The Starting Point Is Nascent Soul, and a Casual Cultivator Is a Poor Person.

It's quite good-looking. In my mind, it's all about cultivating immortality. It's all about profit and not the Virgin. It's the kind where you just give resources to women when you see them. The kind of tsundere with a background that makes you feel interesting when you see the protagonist. Finally, it's a normal story, but it's a bit sparse. The characters and plots are very delicate.

The current temperature of the water is suitable, non-toxic, and the sugar content is not high [laughing] You can rest assured that you won't be poisoned, you won't get diabetes, and you won't watch Red Temperature [laughing] The combat power is reasonable, the decent villains are not brainless, and the old monster's IQ is online [laughing]

It's very interesting. He's more ruthless than Han Li but not as bad as Fang Yuan. Gold Finger is very weak and is of no use in improving his cultivation, but sometimes it can play a key role. The novel itself omits the need to start directly from the semi-tape stage because Gold Finger is weak and unhappy in the early stages so that it won't be boring.

The writing is very good. Although the protagonist Goldfinger is weak, he has a good brain. It is worth reading.

It's pretty good. At least I didn't poop my crotch in Tomato, and my combat power was not messed up. At least there was no cross-realm killing, and there was no female protagonist. However, many people in the comment area are people who have spent thousands of hours in Tomato. As soon as the author writes about women, some people in the comment area feel like they are suffering from PTSD. They immediately start to suffer from morning sickness, wondering whether this woman will continue to appear in the article later.

The writing is very good, the realm, and the plot are all reasonable. It would be great if the author could persist a little longer. Many authors take a long time to write before they become popular. Insect Killer only made a few dollars after writing 800,000 words. After finishing the first book, he didn't make much. In fact, the author is writing like this Once the traffic of a book is not good, it will be more difficult to publish a new book because readers like books with a certain number of words. Even if the new book is better, readers are too lazy to wait. This is a book that I have been chasing for a long time. It is a pity that it ended like this. Finally, I hope the author's new book will have good results.

It's so good. I'll love to watch more. The old devil is very cautious and decisive, and the reversal on the front line is something I didn't expect. ૮ ˙Ⱉ˙ ა

I suggest you start slowing down the pace. After all, Yuanying can write very long stories, and the audience is willing to read them. Also, the people and events that Qingyouzi Yuanying met in the past can be drawn out through encounters with old friends and foreshadowing, which can improve a lot of things. Otherwise, although we are in a fast-paced era now, the best way is to attract readers at the beginning of the novel and slow down the flow later.

To be honest, this book is really good according to what I read in Tomato, and the data looks okay. It's a pity that the author can't stick to it, otherwise he would have scored more than 8.5 Points no matter what.

The number of Nascent Soul monks feels a bit too much. We can add more low-level monks to set it off. You can write some dungeons where the old demon hides his realm and then reveals his strength at critical moments. This kind of thing looks very cool. Overall, the novel has a bit of a mortal look to it, I like it very much

After reading the new chapters, it's really good. It's just that the main character doesn't want to be a casual cultivator, but seems to have a backer. It feels too arrogant.

The plot is very good, and Goldfinger is not out of place in it! The opening of Yuan Ying also has a unique flavor, but I don't know how to explain the protagonist's early journey, whether it will be interspersed or a side story at the end. In addition, I hope the author will not use eunuchs [Thinking] Come on, author!

The beginning is Nascent Soul. So far it's still very good. The plot is rather cliche and the writing is mediocre, but at least the protagonist is decisive in killing and can be read with Yuanying's acting style. Moreover, this novel satisfied my fantasy of Qing Yizi's one-shot. [Sinister smile]

It's good-looking, the starting point is high, it's not frustrating, and the room for growth is high. I just hope that the protagonist will only follow his own path, not be greedy for the world, not want a heroine, and not be ambiguous [currently working on the draft] [blowing kiss] [learned]

Okay, okay, it was originally on the recommendation list. I ordered it casually out of boredom, but I didn't expect it to look good. It was okay, and it was originally on the recommendation list. Boring, random order. I didn't expect it to be quite good, but there was too little of it, and it ended before I could get enough of it.

Anyway, it's what I like. Recently, the story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality has been stopped, and the withdrawal reaction is severe. I urgently need the work of Mortal Cultivation to Immortality to save my life. This Mortal Flow is full of flavor, and has a strong sense of substitution. The world view and combat power values ​​are not broken, and the character creation is remarkable. It can be called the best work in Mortal Flow. I hope that fellow Taoists will encourage you to update. We, readers, have seen through it and I am very grateful.

I saw Chapter 24. It was very interesting. The male protagonist fought for his life. The rating was too low. It was just a pile of tomatoes. This book should be rated at least 9 points. Also, there are relatively few chapters. Does the author have any other books or any good books to recommend?

It looks good, but it doesn't have the air of a time traveler. What I like is that it has a character that is close to the local world. It is calm and a little fairy-like. It looks good!

It looks good. I hope it will have a female protagonist. After all, the Dharma couple has a lot of money.

Yuan Ying started off pretty cool, and there are no bad points at the moment. I hope it will be a steady flow without a female protagonist, but it's better not to have emotional dramas.

The writing style is pretty good. When I'm either fighting or on the way to fight, it's a pity that it's not my cup of tea. I get bored easily.

This book is really good, and it is a high-quality book among the mortals. However, there is no hook in the front and middle of the book, and it becomes a bit boring later. Then the author does not describe too much about the physical aspects and spiritual roots, but in general, the flaws are not concealed.

The plot is fascinating and so good to watch.

To be honest, I didn't want to read it when I first started reading it. But after reading about 100,000 words at 7:00, I felt that it was okay and I could read it. After reading more than 20 chapters and what the author said, I wanted to comment. Taoist friend wrote well.

The plot is clever, and the system is just a paid appraisal assignment, so it doesn't affect anything. It gives me a sense of familiarity that I had when I read The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality. It's mainly for the praise of the author, who updates it three times every night [please take a closer look]

Tomato is a rare good book, and it really deserves five stars. It's a pity that the author has no patience

It's okay in all aspects, it has the feeling of cultivating immortals, but there is nothing new and it is not attractive to me💜💜💜💜💜34.2. 💙/💜/💜💙/💜💙💙/💙/💜💙

Non-toxic and edible, Qidian Yuan Ying is quite novel, a bit like Wang Mazi and Mortal, but the new book is not enough to read.

I'll go, it's so good. I haven't watched Immortal for so long. I thought I was tired of it. But I became addicted to Immortal again. I've read more than 30 chapters now. I don't think there's anything bad about it. It's very interesting. The author should update it quickly. It's not enough for me. I think the writing style is also very good. Especially when I saw the death of Dao He, I thought it was very interesting. I don't have many rich words, but it's really interesting. 😁

It's so good that I finished it in a short time [laughing evilly]😋😋😋👍👍