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WOC, Zhan Hei looks very energetic to me, and his writing style is also quite good.

With the author's writing style, any sports novel will be popular. The logic is clear, concise and powerful. It is a difficult choice to choose James (there are too many negative fans), but I admire the author's character, insist on what needs to be persisted, and believe in the process! What is supposed to come will come!

I like James. Your choice of subject matter is very good and your writing style is also good. This must be affirmed. But when I read the part about signing with Nike, including the part about the previous playoff games, you set up a lot of subtitles in one chapter. I am not very used to this way of writing, which makes reading the book very fragmented and emotionally disconnected. And I pay more attention to statistics. When I read the part about substitutions in the second season, I clearly remembered that Donyel Marshall was traded and replaced, but you also included him in your article. These data errors greatly affect reading. And when I read this position, I basically only saw the starting five, and never saw the complete roster. I guess you were confused when writing it yourself, and it felt quite perfunctory. The book is okay, but there are many areas that need to be optimized. If optimized, it should be a good book.

It looks good, but it focuses too much on describing the strength of the opponent and James' inner activities, and ignores the fear and powerful intimidation of others when they see James. It can be more interesting. After all, James is a super cool male protagonist in the early stage (except for 11 years and Wu Xing Yong)

It's indescribable immersion. I haven't read a novel like this for a long time. The NBA this season is also different from the past. I just read the game report highlights. This novel sparked a lot of reverie in me. What if other stars went back in time? I have to say, wonderful! Extremely exciting!

Although it is a cool article, it is very real. There is no system or superpower. Almost all the successes of the protagonist James are achieved through hard work and the help of teammates. It is just like playing games, it is not a one-person thing. The author feels very professional, which is really rare.

Five-star encouragement, but I still have to say that James does not need to be afraid that when his skills are perfected, people will suspect that he has traveled through time. I don't understand what to hide in this. Everyone will blame it on talent. You deliberately pretend not to know a technical move during training, and then practice it again, just to confuse others and prevent them from doubting you. Isn't this too outrageous? I have a question. You said that Korver is a veteran. He only entered the league in 2003. Why is he a veteran? There is also Ray Allen, a scorer who averaged 26.4 Points per game in the 2006-07 season. You just wrote him as Ray Allen of the Heat.

The author writes well [like] but needs to pay attention to some details. As someone who also grew up with his mother, I think James may have lost his attachment to his so-called biological father a long time ago, let alone James who was 35 years old before his rebirth and was already the father of several children. So there is really no need to insist on becoming a father for Lao Zhan. On the contrary, his father's absence has always been one of the biggest motivations for James to become James. Zhan Miliu.

I can only say that the author's understanding of basketball is really unparalleled. Everyone he writes about is flesh and blood, and there is no prejudice or slander against any star. I can only say that this is the first such good book I have read since watching the NBA.

It is written very objectively and does not criticize anyone just to flatter certain groups. It has an appreciation for everyone [Like]

The writing is very good, but I feel that Lao Zhan has become too calm. Although he has many years of experience, he feels a little bit less happy than himself. After reading many chapters, I didn't see Lao Zhan's wife. I remember that Lao Zhan had brownies when he was 18 years old.

It's well written, worth reading, not exaggerated and realistic.

The writing is really good and touching. I have a small suggestion. I hope the author will change the cover of the book to make it more attractive [Blow kiss]

Although I despise James, the author's writing style can make up for this dislike in me. (Compared with Tomato's brainless style, the writing is closer to Mr. Yang's starting point) The literary talent is good, but the authenticity in many places needs to be improved.

It looks good and feels interesting, but it's a little messy inside. I hope the author will work hard and continue to correct it. It looks good, but there are some details. Pay attention to them.

There's no need to be so depressed, you have to feel refreshed to look good

Okay, I'm a James fan and I like to watch it gogogo brothers, please give a good review if it looks good, give the author a big bonus, and ask the author to update it more.

Good! Very well written

Not bad, worth seeing, come on

Very true, Jamie is worth recommending

The details are so well written.

Good looking, Lao Zhan fans will stay

Well written, thank you author.

Support it. Support it.

The writing is good, I look forward to finishing it. Refreshing and hearty.

Well written and worth reading

Come on, come on, come on

Just pay more attention to the details. [I learned] Keep up the good work

If the author made fewer mistakes, the book would not have a lower rating.

Good book, the author has special knowledge