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I gave it 4 stars for fear of being accused of being a bastard. The writing is good, really good. There are very few Shinji Tomato books. I have only read two of them before. One had a single heroine, Sirona, and wrote 8 or 9 hundred chapters, but the writing got worse and worse later on, and the character was broken, and it was removed from the shelves. The other one had no heroine, but it was discontinued. It's updated, the author has done what they wrote in the beginning, and as long as they keep updating, there should be gains and achievements, and you also have a single female protagonist Xiaoguang. This is really something I have never seen in other books. This is the first time I have seen Shinji and Xiaoguang team up for CP, come on! Unsurprisingly, the ratings are not high. Shinji's books are generally not rated very high.

Very well written. I personally like this way of getting along, which is neither offensive nor too monotonous. Come on, as long as you keep updating, I will keep following you.

The writing is good, but the problem is also huge. The current solution is to increase the interaction with Pokémon, which is necessary for all Pokémon novels. There is also the problem of the heroine. In fact, these two are the same problem. The existence of the heroine will inevitably suppress the interaction time with Pokémon. I think if it is really light, real feelings can be written slowly and treated as a dessert between two meals, but remember not to treat dessert as the main meal.

This book is very wonderful. The emotional line does not interfere with the main plot, but complements each other. It can be given a strong foundation in the Pokémon text. I saw that the author's writing is smooth. He must not be a novice. Shen Nong said that he is basically free of illness now and can taste it. It will definitely bring you constant surprises. I just want to see this kind of battle. Ah, no matter what, I will give this book a five-star review. As for why it is not a long review, I am lazy. Okay, everyone please taste this book [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

Brothers, if you have a supporting character that you want to appear in, you can leave a message below, including the Pokémon you want to use. After all, you can't just compete with Xiaozhi and the gym. The author will use it as appropriate [smile][smile][smile]

It completely brings Shinji to life. Shinji looks good like this, and the writing is very soulful. In terms of plot, I can feel that the author has written it with great care. The audio of Zhaofu and the destruction of death light are very missed. It is very nice to listen to. The changes in the latter part feel weird. Come on, author. It's rare to see such a good-looking Pokémon article. I hope you won't tame the mythical beasts that have vocations. You can keep a few of the phantom beasts. Also, it's good if you don't need to tame a lot of Pokémon. I hope the author can work hard to write anime-style battles with adventurous taming and friendship bonds. As for the emotional scenes, it feels like in anime, where you go through some things to deepen your relationship, like in Sinnoh, friendship is pearls, memories are diamonds, it's good to have a good ending, there's no need to write too much about romance.

The writing is quite good. How should I put it? The level gap in the anime worldview itself is not particularly influential. And even in the game, if your carefully cultivated elves are level 10 or 20, there is nothing wrong with them beating ordinary NPCs. The most important thing is that there are already formed elves from the beginning of this book. It is more realistic not to cultivate them one by one from scratch. If you don't hatch eggs when playing games, it is impossible to cultivate every elf from scratch. You must use the ones you catch well.

Shinji is good, I hope to conquer Banjiras, please.

So will Circle Bear evolve into Moon Bear later? I remember that there are two dragons in time and space in the later plot. Will Shinji and Xiaoguang travel through the Xisui area? I want to see the Yueyue Bear or the Heyue Bear and the elves in the Xicui area.

The author's writing style is very good, and the theme of choosing Shinji as the protagonist is very novel, and his character is also much more realistic than Shinji in the TV animation. The current low rating is just because it is a new book. In addition, I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Since the protagonist is Shinji, he is a pure battle party. In the TV animation, there are many powerful wild Pokémon in Sinnoh, such as Flash Metagross, Giant Flash Magikarp, etc. I hope the author can make some arrangements. After all, there are not many handsome and strong Pokémon. [Eat melon]

It's a bit unimaginable, Shinji and Hikaru, the heroine Hikaru, I really can't imagine him and Shinji being together

I hope the author won't be like other people who write about Shinji and either don't write it at all or only have a few dozen chapters.

Objectively speaking, the writing is really good. I am waiting for the update almost every day. It is not too slow, but it is not enough to read.

The writing is quite good, but it seems awkward to have a female protagonist. It would be better if there were no female protagonists. If you like to read stories with female protagonists, you can read it.

It looks good. To be honest, if I traveled to the world of Pokémon, I wouldn't be too childish and aloof, and it would fit in with Shinji's character.

The writing is very good and realistic. Please update it more often. Keep it up and don't end it.

It's barely watchable, not too bad.

It's rare to find a book that can read Pokémon. It's not nonsense, the battle scenes are well designed, and the heroine Xiaoguang is also good.

Big cheers for the author! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It fits the character quite well, but the emotional line is a little too fast, and the skills are a little too few.

Looks good, I hope you don't pounce. (I hope everyone will support me more and the author can persevere)

It's quite good, very objective, and the characters are portrayed very delicately. Keep up the good work and don't stop updating.

It's well written. I like the rational protagonist. He's a hot-blooded idiot like a stupid guy. I really can't watch it when he catches a bunch of low-level elves.

There are very few novels with Shinji as the protagonist. This book is well written and describes Shinji's character very well. I just don't know how Tomato judges reading time. It told me that I read more than 50 chapters for 5 hours.

It's a quick update, and the battles are well written. However, it is recommended not to collect too many mythical beasts. One or two is enough. If there are too many, other ordinary elves will easily lose their presence.

It's okay, just don't speed up the progress suddenly.

In Tomato, this is considered one of the top three.

Tutai Turtle, Mahuola, Crow Head, Electric Shock Beast, Circle Bear, and Platypus Fire Beast

It fits the Shinji in my heart very well

If you want to see someone with a cold appearance and firmness, you can