Bai Lingyuan was originally the top fighting force of the human race, and he did not want to be tainted by Karma. He devoted himself to cultivating in secret and accepted five disciples for various reasons, including the daughter of the sect leader of the righteous path, the princess of the earthly dynasty, a little witch born in the devil's path, and the sisters who were poor and independent cultivators.
He was annoyed by his cold temperament, and now he accepted a sixth apprentice because he felt compassion and did not want to breed inner demons.
Since then, everyone in the world has said that the arrogant Bai Xianzun has become more and more humane.
"Master, is this my junior sister?"
"Master, my father wants to invite you as a guest!"
"Master, I only have you left!"
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(Master and Apprentice) (Multiple Female Protagonists) It's not a brainless novel about sending someone to the harem.
Reader comments
I can watch it, but I don't like it. From the perspective of Shuangwen: it's a bit bland. From the perspective of the heroine Hou Gongduo: I haven't seen any ambiguous behavior, no interactive plot, and no shui. From the perspective of Wudiwen Look: the protagonist is very strong, but he still has to listen to the words of the sect master, which means that the sect master is stronger than him, and from this it is deduced that other major sects are very likely to be stronger than him, so it cannot be said that he is truly invincible, and most of them are considered strong. From the perspective of Tianjiao Wen: there is no process of becoming stronger. From the perspective of a disciple-recruitment article: it is equivalent to only accepting one because the others have been raised, but there is no description of the new disciple. [Thinking][Thinking] Generally speaking, you can give it a try when you are bored. After all, everyone has different preferences in reading. Maybe I think this is quite average, but some people think it is very good-looking, so my evaluation is 3 stars, but I will give it 4 stars because of my wisdom. [Salute][Salute] (Someone is welcome to refute my point of view. This is just my personal feeling. You can refute it, but please do not criticize it)
First of all, the book is very good. I have also read the latest chapter. The character descriptions are really good and it can be seen that they are very careful. The battle plot is also okay. Some details are indeed well described and the importance is clearly distinguished.
Here comes the problem. Problems start to appear after writing. For some detailed descriptions, you spend a lot of pen and ink to build, describe, and focus on the key points. For example, at the beginning of "The Secret Realm of Resentful Bones", Su Qianyun fired several swords. The swords were different and the descriptions were also different. But when I watched it, I didn't have that feeling. This kind of feeling does not have the feeling of facing a strong enemy or facing the oppression of death, but you still used a lot of pen and ink to focus on the description. I guess you may want to write about this pile of resentment like a military formation. For others, it is a life and death crisis and an invincible thing. For Su Qianyun, it is a matter of a few swords.
Or maybe you wanted to write about the significance of Su Qianyun's swords in this secret realm, and prepare a foreshadowing about this secret realm, but after looking at it later, I didn't find the place where this foreshadowing broke out.
Moreover, you have already written some descriptions once, and when it comes to the second similar place, you write it again. To be honest, this is pure water.
Your book has a very good writing style, with the magnanimity, momentum and psychological activity of a superior person, and the logic is clear.
But there are two problems. One is putting a lot of effort and effort into some insignificant places; the other is purely based on the number of words.
The most direct consequence of these two problems is reading fatigue and affecting the reading experience.
I hope we will be prosperous and prosperous.
I was misled by the introduction. If you want to read a refreshing article with a fast pace, you can take a detour.
The writing style is quite good, and the author is really serious about writing. It is the fine chaff in tomatoes. However, in the introduction, I thought it would be a conventional harem, fast-paced cultivation of immortality and relationship development. After reading a few chapters, the contrast was too great, which made me a little dissatisfied.
All in all, it is a good article worth reading, but it is indeed a slow-paced and provocative book. Based on the author's enthusiasm and level, I still give it five points for the careful creation.
Okay, looks good
I feel like it's a bit off topic. Many people don't have roles, and the main character has been offline for a long time.
Sad, I came across this book by chance tonight, and I saw that the author was still updating twice in May, and then it became one update. Sad, many good books have been buried, please give the author a big boost
The writing is well-written, and it is obviously more in-depth than similar cool articles, making it more comfortable to read.
It's not a cool novel, and there's no ambiguous plot. Mainly because of the author's writing style, his own understanding of life and practice, it's a plain article, but it benefits people a lot
Surprisingly not bad. Looking forward to the follow-up [smile]
I didn't expect to find fine bran in tomatoes. Please support me.
The artistic content is very high [you taste carefully]
Very nice looking sugar
The plot can be good and the characterization can be good too
Slow pace, good writing, at least I enjoyed reading it
The novel is good and the writing is not bad. It is considered a good one among the Tomato novels.
Such a beautiful book, but it's delayed by the name. It's really just the few chaff of a tomato [laughs]
I can watch it, but I don't like it. From the perspective of Shuangwen: it's a bit bland. From the perspective of the heroine Hou Gongduo: I haven't seen any ambiguous behavior, no interactive plot, and no shui. From the perspective of Wudiwen Look: the protagonist is very strong, but he still has to listen to the words of the sect master, which means that the sect master is stronger than him, and from this it is deduced that other major sects are very likely to be stronger than him, so it cannot be said that he is truly invincible, and most of them are considered strong. From the perspective of Tianjiao Wen: there is no process of becoming stronger. From the perspective of a disciple-recruitment article: it is equivalent to only accepting one because the others have been raised, but there is no description of the new disciple. [Thinking][Thinking] Generally speaking, you can give it a try when you are bored. After all, everyone has different preferences in reading. Maybe I think this is quite average, but some people think it is very good-looking, so my evaluation is 3 stars, but I will give it 4 stars because of my wisdom. [Salute][Salute] (Someone is welcome to refute my point of view. This is just my personal feeling. You can refute it, but please do not criticize it)
First of all, the book is very good. I have also read the latest chapter. The character descriptions are really good and it can be seen that they are very careful. The battle plot is also okay. Some details are indeed well described and the importance is clearly distinguished. Here comes the problem. Problems start to appear after writing. For some detailed descriptions, you spend a lot of pen and ink to build, describe, and focus on the key points. For example, at the beginning of "The Secret Realm of Resentful Bones", Su Qianyun fired several swords. The swords were different and the descriptions were also different. But when I watched it, I didn't have that feeling. This kind of feeling does not have the feeling of facing a strong enemy or facing the oppression of death, but you still used a lot of pen and ink to focus on the description. I guess you may want to write about this pile of resentment like a military formation. For others, it is a life and death crisis and an invincible thing. For Su Qianyun, it is a matter of a few swords. Or maybe you wanted to write about the significance of Su Qianyun's swords in this secret realm, and prepare a foreshadowing about this secret realm, but after looking at it later, I didn't find the place where this foreshadowing broke out. Moreover, you have already written some descriptions once, and when it comes to the second similar place, you write it again. To be honest, this is pure water. Your book has a very good writing style, with the magnanimity, momentum and psychological activity of a superior person, and the logic is clear. But there are two problems. One is putting a lot of effort and effort into some insignificant places; the other is purely based on the number of words. The most direct consequence of these two problems is reading fatigue and affecting the reading experience. I hope we will be prosperous and prosperous.
I was misled by the introduction. If you want to read a refreshing article with a fast pace, you can take a detour. The writing style is quite good, and the author is really serious about writing. It is the fine chaff in tomatoes. However, in the introduction, I thought it would be a conventional harem, fast-paced cultivation of immortality and relationship development. After reading a few chapters, the contrast was too great, which made me a little dissatisfied. All in all, it is a good article worth reading, but it is indeed a slow-paced and provocative book. Based on the author's enthusiasm and level, I still give it five points for the careful creation.
Okay, looks good I feel like it's a bit off topic. Many people don't have roles, and the main character has been offline for a long time.
Sad, I came across this book by chance tonight, and I saw that the author was still updating twice in May, and then it became one update. Sad, many good books have been buried, please give the author a big boost
The writing is well-written, and it is obviously more in-depth than similar cool articles, making it more comfortable to read.
It's not a cool novel, and there's no ambiguous plot. Mainly because of the author's writing style, his own understanding of life and practice, it's a plain article, but it benefits people a lot
Surprisingly not bad. Looking forward to the follow-up [smile]
I didn't expect to find fine bran in tomatoes. Please support me.
The artistic content is very high [you taste carefully]
Very nice looking sugar
The plot can be good and the characterization can be good too
Slow pace, good writing, at least I enjoyed reading it
The novel is good and the writing is not bad. It is considered a good one among the Tomato novels.
Such a beautiful book, but it's delayed by the name. It's really just the few chaff of a tomato [laughs]