My Ex-Boyfriend Became My Creditor and Doted on Me

I'm following up on the update, it's very well written and very special. The four stars are mainly because the progress is a bit too slow, and I feel that I have suffered too much. I can't see Gong's love. Their relationship line is quite average, maybe it hasn't developed yet? And I don't know if it's he. I don't like my sister very much. He makes me a little uncomfortable, and I really feel bad for be. I can stock up and watch it again. It will feel more comfortable when my relationship gets better. What happened? The more I write, the uglier it becomes. I really don't have time to argue with you anymore. I'm giving up.

Nice! It's quite sour and contagious! When I first looked at the cover, I thought it was an ancient piece of writing, so I didn't have high hopes. However, the title and introduction were quite interesting, so I continued reading. The unexpected feeling was very good, and I didn't give up even when I was in the quagmire. I tried my best to climb out. It really gave people a positive and inspiring feeling, and made people look forward to the subsequent development of the story. But what I didn't expect to understand was that when we met again, Gong could see Shou sleeping for three hours on the surveillance camera, which made people feel that Gong cared about Shou, so why did he start to say bad things about Shou later, and why did he feel that Gong was not aware of it. . ? (If it was intentional, just pretend I didn't say it). Not to mention the relationship between the two is still a bit sweet. Work hard today too! The emotional line is a bit slow. . . Many chapters have been talking about the suffering of suffering, which felt a bit delayed. It's okay to have a fight if you want, but both of them are the kind of people who don't dare to take a step forward. It feels a bit boring for these two people to fight each other so far apart and for so many chapters.

The introduction drew me in. The first part was very detailed, but I felt it was too hard. Life is already hard, and the novel is still so hard. It's been a little difficult for me to stick to it, the progress is too slow. Moreover, the baby has been taking various medicines indiscriminately and looks really scared. He does not dare to go to the hospital even if he wants to save money. Then he does not eat for a long time and cannot eat. Colleagues are all vicious, and although the workplace is indeed suffocating in real life, it seems even sadder in the novel. My grandma took a lot of medicine mixed with it. She passed away last year. Her stomach burned out and I started to feel scared now. Although I know that the final novel is most likely to be written by he, but with the current progress, I find it difficult to write it. That is, if it is brought into reality, I feel that there is only despair and no hope. I used to think that when I went to the same company, after seeing the baby in such a miserable condition through surveillance, I would slowly penetrate the glass and start adding sugar to the glass slag. But for now, there is only that kind of warmth. In my opinion, if I say take care of her, the people below will get the wrong idea. That time I came out to check the baby's address, there was no progress. Although both of them are workaholics. At the moment, I think it would be better to stay for a while and find another company. Anyway, I already have work experience here and have achieved good results. It's not that I can't start well, and I already have savings. Now I don't want to watch two people fall in love. I just hope that Cheng Xi is happy and that he can be treated with tenderness in the novel. [Cry][Send heart]

The emotions are well written, and it focuses entirely on emotions, which can easily make people uncomfortable watching it. Those looking for abuse can savor it carefully. Personally, I don't want to give it five stars because it didn't make sense for me. The protagonist is repeatedly tortured by life, and it's a realistic story about a middle class guessing the meaning of the upper class, and torturing the bottom class intentionally or unintentionally. It doesn't make sense logically, but it's acceptable. After all, it requires artistic processing.

A treasure book, very beautiful. I didn't like to read workplace stories at first, but the name was very special and I clicked it out of curiosity. The more I read, the more addicted I became. The characters are very good, but some parts are very realistic. I want to cry. I feel sorry for the protagonist. He is a hard-working person and a very nice person. , It's really two bitter gourds that will make me cry and get rich tomorrow, oh oh oh oh, oh oh oh, oh oh oh, I hope there will be more updates, why can't I read more, more updates, the author's writing style is good, but it's a bit difficult to understand at the beginning, but as I get used to it, I gradually become more and more in love with it. How can I put it, the more I watch, the more tired I am. I hope Cheng Danfei will do it. If it is HE, I feel it is still a bit difficult... And BE is very painful. I think oe is better.

First of all, I would like to praise the author. The psychological description and life details of this book are very, very delicate, which makes people feel deeply involved. In my opinion, the character creation is also very successful. Overall, it is a pretty good work. But some of the plots surrounding Gong's sister made me confused. In my personal opinion, I don't think Cheng Xi did anything wrong or felt sorry for anyone. Some of Ms. Gu's behaviors made me feel as if Cheng Xi was born to owe her family and should give her free money to see a doctor. I know that the character's perspective is not the same as the author's perspective, but the author assumes that she is Gong's biological sister and the relationship between the siblings is very good. I haven't seen any criticism of this character so far. They also use Cheng Xi's psychological activity as "she is doing this because she feels sorry for her brother" to excuse her. I am very curious about the author's opinion of Ms. Gu. Do you really think she is just a little girl who feels sorry for her brother? I have a little doubt, and I apologize if I offended you.

Hmm... I liked it at first, and since I couldn't find a replacement, I kept watching it. But it was a bit too painful, and there was a lot of abuse. However, the relationship drama has not progressed. The two of them are like strangers...

The author's description of the characters' psychology is very detailed, organized and logical, but there are too many short sentences.

To be honest, I usually [work on drafting], but this one looks like it was written by a genuine person. Let me break it down into a few points, some are good and some are bad, and I really feel about it. 1. Character aspect. The overall impression given is that the suffering was miserable, the attack was miserable, but the suffering was even worse. The personality of the character is as written in the introduction. He has a low self-esteem when he is a sufferer, and he is not talkative when he is attacked. This is also the focus of this article. After all, when I read this book, most of the topics shared were "Gaga Abuse" and "Extreme Abuse". [Thinking] 2. Plot aspect. Let me say something not very nice - diary. [Inquiry] is very much like I am reading a person's diary, listening to the story of the world from my omniscient perspective, how the protagonist was suffering today and how happy he was that day. The advantage is that if you get into this story, you will feel that it is really bitter, sad and realistic, but the disadvantage is that the plot is relatively monotonous and too protracted, which means that readers will be lost. I looked at other reviews and many of them were discarded. 3. Writing style. Listen to me, if you want to read for the writing style or don't like the writing style very much, this book is not suitable for you. [Working on draft] But if you are here purely for abuse, it is worth owning this book. [Like][Like][Like] Personally, I think the writing style of this book is not as good as the previous one. There are too many narrations and they are not divided into paragraphs. It is very tiring to read and it is difficult to understand what is what at a glance. The whole book is very streamlined, with time running through the entire book in one line, with occasional front lines to enhance the sadistic feeling. Relatively successful. However, I think that if the author wants to take this path in the long term, I personally recommend improving his writing style. [Inquiry] After all, I read a lot of short stories written in big letters. Finally, whether the food is to your liking or not, you won't know until you eat it. The same goes for books. You won't know until you read them. Everyone is welcome to join this world. Author, please don't give up. [Hold] We will increase our progress and don't give up when you see your current friends. Thank you everyone for seeing this. I wish you to be happy every day and have a lot of thoughts, and I also wish all the readers the best and find the articles you like! [Love][love][love] My friend, we are destined to meet again at Shuhu Lake! Goodbye! [Love] 2026.6 Everyone, please expand and read, what I wrote is quite long. To add, I saw some readers saying that there are too many sections. In fact, I think the early sectioning is normal and okay. In the later stage, there are too many large sections and it is too tiring to read. I personally think that the early sectioning is relatively normal. But everyone has different ideas and I accept different opinions.

The plot is very interesting, but the author could use less white description later🧎‍♂️Especially in the last few chapters, the sentence division seems a bit difficult and there are too many paragraphs. Totally not enough [crying][crying][crying]

It's quite good-looking, but there are too many modifications in the writing style and some repeated words. In the online novel, it just feels very dragging and repetitive. But I particularly like the plot, and there isn't much behind it, so I think it's quite good-looking, but the score of 6.3 Is still too low. I think it may be due to some reasons of the writing style, or, um, too many descriptions are repeated, and then I don't change a word, so many people don't read it carefully, and then abandon the book and give negative reviews. In terms of plot, I feel it's pretty good. After all, it's the first time I've seen an article with this kind of character, and then I think the author has worked hard. Hug you, the tremors of anxiety, and somatization are actually not just shaking all over the body, but also stomachaches and the like. The author has an understanding of these, and the breathing method does work sometimes and sometimes not, but in fact there are more useful methods. I hope the author is happy (●°u°●) "

The writing is so delicate and the process was so painful [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] I gave up the article. The progress of the relationship is too slow. There are too many personal descriptions of the characters. There is basically no content. They are all personal work diaries. There are too many empty words and nonsense. I have no more ideas.

I feel a little "tired" after reading Xiao Cheng's tears. I cried two pieces of paper for him. The right to life and health comes first. Live, live, live normally. Xiao Cheng is really great. I look a little selfish and want to change to someone who loves Xiao Cheng more. His attention seems to have brought too much pressure to Xiao Cheng. As a bystander from a third perspective, he does not pay attention and does not reach out. Can Xiao Cheng slowly live an ordinary life on his own? After he came to the company, in order to be like a normal person, he took too many medicines, which are three-thirds of the poison. Toxin accumulation. Three years of stress. Will Xiao Cheng fall down? Will he pass away in the rental house of 1200? In fact, the feeling of be is not bad. The teacher wrote well! ! ! I have to work harder to code today, teacher! [Send heart][Send heart][Ask for more explosive updates][Ask for more explosive updates][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I feel like this character is so bitter and strong. The same path every poor man must take.

After reading it, the characters' inner thoughts are written very carefully. The progress in the beginning is very slow, because it is very painful and slow, so it is the same as reality. People who read the novel are generally poetry and distance, fantasyists. Although I wanted to give up in the middle, I still finished reading it. After watching it, I have to give it five stars.

The sourness is well grasped, and I read the latest chapter in one breath. I hope the author will not stop updating [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] In addition, if it is convenient, can you know the update frequency?

My life is hard enough. When will this plot end?

Less repetition, faster pace, no brain abuse, the writing is pretty good, I hope the plot progresses faster

It's okay. I've been chasing it for a while, but the progress is too slow and I feel like I can't keep up. But overall it's pretty good-looking

Suffering is really like a little bitter gourd. I almost cried when I read it in class. The author's writing is very good. I can really put myself in Suffering's shoes and feel the hard life.

It's very beautiful. The character structure is very delicate. It's easy to get involved in emotions. It's great. I hope the author will update it soon.

After reading about dozens of chapters, I feel that Da Da's language could be more sophisticated. There are some descriptions that appear too much in one chapter. After listening to it for a long time, I thought I was listening to a paragraph on repeat. If the author Da Da's later content is more sophisticated, I think this book will get better and better.

Such a cruel article, I had a heart attack when I read it. It's like the kind of people who can't see the light in the future. I can't imagine how we can be together with such a gap. Fortunately, if you want to read something sweet, just read more than 200 chapters. It has already started to become sweet. The author should not finish it so quickly. Write more sweet stories. It has been too bitter in the past. Let's give the child something sweet૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა

The writing is quite delicate, but the author has too many paragraphs, which affects the reading experience. It can be improved appropriately.

Both Gong and Shou are workaholics and have suffered a lot. I hope the emotional drama will be done soon. The writing style is delicate and true. I look forward to the follow-up.

A sour article, but very delicate. Why are all the pain caused? It was so sad that I cried.

Very beautiful, but also very heartbreaking experience and struggle.

A very different type. The writing is very delicate and the emotions are rich. It's different from the previous articles I've read, I feel like I'm actually there.

Too bad! The protagonist was so miserable that it made me cry in the middle of the night [crying]

It's pretty good to watch, but the emotional line develops a bit slowly. Most of it is due to personal status, but it will continue slowly.