I Treat You Like a Daughter, but You Want to Be My Wife?

It's not bad, it's eye-catching at first glance, and there are no big problems or bad points, but the emotional changes of the two little girls are written too fast. You can write more about the protagonist's correct guidance of the two girls (the experience of raising a baby) and the two girls' cognitive understanding and transformation of emotions. Western Fantasy can have a large map and background. It is completely possible to write a new map after writing the novice village in a large space, instead of being so eager to rise to love and marriage like now.

The writing is very interesting, Julia and Charlotte are both cute, but the protagonist Yuri is a boy or a girl. Sometimes I use 'she' and sometimes 'he' [full]

The world view setting is a relatively classic Western alternative world. I have read more than a hundred chapters. There were two beast tides but no soldiers or people died. The process was dangerous but the ending was a completely family-friendly ending. Generally speaking, it was a daily and warm story about raising a daughter with funny elements. It was warm to watch. However, the setting of the sister makes the protagonist feel a little aggrieved. It is not yet known how the author plans to portray the sister.

This morning when I was getting ready to go to work, my bed confessed my love to me. I didn't reject it or agree to it, it just kept hugging me.

The ending is a blast, the plot is compact and without any irritation. [Laugh]

People should be at the top of their game. Personally, I tend to be at the top. I have been raised as a harem, but the relationship progress is too slow. As of Chapter 261, I would like to report the current progress. The two little ones have confessed one after another. They signed the marriage contract but they were too young. The death of the river crab master is stipulated to have to wait for several years. The female knight's magic power is eroded and she can urinate and defecate anywhere. She swears that she belongs to the male protagonist physically and mentally. The sister discovers that the male protagonist It's not that the original protagonist was relieved but didn't express his love clearly. The Queen discovered that the male protagonist was the one who traveled back in time to help her when she was a child. He was slow in progress but dared to love and hate. Yuri is currently the slowest in progress. He didn't find out his identity. The male protagonist is a lolita control. Don't electrocute him and just shoot him.

Very pretty! It's pretty good among new books! Come on, author! Will keep reading!

I've read Chapter 100. For now, it's a perfect novel, but a common problem with this type of novel is that the ending may be shocking, or it may end suddenly or be boring, so I will review it after reading it, but for now, it's perfect [Blow a kiss] So touching [crying] The only shortcoming of this book is that there is relatively little description of Yuri's feelings. It's not clear how she fell in love with the male protagonist step by step. Although she has the identity of Blackadder, just writing a letter saying that she likes someone is a bit difficult to accept. But this novel is so good, I really like it [blowing kiss]

Not much to say, the male protagonist is a key partner of the State Grid

There are fewer and fewer people watching. Come on, author [Code]