Demon Slayer: With the Byakugan, I’ll Stand Above the Heavens

It's nice to read. The author's writing is super nice. There are no poisonous points at the moment. I hope the author will keep it. Just don't let other people learn ninjutsu. Just let the protagonist use ninjutsu alone.

It seems interesting so far. There is nothing unacceptable or anything like that. But there are just a few things to worry about. Because it happens before the plot begins, the plot is almost entirely original. So whether these characters can act in a way that matches their personality is more of a test of postgraduate skills. After all, the characters are not dead and will have their own behavior patterns, including ghosts. After such a person who is completely capable of crushing ghosts breaks the existing pattern, the behavior trajectories of each character need to be carefully described. After all, it is almost original. Judging from the reflections of Butterfly Ninja, this book seems to have a harem tendency, so a certain reason is needed to support it. What is being explained so far is that the protagonist understands his pursuit and is a person who can do whatever it takes to pursue power. Everything he does is for the goal of gaining power. If the protagonist accepts a harem, then there must be a reasonable reason for why he accepts it. After all, the protagonist is not a pure Tintin creature, so there must be a motive. In the same way, gaining power is just a means. Is there always an ultimate reason? What is the reason for the protagonist to gain power? The current goal is to live forever like a ghost, but it still feels a little thin. After all, the protagonist is almost at the top of his strength, and the pursuit of immortality is not that urgent. Will he return to the ninja world in the future? After all, judging from the current description, he is not doing well in the ninja world. If he gains power but cannot make up for the regrets in his heart, what is the use of this power? Just like the Sharingan, power gained after losing an important person is meaningless, because nothing can be changed. If you have this goal, then the content of the ninja world also needs to be sorted out in advance, the plot context, characters, and the differences from the original work due to the existence of the protagonist, so as to facilitate the advancement of the subsequent plot.

When I read the introduction, I thought it was the Demon Slayer version of Aizen, but after reading about ten chapters, I found that the protagonist is a very emotional person and does not have the charisma of a villain at all. So, is the introduction a scam or will it happen later?

Mysterious article, mysterious ending The ending is okay. Although it feels like a lot of timelines have been skipped, at least it has an ending, which is much better than the ending (some even call it an open ending). It was said that it was a sword-spin, but actually a few people died, and then the timeline was restarted, and no one died. It was a super family-friendly ending. It just felt a little shorter and there was less romance content. Overall good, full of fun

The protagonist is really cool. The emotional scenes are also well written. The most important thing is that I quite like the character of the protagonist. Cold, but not heartless. Have your own goals.

The author's writing is good, but he doesn't have too much resentment towards Demon Slayer. After all, Demon Slayer's painter and author is just an otaku under 30. If Demon Slayer is regarded as a female-channeled anime and a female-channeled novel, it would be the same. Would you feel more comfortable? According to interviews, the first episode of Demon Slayer was almost blocked by the screenwriter at the time. It was only because the sales were not bad later that it was slowly updated. But now the author seems to have retired with hundreds of millions of yen in copyright fees and publishing fees. The author also said that he will not pick up a paintbrush again.

There are good reviews for CPs that are not broken down. The protagonist's first world was through soul travel, but unfortunately the second time he traveled through time was through clothing. The protagonist doesn't know the plot and probably won't break down the CPs. It would be nice if more heroines create a few for the protagonists.

The emotional development is not abrupt and looks pretty good. I look forward to the follow-up.

It's very smooth to read, good luck to the author

The character design at the beginning is well done. It really looks like a ninja who has completely integrated into the Naruto world but has not completed the game 🤦. I even wonder if the native Naruto traveled through the past and I am still wondering whether to watch it.