Star Iron: the Soft and Cute Yi Ling of the Black Swan Family

It's a good book, and I feel that there are very few books about black swans in Red Persimmon. It took a lot of effort to find one like this, and the book itself is also a type that can be read. It can be seen that the author is good at describing details, especially the interaction with Lao Ge, which is what I want to see. [Adoration] Although it feels a bit rusty in terms of connection, compared to the delicate description, it is much better than other histories I have eaten. Furthermore, keep up the good work and update it! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Not bad, I still like this book very much, because I hate the kind of bad writing that keeps following the train and going through the original plot again. I prefer this kind of writing that appropriately adds my own ideas in the world of collapsing iron. Moreover, it is one of the rare articles about the Black Swan heroine, a masterpiece! I also like the setting of the protagonist. At first glance, I thought it was just a harmless little mirage that took the name of the Lord of Extermination. However, after looking back, I found that it was not the case. It added a very interesting setting. It is delicious! [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration]

It seems to be a good look at the moment, but there are also some bad points. For example, the part where Black Swan helps the protagonist take a bath is considered a bad point. When it is clear that the protagonist can change gender, he still has to do it as a man, and then he has a physiological reaction. The writing of this part is also a bit slow, but the setting of the protagonist is very interesting, and it cannot be said that it has flaws. I can only say that it is okay, but I still give it five stars. I hope the author will work hard.

It's super good-looking, the characters are delicately drawn, the writing is smooth and natural, the dialogue is not stiff, the plot transition is also very smooth, and the most important thing is the black swan! ! ! Praise the great Ms. Rememberer! Long live Sister Goose! The writing is guaranteed, the updates are stable, the plot is also very attractive, the single female protagonist is well received, the protagonist's strength is very reasonable (Top Envoy? Or Throne?), And the character design is also very good. Hehehe, the well-behaved and ignorant boy is looking forward to the emotional drama ~

The subject matter is quite novel, and the great black swan lady also has a good meal😄

Summarize! It is very innovative, and the descriptions of the characters are also very detailed, giving people a very vivid and vibrant feeling, and the setting is quite good, it is really interesting, highly recommended! [Laugh]

Suddenly it occurred to me that I haven't rated myself yet [star] Give me a follow-up review for myself [Start]

It's very good, but it's a pity that it has only one female protagonist [crying] To be honest, Black Swan can be said to be an extremely rare rememberer. I advise you that when I want you to remember, I will tell you in advance and you will be compensated after taking it. ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა Is too little [please taste carefully]

According to historians, the author is a cute little loli. If you watch more and have a sweet mouth, she will be very happy! [Sinister smile]

Great, author. Also, I hope I can keep writing and not let some negative fans influence my judgment. I have seen several well-written books fail because they listened too much to readers' opinions and failed to express their own ideas. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

What a great book. As for the main character, I was surprised at first that even though he has lived for so many years, his mental performance is not that mature. Later I found out the reason. I felt that the author described the emotional interactions of the characters very carefully. Although the connection of the plot felt a bit unfamiliar, it can be seen that he has experience. It is a great book. Finally, Miss Black Swan is unparalleled in the world! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

If it's not enough, Zhou quickly hand over all your manuscripts to me [laughing evilly]

Okay, okay, finally there is a book about prison goose [shy]

Tomato is a rare fanfic with Black Swan as the heroine. Goose Chef recommends reading it.

This book written by the author is very beautiful. The protagonist here is very beautiful and he is also the messenger of destruction. The author will update it soon. Isn't it too much fun here? [Cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

Help😭😭😭 Use simple words 🎶👄👄👄 Unlock the overloaded heart🎶❤❤❤ Some emotions should be expressed🎶📢📢📢 Those who understand, listen🎶hughughug Your hot tears🎶😢😢😢 It makes me excited and compassionate🎶🥺🥺🥺 I vow to work harder🎶⛽⛽⛽ More courage🎶🥳🥳🥳💪💪💪 Waiting for the next dawn🎶🌅🌅🌅 How about going for a walk where we held hands and admired the flowers last time🎶👫👫👫 Some snow will melt by itself🎶❄❄❄ Your shoulders are my open-minded heaven🎶👼👼👼 Waiting for the next dawn🎶🌅🌅🌅 Can you send me the photos you secretly took of me looking at the sea🎶📷📷📷 I love my flying hair🎶💇💇💇 And the eyes that look out despite the rain🎶👀👀👀

The double standards from the negative creation god and his colleagues. To others, this prince is still young. If he has any mistakes, it is your fault! Are you also ignorant? ! It can be said that he is the favored baby in the eyes of the Lord of Extinction, but the good ones are bullied [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] Laoge, you kidnapped this monarch. This is too cruel, causing Huanxiang to be punished and delaying the birth of the Lord of Extinction Iron Curtain, absolutely! Well done Ms. Black Swan!

The content is very interesting, I hope the author will continue writing.

What a great book, the descriptions of the characters are very detailed. And it's not like following the train and going through the original plot. Come on, author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Recommended, read or read. The writing is very good, @ Canzhou abandons the waves and lets me ask. When is the time limit?

There is no doubt about Laozhou's strength

It's a great book, but it's too short. I laughed so hard in the middle of the night that my brother thought I had been snatched away [face covering]

It's not bad. From the current point of view, I can look forward to getting one.

It looks good, I love to read it, I will continue to read it, please update it soon! [Blowing kiss][admiration][admiration]

It's a good book, the details are well described, but I hope the plot can be advanced a little faster [laughs]

The interaction between the Star Gods is very interesting, the characters' personalities are relatively restored, and the plot is quite interesting.

This book is quite good, and the characters are described in detail. The writing is also more delicate, I think you can take a look at it.

Beautiful, but also quite distressing and phantom

I almost forgot about five stars [blowing kiss]

The content is very good and interesting.