Rise from Paper-Tying Technique

The content is good, but some details are not written well. At the first battlefield point, the tree died without saying anything about cleaning the battlefield. The tree heart did not know when it was taken, and it was patched on the back. The female ghost paper man took it secretly. Then there is the breathing method that Master Chen gave to the protagonist, and then the Qingyang breathing method suddenly appeared, and after that, the Qingyang Sect also came out. When was this told to the protagonist? I didn't say I left a letter with instructions [smile] Now it's time to fight Wuyin. After the fight, the female ghost paper man evolved into a female ghost wife, and then killed 4 old ghosts in an instant. The loot was also collected. When the loot was divided later, it was not mentioned. Did the protagonist swallow it without telling the second senior brother? [What] It's still the character of the second senior brother. When the protagonist first enters the coffin shop, the second senior brother has a dull personality and specializes in work. He is like a homeboy. He has strength but doesn't like to communicate with others. Later, Master Chen went out to look for opportunities to break through. He also said that the second senior brother worked as a thug, communicated with the protagonist and handled business matters. Later, the second senior brother came up with ideas and was the main force, and the protagonist was a soft assistant [stunned] Having said so much, I also hope that the author can write well and the plot will be comfortable to watch. It will be better if the details are improved.

Not bad, 4 stars Advantages: The writing is very good, neither warm nor dry, and the story is told in a eloquent manner. Disadvantages: Excellent but not amazing enough. It feels like it has reached the standard line but failed to meet expectations. I originally thought I could see something strange like a horror resurgence, but then I found out that it was just a fantasy upgrading practice mode, and my expectations were suddenly gone. Judging from the writing style, it feels like it is suitable for writing about the world, but the story is always superficial, and the content is still a fantasy upgrade.

There are no cheats, it is really practical, and the readers of this book are also very practical... The protagonist's outlook on life is quite good, and he makes decisive decisions when it's time to kill, but he doesn't abandon his original intention. I just feel that if I want to write this book well, it will probably take millions of words. Of course, a good work does require a lot of writing. If you have a quick temper and like to read cool articles, don't fall into this trap! It's really good, but it's too early to get into the trap. I finished reading it in one day. I hope I have more than 1 million words before I get into the trap again [laughing and crying]

It's okay so far, the writing is pretty good, keep up the good work. It can indeed be flesh and blood in the early stage, but later on. The author said that he wanted to give the protagonist a golden finger. I thought it was my own golden finger. It turns out that the protagonist is given a ghost wife and they sleep together at night. I used to be able to accept this kind of plot. I can accept you and a dog wife, but now it is really a weird love story. Forget it, the protagonist is very weak and has to be beaten half to death every time. Really, you can still read the previous part. But when the shortcomings of your novel are gradually magnified, and many plots in the novel are cliche. In the end, the protagonist must be with a ghost bride, then it will be really difficult for readers to be in the mood to continue reading.

The front is quite nice, with the warmth of hometown. I feel there are several poisonous points: 1. Has Xu Er's soul not dissipated and merged with the protagonist? Instant acceptance of family members. 2. When the protagonist returns to his hometown, why does he not charge for rescuing people? The nephew of the bachelor in the front also gave something, and the one who rescued later gave him two eggs. 3. When ambushing the Wuyin people, the protagonist was already named and said he wanted to settle a score with them. Why was he attacked by the protagonist again later?

It's not bad. If you see the updated part, you can check it out on Tomato. The plot and characters are good. The character of the protagonist is well portrayed, with flesh and blood. Although he is cultivating a heretical path, he is not an evil cultivator.

Very well written. Pretty solid. In the later stage, you can consider bringing your family members to the city, otherwise there will be chaos in the countryside due to lack of harvest, and your family members may die.

Delicate description, fireworks in the world, day and night. With friendship, with blessings, with the most beautiful likes, I walk into your space, appreciate your works, share your happiness, leave my footprints, and give the most beautiful likes to the best you. I am grateful for meeting you, and grateful for having you. Let happiness accompany you all the way, and let smile accompany you all the way.

The writing is really good, steady and not impatient, the writing style is also good, fine quality and fine grain! !

Readers find it objectionable to most family members that the protagonist cares about everything, but the protagonist's family is indeed a family that loves each other. In ancient times, the protagonist's eldest brother, 23, was unable to marry a wife because of poverty. The last five or two in the family had no intention of objecting. He personally took the protagonist to become a disciple. All the family money was invested in the protagonist, and he had no regrets. You must know that the protagonist is almost 10 years younger than him. Most people must have thought that the family money must be saved to marry themselves. This is the protagonist's native family.

It's very interesting. I love reading novels like this that are humane, rigorous, and slow-paced.

It's well written, the characters are well drawn, and the plot is very realistic. It's worth watching.

Brothers and sisters, I would like to collect some book titles. Does anyone have any good ideas? [Eat melon] Not bad. Don't feed shit

The writing is very real and immersive, I like it very much.

Xu Yu looked at the pile of money in front of him, and his throat became tight. Three hundred copper coins, plus the one or two pieces of silver, equals one thousand three hundred copper coins, which equals two or three coins. Is this my problem or something? What is the operation of suddenly adding one tael more money?

The writing is really good. There are not many authors who can tell good stories. Come on.

An extremely rare fantasy book without golden fingers. The author's writing style is like a breeze blowing on the face, slowly unfolding a real and strange world in front of the readers. I like this step-by-step writing method.

It's so beautiful, the writing is very delicate, the characters are very vivid, and there are no bloody plots of bitterness and hatred. I like it.

In Tomato is a pretty good book, but there are still some poisonous points. It often happens that the preface does not match the postscript For example, when Li Ningfu regained the earth, the previous chapter ended with a sudden change, but the next chapter seemed to have no such thing. Also, when the brothers secretly attacked Wuyin, in the previous chapter, the protagonist used the soul-condensing thorn that he learned from Yangyin Tongyoulu to attack Wuyin's left eye, and then in the next chapter, it turned into a evil-breaking talisman to attack Wuyin's left eye...

It's really not a lie. It's really good-looking. The writing is not a noob (so far). The subject matter is not bad. I hope it will be updated soon [awkward laugh][awkward laugh] Shu Huang ing

It looks really good. The protagonist has no plug-ins, so it is not a pure and refreshing novel. He has his own tricks, but it is not a smart decision, but relies more on his own diligence and perseverance.

The writing is really nb, the characters are well described, and it is immersive.

Not enough. Write faster. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Not bad, I won't stop watching half of it

It's okay, it's a slow start, I'll explain the background at the beginning, I only started learning the skills in Chapter 7, but it's pretty smooth. Do you have any side business?

It's okay, the weird plot is good

I have read more than 60 chapters so far. Overall, it is good, very flavorful, and good for my family and my savior. The only shortcoming is that there is no golden finger, the strength is too low, the training progress is too slow, and the protagonist looks a bit useless, and I feel a bit unhappy. Don't worry about how big it is. It's something like God rewards those who work hard. You will get stronger if you work hard. It's very reasonable. Everyone is here to relax and don't want to see the protagonist being beaten all the time.

The rating is low, the details are in place, the description is rich, the author's writing is good, recommended [Laughing awkwardly] Why bother if you have to poison yourself? —— Ps: If you use AI, why don't you check it? Don't you even read what is written?

That's good. As for women, I prefer the harem. I'll accept whatever is beneficial to the protagonist. You've all traveled through time, just accept it if you want, just don't be too frustrated.

Chapter 331, where is the protagonist's sister? Is she dead? (I read a little fast)