The Game Is Coming: She Went Crazy in the Male Pornographic Article

Congratulations on discovering a treasure. It is a great article worth reading. The only shortcoming is that it is too short! ! The author will update 300 chapters soon The whole text is female-oriented, swearing is avoided, and most of the main characters are female. It really made me happy to watch it, so praise it. I saw a discussion in the comment area about Li going offline. I hope he doesn't go offline too early. I feel that he is a good introduction in the early stage, and there are also foreshadowings in him. I feel that going offline too early will affect the subsequent plot. In short, author, don't be disturbed by the comment area, you can follow your own outline! However, the details can be dealt with, such as reducing the plot of him jumping around to break the defense. I really don't want to see too much of his face, haha. Then the plot should focus more on portraying the awakening of the female character! ! I'd like to add some comments. It's very, very, very, very good-looking. It's currently tied with no surprises. Sisters, don't worry! It's just too short. The author has updated 3,000 chapters (I was beaten to death by the author). The current world view is slowly unfolding, which is very interesting, but I won't spoil it here. In short, it gets better and better the further you read, and the female characters are not flat. I really like the protagonist's best friend, and the teacher in Yongye O(≧∇≦)O

Everything is good, except that the heroine always sells lilies to other women, don't sell it, don't sell it, this is not a cp lone wolf. Just because I don't want a male protagonist doesn't mean I want to see a female character selling lilies. Isn't it nice to be friends? [Crying][crying][crying]

Although there are only about a hundred chapters, it looks good. There may be some vocabulary that the sisters cannot agree on, but the slightest amount does not affect it at all. The female-oriented angle is quite sharp, and I am a little worried that I will be locked up again if I am not careful, so sisters, don't read the book, read it first and enjoy it first. I didn't give it 5 stars because the author still has room for improvement based on my personal preference. This book can be considered to be mostly narrated from a female perspective and the plot is quite exciting. If you are a sister who reads the book first and reads the review first, you may see the "light point" about the "original male protagonist" like me. I was almost persuaded to leave by the review, but , I'm glad I didn't give up, because in fact there are not many dot characters in the article, and even the dot characters have a sense of existence like a three-dimensional one. They are purely disgusting and trigger the plot, but they are not too instrumental like other works, because almost every dot character is a sister who can find a real existence in the three dimension. This is a manifestation of the author's ability. Moreover, the author has given the heroine a big golden finger. It may not be perfect, but the conflict is reasonable, there is almost no frustration, and it does not appear to be brainless and refreshing. It is quite well balanced. After all, sometimes people don't want to be angry and consume themselves all the time, but just want to have fun, but don't want to be too brainless. This article balances the balance quite well. Of course, I still feel that the author can still improve. The conflict plot is wonderful for women, but it seems that there is no heroine as the main character. In addition to the wonderful narrative of the resistance after being disgusted, the heroine has relatively few interactions with other people in her daily life (although not much). Maybe she is planning to write a lone wolf? Or is it that we haven't reached that part yet? It's shameless to sell U1S1 for hundreds of dollars. The exchange I wrote about one of the people who got a bloodbath was quite exciting. In short, you won't lose money by investing in shares! After finishing the second play, the initial impression is indeed not very good. Maybe it is a novice author, but it can only be said that it cannot quickly attract readers to stay and continue watching. It was not until the hundred chapters, when the author boldly wrote about feminism, that the whole story was brought up. I don't know what the editing process of this platform is, and there is indeed a feeling in the early chapters that I can feel what the author wants to write, but he is hammering here and there. I can only say that the coherence is not good, and it is relatively troublesome to revise. My advice to new readers is that if you listen to the book without reading it carefully before the first hundred chapters, it will have little impact. After the first hundred chapters, the author has improved and the perception has become smoother. At the same time, the story about feminism is getting better and better integrated.

It's okay. You can see that there are lessons to be learned from it, but there are still many shining points. As a refreshing article, it's not bad. One star is deducted because the original male protagonist was too weak, too low-ranked, not qualified as a villain, and not funny as a clown, which made the female protagonist very unhappy when she was a costumed wife, but the number of times was not too many. The male protagonist is a cheap guy, and the villain is the system and the forces behind it that treat the male protagonist as its host. I've only read a little bit, and here's my current thoughts. It would be better if there was an explanation later on what the system is and why the low-grade male protagonist was chosen.

A completely cool article about women, worth reading! 1️⃣ A pure strong woman, no emotional line except friendship, blood pressure friendly, and smooth plot. 2️⃣ Men and women are more friendly than each other. There are male NPC characters that have been introduced to you, and there are also female characters who are colorful and decent villains. The friendship between the heroine and her best friend is really a sisterhood of steel. Best friend, best friend, I like you! 3️⃣ The author is very obedient and will improve the wording in time. He will also have his own ingenuity and ideas. If it is right, keep thinking about it ~ let's not stop! 4️⃣ Words are meaningful. It can be seen that the author sometimes can't help but add some "ideas" when going through the plot. I am surprised that someone is willing to describe those things that can be called "rules and weird stories" so directly, and I also admire them very much. The anger between the lines belongs to the author, but also to me, hers, and them. Their anger will become the force that moves forward, tearing down mountains. I'm looking forward to the ending of this story. Above. I wish you all good health and all the best.

Super pretty! ! ! Although it is an old routine of rebirth, the writing is very exciting. The protagonist and supporting characters are very exciting. I am looking forward to the next plot. It will be updated very quickly. There are no degrading words in the whole text. The copy of the movie is also directly touching people's hearts. However, I feel that the connection between some concepts and the copy is a bit stiff. However, you may have to be prepared to be scolded and your rating will be very low (maybe some people who break the defense will do this). I will always support Oreo!

Strongly praised, the story focuses on a strong female character and does not charm any male character. The female protagonist is a lone wolf and always pursues force. The other female characters are also well treated and fleshed out. Author I will follow you. . . . . . 😭😭😭😭🥰🥰🥰🥰

There is only one important supporting character who is a fake male protagonist (he died in more than 200 chapters), and the others are all women. The male-female ratio is 8:2. There are basically no lyrics about women (the author changed them very quickly), and it gets 4 stars for girlfriends. The protagonist has a golden finger, is decisive in doing things, and has benevolence towards his fellow humans. In the middle of the story, some realistic stories will be interspersed. It can be seen that the author is thinking about the real society (but it can also be seen that the author's mental state is not very good🥲🥲 The only flaw is that there are too many psychological descriptions of "·" and they all have silly clown ideas, which makes it a bit annoying after watching it for a long time. Fortunately, it goes offline pretty quickly. Overall, it's a very good heroine's monster-fighting and upgrading stream. I hope the author can complete it smoothly🙏

At first I was attracted by the theme of game invasion, but after reading it I realized that the author is particularly brave in writing. The core of many copies is to protect women's rights. The essence is to tear apart those hypocritical male pornographic routines and resist injustice and prejudice. Judging from the plot layout, the story has a neat rhythm and the copy design is unconventional. It has the tension of a refreshing novel and the weight of reality. In the subject matter, seeing the author speak out for women so directly is brave and has a sense of justice. After being reminded by readers, she also carefully revised the wording and tried her best to eliminate stigmatizing expressions against women. But some comments are really speechless, saying that male characters should speak RNV vocabulary to fit the character. Creation is the author's choice. Since he is determined to destigmatize, there is no need to use character as an excuse. There are countless ways to create a rude, unappropriate character that doesn't require the use of degrading words to support women. Suitable alternatives abound. I want to say to Maoao, please believe in yourself. You are doing something particularly great and courageous. By correcting those prejudiced words, you are also quietly popularizing science and passing on ideas to more sisters, and awakening more women little by little. This road may still be long, but as long as there is light ahead, it will not be long. Every corrected word, every brave voice, opens a new outlet for women. Ignore those old and narrow-minded voices and just stick to what you think is right. We have been standing side by side with you, waiting for a spark to start a prairie fire and for the day of true equality and freedom to come. [Love]

Advantages: 1. Female orientation (some expressions are incorrect and the author will correct them) 2. There are no words that insult women (in pursuit of reality, the male character does not have to call his father, but he also does not use words that insult women, unlike some post-apocalyptic time travel stories where same-sex marriageable people are piled together, but for the sake of reality, the male character must call his mother) 3. The story is interesting and worth reading just by itself. Disadvantages: 1. There are too few women in NPCs (non-important roles) (just find some fault) I have already written the reason, please shut up.

It's a very good novel, but there are some bad reviews that pop up occasionally. Don't ignore them, because those reviews are made from the perspective of men and those with vested interests.

Maybe it's because there are few reviews so the score is low. Let me make up for the good reviews. The heroine is smart and decisive, the writing flow is interesting, and the plot is interesting and interesting. The main heroine is refreshing. I haven't seen any bad points so far. Although the original male protagonist has been jumping to the present and is still alive, he is not aggrieved at all. It is better to let him die directly. Said, it is better to continue to suppress him and now he has to make a living by selling leather drums. The outstanding ones are basically female characters with good reviews. The heroine and various sisters can take a bite, and Boss Shen I have a big bite. The author updates very quickly, but it is still not enough to watch. Knock on the bowl and wait for more

The beginning is really amazing, the setting of the heroine and the anti-routine plot are very touching, and it is very enjoyable to watch the whole way. But starting from the middle period, the focus of the plot felt a little shifted, and a lot of detailed descriptions of the relationships between female characters were added. Although I can understand some of the concepts I want to express, it did dilute the clean and neat upgrade rhythm of the main line. Personally, I came here because of the "no CP" label, and I'm more looking forward to watching the pure plot of the heroine focusing on her career and killing everyone. Whether it's the emotional line of men or women, it's actually not my cup of tea. It's good to be a partner who fights side by side. It's a bit tasteless now, and it's a pity to abandon it. I really miss the fun and adventurous feeling of the game at the beginning. Just personal preference, cheers to the author.

The female supporting actor surnamed Su writes that a family that values ​​boys over girls is not about loving men but loving themselves. It's quite shocking. I understand what the author wants to express, but it's not necessary. Moreover, men are generally emotionally lacking, and their basic interests should be what their hearts want. There are basically no other surprises, no lyrics about disobedient women, and the plot is quite readable. A certain Aotian Damai Special Mai is very funny, and occasionally the transitions are a bit stiff in some places. Overall recommended.

Nice! What is more distinctive is that there are quite a few sections discussing issues between men and women, and there are very few words that insult women, which I feel very comfortable with. I say "rarely" because I remember that there was a paragraph where a male villain was saying insulting words about women. The author's point of view was something like "he himself is just a bad guy and has no such awareness." So he didn't change it. I agree with the author (I'm not very good at this aspect, but if a passing sister raised objections to the insulting words in the original article, the author will definitely see it and reply or even modify it. It's good. There are two controversial points. One is that some of the heroines acting with the villains are too coquettish, and the other is that the heroine has no CP but has ambiguous scenes with other women. I have finished reading the latest chapter. Actually, these two points are not very serious? What made me uncomfortable in the scenes where I played the Beloved Wife was not the heroine but the brain circuit of the villain opposite. This ambiguity did not reach the point of touching anything. It was just to describe the sincere relationship between them and what subsequent actions they took to save each other for this relationship. In short, I think it is quite reasonable. However, it is a theme about the fusion of games and the real world. There are about 200 chapters now and it is only a sign of fusion. It has not reached the point of complete fusion. It is still written quite slowly. If I can keep writing, I may be able to write a thousand chapters. I am looking forward to it. Regarding the game, the increases and decreases in character values are clearly calculated, the cooldown descriptions of skill effects are also very clear, the heroine has a hang-up but is not exaggerated, and the plot development of the grind process is clearly explained. Everything about this is to my liking. I really like it. All in all, the plot so far is very interesting and I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

I really think it's okay. The male protagonist is not dead around Chapter 130, so I'm a little disappointed, but it seems like a good pg [laughs]. The male protagonist's opportunities are in line with the trend of systematic gold fingers, and it's acceptable. Men have their own grind. The female protagonist teacher can be seen here as a common NPC, but a bit thin. It is a bit too easy for a rather exclusive group to let down their guard. The robot is also thin. At a time when the combat power was generally around level 10, did it not take away the level 78 combat power? I am very confident in myself... In the follow-up, it seems that the two worlds will pour supplies and support Blue Star. Do you still need a heroine after the special bureau has come out? Anyway, I personally feel that there is a difference between personal power and what the country is willing to do. Finally, there is the feminism mentioned in the introduction. I personally think this theme is very good! The teacher also pays attention to the wording when writing. The story is also a real dilemma, but it still feels a bit abrupt, as if there is no reason to force it in. Also, the description of the awakening plot [crying] The teacher's writing is very real... So real that I have no desire to read... I have always been humiliated and resisted being slapped in the face. I really only like being slapped in the face. The teacher's writing is really good, but I want to watch the heroine to watch some exciting plots! Come on, teacher! ! !

Well written and thought provoking. It feels like the author has been immersed in women's awakening and satire on the authoritarian society after writing hahh. Suddenly I realized that the author was very clever in setting the article in the world of male porn. It seemed to be about the world of male porn, but in fact...

The beginning is amazing, the writing is very good, and the plot is not stiff (it shows the true face of some traditional male videos) I started watching it from the very beginning. Many of the plots are very interesting and hilarious. The heroine is like a clever little girl. She laughs while watching it (laughing point is so low that I can't stand it hahaha). The heroine Lin Xizhou is a natural self-reliant person. She is not willing to stick to support, and is not willing to be controlled and become a puppet. If others treat her well, she will definitely remember and repay them, and if they are malicious to her, they will return double the favor. Then there is Jiang Wan, a peerless friend. This character is definitely the best supporting character created in the book. He values love and righteousness, and his friendship (crossed out) and love with Zhou Zhou (it's like filling your mouth with candy🍬Wan Porridge 99) (Of course there are also shortcomings) I'll talk about it later.

The heroine is actually very decisive. This book can be said to be a female-oriented book, with a large proportion of female characters. In many places, it can be seen that the author wants to express his own views on some things. However, the introduction of some places, such as the two modern copies, seems to be completely for a plate of vinegar and dumplings. I personally think it is a bit abrupt. Drama works are often used to express one's thoughts, but I personally feel that the words in novels are often too didactic for the sake of expression, and it is easy for people to lose immersion. Generally speaking, the writing is okay.

All I can say is that it is an absolutely delicious meal. There are no words that insult women, and the words next to those words that stigmatize women have been changed. There are many female characters, and most of the highlights are on female characters. The heroine is decisive in killing, not the Holy Father.

I have been following this novel for a long time, it is very interesting. But because I watched it a little early, and there weren't many more, I thought I'd save up and watch it again. Why did it show that the update was interrupted when I opened it today? What's wrong? This is Already know that. I hope the author maintains good health

Nice! The heroine has always been the strongest! Basically all the strong people in it are girls, which is really praised! I read the reviews first before reading the book (I read the reviews first because I was afraid of some negative comments). I saw a negative review saying that a man kept appearing and the heroine kept pretending to deal with him, and almost ran away. But when I saw the author's explanation very seriously, I thought I'd better read it. The result is really delicious! That man is Long Aotian, the male protagonist in the title of the book. The heroine is dealing with him because of the system in his mind. After all, she is afraid that the system will notice that it is not good for her when she returns. Later, the man was very miserable when he sent it. The heroine tortured him both mentally and physically, and snatched all the golden fingers prepared by the system for the male protagonist. Some of the female-oriented words are also very comfortable to look at. It is really not a loss to invest in it!

Nice looking, but I have some suggestions The first one is that the characters are too flat, and the character creation is not very good. I think that when writing about a villain, you should not just write about his brainlessness and the tragic situation of being retaliated. Everyone has his own logical way. In the eyes of those villains, he is right. Being bad just for the sake of being bad will only make people think that the villain is boring. Secondly, the heroine's journey was too smooth. Those successes and upgrades seemed to be planned, and those opportunities were snatched up as soon as they came. The lack of setbacks and mistakes made the plot seem a bit cliche. Come on author, I like this book, I hope it will be a long one, Oli gives

The author's attitude towards readers' comments is really good, unlike a certain "male" author who rejected "The Biography of Saints" ⭕️ and a genius author 🤓👆

The score is too low, maybe because it just came out? The character is very interesting, and the heroine is really cool. The writing is very smooth, and there are no problems with the skill design. It's quite interesting... Okay, I'm going to continue reading.

I don't understand why the rating is so low. I think the heroine is very strong and her revenge on Li Aotian is also very interesting. The whole story is very enjoyable and there is almost no uncomfortable plot.

It's a little lower than seven. It must be at least 8.5. The heroine is considered a lone wolf. But he is not the kind of person who is particularly ruthless, so when the game invades, it is still good to watch. Wenhuang's can be used as a meal replacement for game invasion. After reading it, I will wait for the author to update it.

The author writes very well. In some places, I understand what the author wants to write, but I feel very awkward. Maybe the narrative is not very good? I'm not sure, maybe it's my own problem, but as a novice author, it's great to write like this.

I used another account before. I think the writing is very good. Feminism can be seen from the choice of words and sentences, and some short stories also allude to some situations in reality. I don't know why the score is so low? I have been reading Tomato for four or five years, and I think this book deserves at least a 9.4 Rating.

It's good-looking, and the heroine is quite decisive. If she messes with the irrelevant ones, she will kill them, and she will keep the useful ones for herself.