Warhammer: My Father Could Not Have Been Removed from the Empire

OK However, the characterization of some big scenes is not very good. There are problems with the connection of various scenes. The characterization of characters is sometimes too shallow, especially the connection of plots. This issue is a top priority. I hope the author can write better and better (I quite like the interaction between two people, I hope there can be more four stars encouragement

Shennong Very good Warhammer article. The left and right hands of the original body are a very novel perspective. The author's writing style is relaxed and depressing, making it not too depressing to watch, nor too frivolous. I hope the author will update more, come on [laughs][like] Watched it again. If the original body and the protagonist are regarded as a whole, then there is no problem with the author's description method. But if the original body and the protagonist are regarded as two individuals, then the scenes between the protagonist and the original body will be too thin. The transformation of the same protagonist is a bit vague. It only involves the process of the protagonist, an ordinary person, transforming into a qualified warrior. Maybe we can just change the protagonist's initial role?

I feel that the current role of the protagonist is like Luther in The Lion King and Typhon in Mortarion. They are both the first friends and guides that the original body meets, and they feel like important lieutenants of the original body. The very good Su Yinshou makes my brain spin [Top post][Top post][Top post]

It seems to be a good book so far! I really like the interaction between the protagonist and He-Man. The text is quite graphic, I like it very much! I'm really looking forward to Old Man Huang picking up He-Man later (

The writing is excellent and the rhythm is smooth, and the points that should be ignited can be ignited. There is also the expensive adoptive father aspect of Warhammer. Neta incorporates many elements of other IPs (DC, Honzo San, FGO, 1999, Pseudoman, Angel Engine, etc.) But does not have them. The overall integration is very reasonable, and the stacking of memes is moderate. The author himself also listened to the advice. Overall, it is an excellent book. If the details are more refined, it may be able to compete with the stinky cans of ideas. The princesses of this website are incompetent.

It feels like I read it on QD before. It's well written and the thinking logic is online. The protagonist's three views are upright and not stupid, and he has a good relationship with the original body. The author has his own ideas. There are many moderate plots and rigorous evidence descriptions. I want to update soon. I want to see the daily life of the legion and the exchanges with other legions!

The protagonist's character is instantly switched between a miserable modern man and a berserker with scars all over his body. It's very shocking.

The original body's demonic enhancement is stronger than that of the original body that has not liberated its essence. The original body that has liberated its essence is second only to the Four Peddlers, and the original body that has perfectly liberated its essence can freely enter and exit the subspace. The Eight-Pointed Star of Chaos refers to the realm of subspace power. The classic one is that the Crow King did not change his behavior after liberating his essence. The four vendors are super demons and cannot violate their own rights. Slaanesh does not know how to restrain, Tzeentch cannot suspend change, Khorne can only fight, and Nurgle is even afraid of death. After all, the difference between the three gods and Nurgle is the difference between Fulgrim the Phoenix and Fulgrim the Serpent.

I remember, didn't the Gold Primarch Emperor just stuff them with a bunch of knowledge? Why does it feel like this round body was brain-damaged after hitting the green skin in the subspace? But overall it's pretty good.

It's so fun for me to watch, this is not Warhammer, this is a DC fan wearing Warhammer! (Although there are still FGO, Jin Guqiao and so on) [laughs] By the way, when will the Batman fan support group come? There is currently only one Weilun There are also an average of 6,000 to 9,000 words per piece, which has far surpassed the vast majority of authors! I love you! Okay, now the Novice Village (Chapter 40) has been released

From this point of view, the Eleventh Legion is very suitable for large-scale farming. It can directly cultivate large amounts of gene seeds and then produce space warriors. It can build dome cities or underground city clusters as outposts on various desolate planets of dead worlds that others despise, and slowly spread them out to fill the vacancies between various inhabited systems. It can develop stably by collecting taxes.

Not bad, come on! It is said that the AI ​​can be replaced. I felt that the cover was a bit messy, but the name made me want to come in, so I came in and took a look.

Nice! ! ! Author, please continue writing. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up content of the novel. I hope your works will get better and better [Like][Like][Like]

It's good-looking, one of the few that meets expectations, is cruel and savior, can be related to the original body, and is written in a comfortable world.

Why do I feel that the original body accidentally sucked a few farts when he was born and was watched by fuckers? It's so thoughtful.

Hui is great. This book can be said to be the best article I have ever read.

I give five stars for the first part, but for the second part, I feel like it's not as exciting as it started. For those who like the original body or the novel, it's easy to stop reading in the middle chapters, and then you can't get into it anymore, but the setting and plot at the beginning are still very interesting, so I recommend reading it!

Much better than those vague Warhammer novels. I hope to get into the Empire chapter soon.

Although it's a little missing, the front ones still look pretty good. It's just a little missing. Come on.

It's really nice, but! The update speed is really slow, come on↖(^ω^)↗The author works hard to update! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

The writing is good and the writing is okay.

Just change your name to me and form the Justice League in Warhammer

It was interesting to witness the growth of the original body from the perspective of the people around him for the first time.

Can you update it, bro? If that doesn't work, I'm afraid the only option is to keep books. Alas, the update is really too slow.

Nice! ! ! There is currently a problem: Chapter 11 mentioned that the protagonist Su Yinshou wonders if he can survive? Why does the protagonist have this idea of ​​being immortal?

The writing is quite good so far, but the description of the psychic nature of the Second Primarch is very similar to that of the Black King, but it is not the Black King. I don't know how the author came to terms with it, whether he wanted to become one of the eight-pointed stars or created it himself.

I feel like the author is taking the route of the protagonist, a male mother.

I am a military commander who is not good at words and looks good.

Once a day, don't expect me to say anything nice [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] Full marks——,

The writing is quite to my liking [Chigua] It can be seen that the author really wrote it carefully according to his own preferences.