Western Fantasy: Slave Girl Alice18

Sylvie's cultivation method was delivered to our door. Our class would like to call it the strongest BOSS cultivation method. Overall, it's warm and non-toxic, and the heroine's delicate emotional changes are fully written out. Those who like to read stories with single female protagonists are in luck. However, if you think about the setting carefully, it is a bit inappropriate. If the "Asian Slavery System" does not strike, it is not enough for the male protagonist to redeem only one. Unless the one who redeems is the "King", then it will be different. [Think]

After reading nearly 100 chapters, it was very healing. The male protagonist raised a demi-human slave (the female protagonist) into an optimistic, cheerful and clingy little elf. Sometimes when I look at it, I feel that it would be a good experience if my girlfriend was a clingy little loli [laughing and crying]

It's so cool, the author, a god among gods. I haven't seen such a detailed and vivid psychological activity of a slave girl in several years. Come on, author, work hard to update. Let me read another chapter. I can do anything. When will the education and training

Healing article, reminds me of that girl Sylvie [Sending Hearts]

It's been a long time since I've seen such delicate writing. It makes me feel warm when I look at the corpse. Come on, author! Oh, by the way, I hope to see character design patches for the male protagonist and female protagonist in the future. Personally, I hope that the male protagonist's combat power will be at the ceiling and the female protagonist's family will be a hidden demi-human royal family. There is also hope that there will be no life-span theory. Can you add an alchemist or magician setting? I don't accept the life-span theory! Yaya! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

The author's subject matter is really good. I remember the first time I played that game, I really treated her like my daughter. Moreover, the writing style, plot, and inner activities are all very good. It's just that the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist too quickly. I think that under normal circumstances, when faced with a skeleton-like female protagonist, the male protagonist would raise her as his daughter, and then after a year or a few months, the female protagonist would grow up and touch the male protagonist by accident.

It's a somewhat flawed fairy tale, and it's a little unreasonable in some places, but overall it can be given a thumbs up.

Very warm, very healing, I feel the body is warm [shy] [blowing kiss]

A very good private redemption text, which makes up for teaching Feeling regrets that there is no detailed text. It is a novel based on Sylvia. At the beginning, I played this head-touching game with bad intentions. Later, I slowly discovered that this is actually a two-way redemption game. I slowly developed it and slowly took her out of the abyss of pain. I gradually felt the ray of hope called redemption. Facing the emergence of more and more versions and later facing the torture of work pressure, my mental state changed from depression to bipolar, and I started to play this game again (except for the forced cg). At other times, it was regarded as a development and redemption game, allowing me to hold on to the light called redemption. Unfortunately, this game has no ending. The author's private design makes up for the regret of not having a plot, and I hope to write a perfect ending.

Alice's character growth line is the biggest highlight. From a little slave who dared not even breathe, to a spoiled and clingy little wife who can act coquettishly and jealously, this transformation from cautious exploration to complete dependence is realistic and poignant. The setting of a single female protagonist also makes the emotional line extremely pure. There is no female supporting role to disrupt the situation, no bloody misunderstandings, only tenderness and preference that go both ways.

Gee, the sense of redemption is very healing [note]

It's good, it's a good book, but the logic is not very smooth. For example, the first time I took a bath, I said I wanted to stew meat, but later in the room, I thought I had seen a slave taking a bath before, and I don't have any idea of the heroine's height. She will be short and have no edges. , I could only hug the male protagonist's thigh, and after a while, he described the female protagonist's slender and straight legs when he took a second bath. And if he was a child, the male protagonist would not have reacted so violently, but it's okay, overall it's good. Anyway, I just read the book, and it's all good. [Like] [Like]

The writing is very delicate and the writing style is also very good. The plot is also very good, but I am tired of reading it. I feel like I have to replace a few similar sentences with a short story over and over again. The number of words in each chapter is too long, and one chapter cannot advance much of the plot. The pace is too slow, and I am a little tired of reading. It is a good work, but I am a bit unable to enjoy it. Maybe the Internet era has worn away my patience and I have no intention to fully appreciate a good work.

Maybe it's a problem with the short story? The rhythm is not handled very well in many places. As for the emotional description, although the sense of substitution is quite strong, the rationality is average. I originally wanted to give it 6 points, but after watching the corpse, Nuannuan made up for it a few points.

This book is an excellent healing article that I have read. It describes the characters, foreshadows and describes the environment. Each chapter has a clear storyline. From the beginning, the female protagonist was timid, inferior and broken. With the companionship and treatment of the male protagonist, she became strong and confident. And the female protagonist is not simply taken care of by the male protagonist. After reading it, I still think that the male and female protagonists help each other and accompany each other. Moreover, from the attitude and way in which the male protagonist treats the female protagonist from the beginning, it can be seen that the author knows the relevant aspects very well (it may be that I am not very talented and do not understand these things). In short, I hope that the female protagonist can be completely rescued from the darkness by the male protagonist, and I also hope that the author writes better and better, after all, it is not enough!

Shen He has already passed out in the toilet, it's so beautiful Ohohohohohoho [Adoration] (releases pheromones) Ohohohohohohohohohohohohohohoho

The ingredients are a bit mixed, like a Western fantasy but with some Eastern elements, but it doesn't seem too out of line with the protagonist's character. The heroine is also very cute. Overall, it's pretty good.

It's rare for an author to depict the small details in life that people hardly care about, let alone observe and record, so vividly and meticulously. Moreover, the portrayal of the characters' inner thoughts, personalities, and plots are very vivid and realistic, and the writing style is excellent. The most intuitive feeling is that the world in this book is more detailed and real, and the characters are more three-dimensional and palpable. Moreover, the author's chapters are different from popular online articles. They do not divide the chapters into chapters based on the number of words, but divide them into chapters from the perspectives of plot, emotion, time, etc. (Personal feelings). The detailed scenes before and after are well described, so that the story has a smooth continuity, and there is no such thing as over setting or forgetting details. [Eat melon][learned]

The description is very deliberate. Although I only saw thirty or forty pictures, the heroine was already very deliberate. She hurt the male protagonist several times because of her nervousness, but the description of the details is really speechless (//∇//). The characters of both the hero and the heroine are described very well.

Cultivation system + pure love + healing, full of elements! The male protagonist is gentle and restrained, while the female protagonist is cute and tough. From a slave to a well-loved baby, the growth line is super healing. There is no bloodshed, no female rivalry, only the sweetness of the flowing water and the warmth of mutual redemption. The writing is clean and comfortable, the pace is not lagging, and you will have a satisfying experience after watching it!

Reading this pure love novel with a single heroine, what moved me most was the single-minded, gentle and firm feeling in the story. There are no complicated entanglements or unnecessary ambiguities. From the beginning to the end, the protagonist's heart is only for one person. This kind of consistent love is clean and precious, which makes people feel particularly at ease when reading it. The author writes the heartbeat, temptation, and protection between boys and girls in a delicate and realistic way. Every time he approaches and every word of concern is hidden, there is a slowly fermenting tenderness. The emotional line is not impatient or bloody, but the water flows slowly, but the more you taste it, the sweeter it becomes. After reading it, my heart feels warm and I will believe that true love is dedicated, sincere and long-lasting. This is a very healing and pure novel, suitable for reading quietly

It's so awesome. It wrote everything I imagined that I couldn't sleep at night. It also gave me a Sylvie-like feeling.

After reading 30 chapters of this book, I, a repressed male high school student, felt like: bad things are just sugar-coated bullets! It's okay, the bullet core is still made of sugar. The benefits are many: The author describes the details very well; there are many plots that can make people's hearts beat; he writes the two characters in Weiguang Pavilion vividly. The shortcomings I think are: First: The shaping of the worldview is insufficient, at least not enough at present. Alice made an inadequate summary of Asians: they are good-looking, have a keen sense of smell, and have a high body temperature... This was very advantageous for survival before the development of civilization! How could he become a slave to humans? Second: This world feels very fragmented to me. It turns out that slavery and the capitalist system coexist (this can be seen from the fact that Ryan said that he can buy anything as long as he has enough money when paying wages in Chapter 29). This goes against the law of development of human civilization. (Although it is also available in the Earth Online 21.0 Version, it is not as blatant as in the novel) All in all, this is a novel that I really want to read. The desire to read her even surpassed that of the drama god. Come on, the author is big [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Very sweet and detailed. And I feel that if I start writing, there is a lot of potential, and there is a lot that can be written. The world view has not been developed yet, and the identity of the protagonist has not been written yet. Maybe I can take the heroine on an adventure together🤔 I don't know if the author has an outline for this, or if he just wants to write a daily story of mutual redemption.

Change it to a game. Really touching game. I hope the author can finish it [cry][cry]

The rhythm is good, but it smells like AI, so I dropped one star Overall, it's okay. It's a nice little sweet article.

It's not high quality. It seems that the character creation is relatively average at present, and it's a Western fantasy, but it still feels Chinese-style between the lines. The overall logic is reasonable but it doesn't stand up to scrutiny. It's just that I like the plot better.

It's really beautiful. I haven't seen such a delicate psychological description in a long time, and the portrayal is also very vivid. _______________________ Recognition from Laoxin

Pure love is invincible, beautiful, and the writing is detailed and detailed. This kind of sweet and redemptive writing is really like a clear stream in tomatoes. All I can say is: the amethyst hidden deep in the ground has finally seen the light of day and ushered in the sunshine that belongs to her.

The writing style is very delicate and not rushed, but it can always arouse my interest at critical moments, surpassing most similar novels, and the description of emotions is not stiff and natural. Several points made me dazzled as a grown man. The male protagonist has very upright views and really loves the female protagonist. The female protagonist also has a good personality and also loves the male protagonist deeply. They are each other's salvation, each other's support, and each other's spiritual harbor. This is the pure love I expect! And there are other things: It doesn't matter whether it's the male or female protagonist, other people in the town are also alive. Most people are very kind and simple. You give me respect and I give you kindness. I think this is why the male protagonist chose to live here after he retired from the army. To be honest, when I see this, my heart always feels warm and comfortable. The greatest advantage of this novel is that there is warmth in the ordinary, and there is plainness and warmth in the warmth. [Almost crying]