I Treat You as My Daughter, but You Want to Be My Wife?

It's not bad, it's eye-catching at first glance, and there are no big problems or bad points, but the emotional changes of the two little girls are written too fast. You can write more about the protagonist's correct guidance of the two girls (the experience of raising a baby) and the two girls' cognitive understanding and transformation of emotions. Western Fantasy can have a large map and background. It is completely possible to write a new map after writing the novice village in a large space, instead of being so eager to rise to love and marriage like now.

The writing is very interesting, Julia and Charlotte are both cute, but the protagonist Yuri is a boy or a girl. Sometimes I use 'she' and sometimes 'he' [full]

The world view setting is a relatively classic Western alternative world. I have read more than a hundred chapters. There were two beast tides but no soldiers or people died. The process was dangerous but the ending was a completely family-friendly ending. Generally speaking, it was a daily and warm story about raising a daughter with funny elements. It was warm to watch. However, the setting of the sister makes the protagonist feel a little aggrieved. It is not yet known how the author plans to portray the sister.

This morning when I was getting ready to go to work, my bed confessed my love to me. I didn't reject it or agree to it, it just kept hugging me.

Very pretty! It's pretty good among new books! Come on, author! Will keep reading!

People should be at the top of their game. Personally, I tend to be at the top. I have been raised as a harem, but the relationship progress is too slow. As of Chapter 261, I would like to report the current progress. The two little ones have confessed one after another. They signed the marriage contract but they were too young. The death of the river crab master is stipulated to have to wait for several years. The female knight's magic power is eroded and she can urinate and defecate anywhere. She swears that she belongs to the male protagonist physically and mentally. The sister discovers that the male protagonist It's not that the original protagonist was relieved but didn't express his love clearly. The Queen discovered that the male protagonist was the one who traveled back in time to help her when she was a child. He was slow in progress but dared to love and hate. Yuri is currently the slowest in progress. He didn't find out his identity. The male protagonist is a lolita control. Don't electrocute him and just shoot him.

There are fewer and fewer people watching. Come on, author [Code]

Not much to say, the male protagonist is a key partner of the State Grid

It looks good, but I seem to have been criticized for commenting that the protagonist can be summoned by the gods as the original Ian Salted Chicken, otherwise the soul travel in the body of the original owner will be a poisonous point for some people [Thinking], of course the author can write whatever he wants, just giving a suggestion [shy]

I've read Chapter 100. For now, it's a perfect novel, but a common problem with this type of novel is that the ending may be shocking, or it may end suddenly or be boring, so I will review it after reading it, but for now, it's perfect [Blow a kiss] So touching [crying] The only shortcoming of this book is that there is relatively little description of Yuri's feelings. It's not clear how she fell in love with the male protagonist step by step. Although she has the identity of Blackadder, just writing a letter saying that she likes someone is a bit difficult to accept. But this novel is so good, I really like it [blowing kiss]

I think it's pretty good-looking, the contrast is really interesting

It's beautiful. It's my favorite book.

First of all, the harem unified five-star praise It's very good, it has the flavor of a harem comedy, and the plot setting is also online [full] It's worth watching whether you're a book lover or not [full]

The ending is a blast, the plot is compact and without any irritation. [Laugh]

I think it's quite interesting, a daily novel, the plot is quite to my liking, and Yuri isn't that annoying either. After watching it, I really want to watch it, but I feel that the ending is a bit fast. Maybe it's because I just watched the ending. I also want to see more of the daily life. The main reason is that the plot lines of his sister, the queen, and Carly are too rushed. Yuri likes the male protagonist and is a little too quick and blunt. At least the male protagonist is principled. Although he is a lolita control, he doesn't do anything inappropriate.

It's been a long time since I read Daughter, but the author always adds some seductive touches between the lines, which made me a little restless while reading it [smile]

I think the writing is pretty good, but why is the rating so low? Where is the copy [smile]

Very interesting novel

Beautiful, I like it very much! Warm and funny, I feel healed

First of all, I'm not a lolita fan. Secondly, just call me

Come on, that big brother who goes to the electric chair

It's a good novel, but not many people read it.

Daily updates of 8k are really good. Now the cultivation speed is a bit slow. When will we be able to harvest [sneaky laugh]

The plot and character settings are very interesting. The characters' dialogues reflect emotions and express the plot. Those who like Chinese-style Western fantasy should not miss it.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

So cool. Love watching. Love watching.

After listening to 14 chapters of this book, I felt that the writing style was a bit like an author I had seen. When I clicked on the introduction, it turned out to be you. I asked why the writing style felt so similar [shocked] I made a typo, it's Chapter 5

This is the book I grew up reading

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This book is very good, why is it rated so low?