Shape Moon: Start with the Old Sword Template, Save Sakura

As usual, I would like to give one star to the writer. Except for some flaws in the setting and the slightly OOC characters "for the sake of starting a harem", the writing is quite smooth and one of the few that can attract Lao Yuechu to read. It is considered the first among the fans of Tomato. I look forward to the subsequent plot and the appearance of the characters.

It's a very interesting article, I hope it survives, but I feel like a lot of people will give it bad reviews because of saving Irisviel. Invincible articles, I feel a lot more relaxed when I read them. It's good. I just don't know what's going on with readers nowadays. Invincible articles think the protagonist is too strong, in coming-of-age articles they think the protagonist is too useless, in articles with single female protagonists, they talk about giving away girls, and in articles with multiple female protagonists, they think there are too many female protagonists. I feel like those who can keep publishing now are really strong.

Overall, it's pretty good, but the plot develops a bit too fast and needs polishing.

It would be good if it was written by someone new, and the plot doesn't have too many flaws. It's still picking and choosing. I give the author five stars and hope it won't stop updating.

I hope that the plot of the second part of FGO can be written more excitingly. The plots so far are very exciting, and the family daily life of the round table is very interesting. I hope that the plot of the Lostbelt can be interesting, so that Morgan can have a better future, and the final chapter needs to be written well. It is too uncomfortable. Come on, the author is great

Very good, a very old harem novel, but I really enjoyed reading it. Come on, author. When are you going to Cang Yin? I really want to read Ai Aotian.

Most of them are pretty good in my opinion. Let's talk about the bad points. The author forgot to mention abandoning the brain. If you don't read the setting, it will be fine. As for the wives, the author will just change this. Basically no one will criticize you. When I watched the Instant Noodles show, the author wanted to see if you could finish it.

Brain: Run quickly, this is a stone Hand: What are you talking about? I'm in Eyes: [smile]

The latest chapter goes to another world. As a moon fan, I feel like the sky is falling. I personally have no interest in other worlds at all. In my mind, this book is complete and wasted. However, in view of the good performance in the past, I still give it five stars [crying]

Please add something later: Demon High School + New Demon King Contractor or the Outsourcing Princess? Remember that you can merge the world, thank you and Hakoba [smile]

I swear, this is my last death struggle. From now on, I will be the only one to let others struggle to their death. Four realms and five days, I will bear witness here. The soul is haunted by dreams, the wind and clouds are wandering, the heart is round and earthy, and the altar of the three realms is The door to the reincarnation of life and death is open, and the lead is washed away by killing and robbery. The reincarnation of the underworld locks the universe, and the resurrection of all things fixes the five realms The dead silence returns to its original position, and the ten saints open up, a glimmer of hope breaks through the chaos! I say that the people in front of you will wake up, I say that the people in front of you will be free from all diseases, I say that the people in front of you will have strong limbs, I say that the people in front of you will have sharp ears and eyes, I say that the darkness in front of you will be dispersed

Normal level, the taste of relatively ancient comprehensive comics is very pure. It doesn't feel like a book that should appear in Tomato. It feels like it should appear in The Cat Next Door and Fei Lu, especially the Invincible Wen, which is like Fei Lu, and this ancient feeling is concentrated in books written in 18 and 19 years.

It looks good, I love watching the training

The rest doesn't matter, but for the sake of my Majesty Morgan, keep writing, author

We all have old swords. If I don't sing a love song here, I want to see the blood flowing into the mouth of the river.

Isn't it a comic? Why is it just the moon?

The author quickly updated to Chaldea. By then, Nero, Matthew, Gutazi, and Gundu are all gone [Adored] Author, I think you have a suggestion for you, that is, after you finish writing this, put the Chaldean one first and put the other ones at the back, which are too much. The latter ones are too out of standard. You can write about other comprehensive comic worlds, such as Demon High School, God Killer and so on. This is my suggestion,

Overall, it's pretty good. It's a lot of fun, especially when I beat myself up [laughs evilly]

Why does the author write something so beautiful [crying][crying][crying]

So when will I bring the love song here, I have been waiting for this😭

The summoning and dungeon flow, the male protagonist is a male King Arthur, the plot progress is not delayed, and the overall reading is above the standard.

Why is it so beautiful? I want to see Britain's Shura field mouth!

How to say it? Succubus hero

Beautiful and rare style of writing Where did the system points go? Is this system just a portal?

In the early stage, the left brain competed with the right brain, and there was still a little bit of middle ground. Let's see.

Very fresh and very delicious Fate fans can abandon the book, and thank you for your companionship after finishing it

The plot is pretty good, and the combat power is not overwhelming. It's smooth so far, and there's nothing bad about it.

I would like to ask, will you create another template after finishing this template? This feels a bit weird

Didn't the protagonist accept Qing Ji? Did the author eat the book? People are missing

It's a pity, I wanted to see the main character, The Ritual of Two Removals, and The Twisted Queen When will Aige join the battlefield? What about the other two ceremonies?