龙族：平行世界，开局拿下小天女

Regarding the issue of dealing with the uncle and aunt's family, I admit that this is my poisonous point. There must be many people who don't like it, but the part where Long San's uncle and aunt's family vented their anger for Lu Mingfei really touched me. They won't have any scenes in the later period. I really can't help it. I'm really sorry. Please don't scold me. [Crying] If you don't like the uncle and aunt's family, you can skip the second half of "Chapter 13 Before Leaving" and just read the first half. The first half of Chapter 13 is about Su Xiaoqiang, and the latter is the uncle and aunt's family. After Chapter 13, the uncle and aunt's family have no role to play. Lu Mingfei has broken off with them and has lost contact with them.

Personally, I think it's very beautiful, and the processing is in line with expectations. In the previous chapter, Dalu said that after Cassel said he was monitoring him, he felt something was missing, so he skipped a paragraph and jumped to what Guderian said, but it did not affect the reading. 6 Stars are good, and it is a good work [laughs]

Please support the author. The writing is okay, but the writing style is a bit problematic. It is rare to write a pure dragon plot that does not imitate Jiangnan's writing style. It is a type that loses its brain and looks very smooth.

It's good, but it feels a bit unpopular.

Four stars. I personally feel that a fanfic should not be described in a one-sided manner. And especially dragon fanfics. After all, the Dragon Clan novel is so easy to get points and so easy to write. What I want to see is that the author does have some flaws in some of the plot arrangements in the article. But not bad. ,

Well, it's a bit like the other one

Fans who like to watch Lu Su

In fact, Jiangnan is the one who writes fan fiction.

Okay, group portrait, the plot behind it is really novel

You must finish it, author

Able to see, good to see, love to see

It looks good, the author should work hard!

Great publication, no need to say more

No poke, no poke, no poke

Looks good, keep working hard

It's very interesting, author, come on [laughing evilly]

Yes, come on, author

Please support me, it's well written.

Well, yes, compared to the original work,

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It's very beautiful and suits my taste, but I don't know why no one sees it.

Yes, it's a great book with a lot of potential.

The writing is good and the content is comforting. It deserves a reward.

It's a relatively good fanfic.

Very nice. As an old bookworm, this book is worth reading in Tomato.

It's pretty cool, why haven't you divided it yet?

Give points, give points to the author, otherwise it won't be fun if he cuts it [face covering]

This book is okay. Mainly because it is the author's first book. It is very good. The point is that this is the only book in Tomato that I have read, where the second road and Su Xiaoqiang have no harem. The second road crosses the timeline of the first road, so there are two roads. One road and Su Xiaoqiang have no harem. The setting of the second road to make up for regrets and Hui is very clever. It's just that I see that the author's replies to other people's comments and his own comments at the end of the chapter seem to have poor traffic, and then the author is a bit unfinished, which is a pity.

If it could be changed to Su not really liking Zhao Menghua, but because of Lu Mingfei's slip of the tongue. Then I became obsessed with winning. Just fine.

Five Star supports every Lusu Party