Nightmare Corridor

The tasting is over. It is obvious that this article does not belong to Tomato, and must have been moved from somewhere. Overall, I can give it a 5-star rating. Although there are a lot of small detail flaws in it, it still looks pretty good if you ignore the past. There are more typos in the first half, but not much in the second half. As for the emotional line, I don't know if it's because I'm not good at writing it. In short, it feels very stiff. It can be said that I'm not very skilled. I can understand what kind of feeling he wants to express, but his description is not very experienceable. This and the typo are reversed. The first half of the emotional line is relatively average, but the later emotions can feel progress. It may also be partly due to the emotional line. In the copy of He and Death, I felt that the pace was really fast and I couldn't understand it. And in his case, I even felt that the relationship between the boss and Bai Lu was not a love affair. How should I put it? One is that she had to obey her husband due to feudal education, and the other was just because she rescued him and was moved by her perseverance. I don't deny that Bai Lu is a very good girl, and the logic actually makes sense. But overall, when I read it, I felt that the pace was very fast, and then it felt weird. The end is probably the end, but I feel like there are still a lot of things that haven't been made clear, such as did Qi Su stay in the end, and can they really be cured or wake up? Regarding the protagonist's part, it can be said that he is, but the other people's parts can be said to be biased towards oe. Well, the overall tone of it is to think about the good ending, so I am more inclined to also develop in a good way.

Although I have only read two copies, this book is really good to read, and Tsukuru is very well written! It's been a long time since I've found such a good novel about two heroes. There's been a serious shortage of books recently [cry][cry][cry] Ah Shi's identity feels very mysterious at the moment. I wonder if it has any connection with the main body of the game (it feels like it has a lot to do with it). Xiao You is also a very good person. Both of them are brave, kind and wise! In short, this book brought me back to the feeling I had when I read My Infinite White Moonlight [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] ps: This is the first book review I've written in a long time, maybe it's not very good [grievance]

It's very interesting, but the progress of the emotional line is a bit slow. Before reading this novel, I read in the comments section that the novel had been moved and deleted, but I searched and could not find this novel on other platforms except Tomato. You Xu doesn't have a long mouth. I don't like Xia Ye, I don't know why [thinking]. Why is Yu Xu so annoying in Prince's dungeon? Shi Huixing had to take the initiative to look for him every time. If he wanted to see Shi Huixing, wouldn't he go by himself? Sometimes you become a confidant and sometimes you like it. Do you like it or not? Can't say it directly

It's very beautiful. Every copy is full of surprises. The characters of Yu Xu and Shi Huanxing are both very good. Every character is very vivid. The relationship progress is a bit slow. I don't know where it came from. I want to see the uncut version😭

I really like this kind of short copy, not too long-winded. The emotional line is still very sweet.

I'd say 4~4.5⭐, The whole book is detailed and emotional > the plot. In the emotional line, you can see that the feelings of both parties are slowly changing as they get along, and both understand their own feelings through careful consideration. The emotional line is not abrupt; the general direction of the plot can be justified, but each copy is not very exciting, because Shi Huaixing is too strong, and the force value is higher than On top of all the dungeon bosses, the overly strong force value resulted in plots that should have been solved with more wits finally being broken through violently. There are only a dozen chapters in each dungeon, and the plots of each dungeon are not detailed enough. The infinite flow of wits and terror are not fully displayed, and the plot is not very watchable.

Real experience I listened to it at night Chapter 1 I was so scared that I couldn't sleep. The more I listen to it, the more excited I become

Yummy😋yummy😋I eat it hard

Very pretty, not bad