Zhan Shen: Transform into Feixiao? Transform into Hu Lei!

I think it would be better to change the back of Saran to a woman. After all, it would be like a Feixiao-like Nanliang. It would not have the femininity and heroism of a Feixiao, nor the masculinity of a man. It would feel very awkward.

The writing was okay, and the author put a lot of effort into the fighting plot. But overall I think there is a big problem, that is, some parts of your article are incomprehensible and confusing. It does not clearly explain where the protagonist comes from, whether it is a time travel, or a detailed explanation of the source of the protagonist's power. I still don't fully understand the protagonist's ability (objective evaluation, no malice). I can only say that the writing is lacking and needs to be improved. The author can make this book better if he rests these plots. Come on, author [air kiss] [air kiss]

I personally think it looks good and I love watching it. If I just sit there, will I always turn into a girl?

Why did Pigeon and Pigeon paint this book "Zhan Shen: Transformation into Feixiao" written by Teacher Shi? Transform into Hu Lei! Is a treasure fic that I recently discovered. Unlike most of the god-killing spin-offs that follow Feng Feixiao, this novel takes a unique approach and uses the inner cry of thunder as the core form of the protagonist. The contrasting character design is particularly eye-catching; the time traveler Salan has been burdened with ten years of spiritual struggle, predicting the plot but being deeply uneasy. The plot line of the original Cangnan God Crisis is perfectly integrated with the power system of Chi Yue and Bu Li. The battle descriptions are full of details and the world view is integrated seamlessly. Every time I read a chapter, I am still unsatisfied. I sincerely look forward to the subsequent development of the plot. I sincerely ask the author to update more, and the update party will wait online!

I hope the author can write better articles about changing marriages for new students. There are too few good ones about tomatoes.

It looks good, I can't tell you how I feel about it, but I feel like the character of the main character really pokes fun at me. Also, will the author come back for dinner? [I'm about to cry] I don't care anymore, right? [Crying] Boss, have you really forgotten everything in the past? [Almost crying] Didn't you say that you can keep updating when you go back? [Almost crying] Boss, come back soon, Boss [crying] Boss, you won't give up, right? [Almost crying] Boss, please say something, boss [crying]

Why do you feel that Lin Qiye is the protagonist [Thinking]

Advantages: emmm, it looks good... Although I haven't read much of the original work of Zhan Shen, but as a Bentie player, this is very enjoyable! At the same time, the character design is good, there are few jokes, and there is no vulgarity! Although it is a marriage change, it does not make the male and female protagonists get along awkwardly. Disadvantages: It is too vague at the beginning, the plot is not coherent, and it cannot catch the readers very prominently. Suggestion: You can relax appropriately and add a little more sugar... Emmm, of course, it is the kind of daily details, not the industrial saccharine of Little Wife Overall, it's very interesting. The author has also put in the effort and is still pursuing it. But after all, he married into a minority, so the data may not be good. Just... Please don't stop updating, thank you, keep at it!

The plot is okay, but whether the protagonist is remarried or single. Can the author reply?

I hope it's not a remarriage

One thing to say, although the writing may not be very good in some places, it can still be regarded as a good source of food. The only drawback is that the update is too unstable

I have to say I really enjoy watching it.

The plot is okay, but the writing needs more work.

I hope the author can continue to update

So when did the protagonist become (complete body) Fei Xiao? Or should we wait for the Great Lan God to use the Rockets to make Zhengcai become a (complete body)?

Come on, author, come on

Good looking, love it, like it

Very pretty! Come on and write

What a pair of hard-luck mandarin ducks [laughing evilly]

Keep up the good work, author

Cheers to new authors

It's pretty, pretty interesting.

Come on, come on, come on.

Is boss still updated?

Not bad, but that's just my opinion and I'm willing to accept refutation.

Check out the new fun. Taste salty. [Eat melon]

As long as it keeps updating, I will keep following it, and I will just keep reading occasionally.