From the Start, I Had an A-Rank Forbidden Item, and Players Worked for Me

It's really good to watch. It's definitely more than a 7. It's at least a 9 or above in my opinion. The writing is good, the plot is well written, and the protagonist's ability and world view are also very good. It's rare to find it on Tomato. I know why the rating is so low? I keep using AI to make up the word count, but the key is that you don't change it.

This is the best one I have read in the past year or so. Compared with many other books in the same genre like Tomato, it can be said that they are not even as good as The Super Mechanic. This book has a western fantasy background. Although it is in the same genre, the author really wrote it with intention and wrote something of his own.

After watching the later stage, I suddenly felt a little tired and didn't want to watch anymore. I don't know why. It was quite interesting until the end of the closed player beta. I suddenly felt bored later. [What] I personally feel is that first of all, the game text is not very similar to the game. There is no boss battle, which is an important part of the MMO. All the bosses were singled out by the protagonist. Even though the players had no sense of participation (beating minions and clearing out miscellaneous items) and no challenge at all, they still found the game interesting, so that was no problem. This makes the player feel like a tool man with an immortal buff or a fourth natural disaster buff, which has no effect and is just a background board for the protagonist (of course this is understandable, the protagonist is not a player, but it always feels not very logical. It is similar to the cousin or GTA mode, which is understandable, but this game is a fantasy MMO, with skills, levels, professions and boss battles) In the plot after the closed beta, the protagonist suddenly loses his innate information gap advantage, and suddenly some things and people that are beyond his information scope pop up. This is easy to write long-term and can also increase the sense of suspense, but there are very few plots where the protagonist relies on existing information or game mechanics to counterattack, making the experience a bit strange. But overall it is a good book, the writing is interesting and easy to read.

The author writes so well😄😄😄 Anyway, I'm shameless, so I'll just give myself a five-star rating. I love you old man. This wave is really amazing. I have always believed that authors and readers are a two-way selection process. There is no 100% perfect book in this world. Everyone has their own aesthetics and preferences. It is normal to not like a book. When you see a book you don't like, just give it a bad review and leave. There are many readers who think that some foreshadowing is poisonous before even looking back. This is normal. After all, it's useless for you to discuss it with them, because if you say it's foreshadowing, he won't come back to see it. Normally, I just pretend not to see it. But why do some people always want to control me remotely? I am an author who listens to advice very much. In the past, many readers said [Kai Wan Xi] that I didn't like it so I changed it. But this does not mean that I will change the article for your own feelings. Will all my foreshadowings and outlines be changed for one person's opinion? As an author, I must take care of the feelings of most readers. How can I make major changes just because of one person's opinion? And I'm not a noble person. You can just ask me to write a book for you, but I'll give you money! Threatening the author to change the article with negative reviews is amazing.

How to put it, the advantages are obvious, and the disadvantages are also obvious. It can be clearly seen in the early stage that the author is a novice, and the character description and structure are basically absent in the early stage 🤦 For example, a stranger in the protagonist told Elena that he would help her, and she immediately believed it. The problem He was a girl who had just been exterminated, but I didn't see how sad she was after the experience. The early shaping was very dull, but the more she wrote, the better. The later one who specializes in killing idols was pretty good. The author has obviously improved and is getting better.

It can be said that it is above average on Tomato. I rarely post reviews that recommend books, but seeing that the author's traffic is so poor, I still write one. The overall narrative is okay, and the writing is quite satisfactory. There are no particularly outstanding advantages but there are no poisonous points. There may be a little bit of trouble in the early stages of writing. It feels unfamiliar, but it gets better as you get better later on. Overall, this book is worth reading, at least it won't make you say that you have seen it💩, and the author is also very kind and righteous. Many authors are eager to put the player panel in your face. This book can be said to be rarely seen.

A good book meow From the plot point of view, I think this book is very exciting. It has a clear story line and rich branch lines and foreshadowing. The plot unfolds step by step and is quite interesting. From the perspective of character creation, I think the author still needs to continue to polish it. After all, personally speaking, the characterization of characters is the soul of a story. Proper depiction of characters at appropriate plot points is very important, and it is a test for the author. Judging from the environment, I feel that the author is quite talented in writing and imagination. Being able to express the scenes in his mind clearly and vividly is an important test for anyone. In my opinion, the author did a pretty good job. How to love and how to update quickly

I finished reading it in two days. It was a great batch. The character creation is pretty good. I like it very much. There are multiple female protagonists, probably about three. I like the subject matter and the plot is okay. There is a knife. It seems that the prison card should also have a knife. This is the best book I have read in a while The title of the book is just not very good. It appeared on the home page two or three times before. I didn't click on it. It's a pity that I only saw it now. Come and read more. Don't lose this book 😢😢

If you make more changes, you will get seven-star reviews [awkward laugh], some things really just bully others and don't say anything, right?

Sequence + NPC type books are quite rare. I think both the world setting and the description of sequence skills are quite good, but I feel that the emotional scene with the heroine is a bit too short. It would be nice to add a little more to the emotional scene before Rose, but everyone is not here to watch the emotional scene 😄 I found that most people still like single female protagonists. Maybe the author can change the introduction 🤔