Pirates fandoms. Very interesting, highly recommend Jiujiucheng Rare Things

I think it's pretty good

Well written, five stars [like]

It's good-looking. If you like reading and writing, it's okay.

Looks good, come on

You can read it if you are in a book shortage

Very interesting novel

A pretty good novel

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad, very pretty

It's okay, but it's a pity that it's discontinued.

Isn't it worth eating Yamata no Orochi? Eat the green dragon fruit,

Just blame Momonosuke [angry][angry][angry]

The author will update quickly

Not bad, the backend is quite interesting.

The fact that Momonosuke was made into a human pig deserves a five-star [smile]

Killing Momonosuke and killing the Deserter King are all worthy of five stars from me [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

You can really do it, I personally think it's very good