Traveling through Konoha, you get the Admiral, Akainu template at the beginning.
Kyuubi goes berserk? Eat a big fire breath from me.
Uchiha Madara: Do you want to dance too?
Ye Yu: Overlord color, entanglement, and ghost dog.
Sage of Six Paths: Do you know what the power of six paths is?
Ye Yu: What did Jili Gulu say? Eat my Domineering, Melting, and Star-Breaking Cannon!
Otsutsuki Kaguya:......
Ye Yu: Well...
Reader comments
The author's writing is very good, keep it up, as long as nothing pops up in the middle that shouldn't be there, especially if the heroine is like this, it would be better if she doesn't need a heroine. Keep writing until the battle, and it will be even better when it comes to Boruto, and then the battle with Otsutsuki should be better.
Not to mention how good it is, it's okay. However, the understanding of the Haki Fruit is not clear. Kizaru blasted Marco's head, and Marco's recovery ability declined before he was supported by the Sea Tower Stone. In comparison, Garp's attack was blown to the sky. Few people regard the bandage on Marco's forehead as Garp's credit. In fact, the attack position matches Kizaru's. The output of powerful fruits is beyond the reach of Haki. Haki is used for defense, and civil war among those with abilities is the way to go.
The problem now is that the protagonist has an obvious villainous attitude, and once people get the inheritance of Akainu, they actually think that Akainu does not have the overlord color. The early life cards in the Garp do not have the overlord color, and they do not show that they have the overlord color. There was no overlord color throughout the Warring States period, but the life card still showed the overlord color. I think most people overestimate domineering power and underestimate fruits. The output of top-level fruits cannot be compared to domineering power.
Xiaobai prefers to read the classic Wudi Wenba
The writing is okay, at least the first 25 chapters are okay. It's a bit OOC, but overall it's quite enjoyable if you watch it without thinking. The most important thing is that there is no pressure, which makes it more comfortable.
The writing is very good, and it's very enjoyable to read later.
It's a very good fan fiction book, and the plot is particularly good.
It's not bad. Just don't worry about it.
It's very interesting. Come on, the author. It would be better if there were more words in each chapter.
Very good. He's invincible without pretending, and he's not overly nosy either.
Very speechless. . , Do you have to have a steel hand again? Can't other heroines do it?
It's interesting, come on!
Invincible, yet still timid
It's my favorite style
I'm not good at commenting
So far, it's very well written.
Wow, this is so awesome!
The author is awesome
Pretty good Naruto story
Get out that day without the wall
Pretty good, well written
I've been watching it for a long time, so I'll give it five stars.
Awesome, don't talk about other things, how is your life? Have you ever had barbecue?
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.
Good, good, good, good, good, good
It's a rare 🔥 fanfic written from a passionate and funny perspective. The original work was originally written in a passionate and funny direction, so why is there so many conspiracies?
The author's writing is very good, keep it up, as long as nothing pops up in the middle that shouldn't be there, especially if the heroine is like this, it would be better if she doesn't need a heroine. Keep writing until the battle, and it will be even better when it comes to Boruto, and then the battle with Otsutsuki should be better.
Not to mention how good it is, it's okay. However, the understanding of the Haki Fruit is not clear. Kizaru blasted Marco's head, and Marco's recovery ability declined before he was supported by the Sea Tower Stone. In comparison, Garp's attack was blown to the sky. Few people regard the bandage on Marco's forehead as Garp's credit. In fact, the attack position matches Kizaru's. The output of powerful fruits is beyond the reach of Haki. Haki is used for defense, and civil war among those with abilities is the way to go. The problem now is that the protagonist has an obvious villainous attitude, and once people get the inheritance of Akainu, they actually think that Akainu does not have the overlord color. The early life cards in the Garp do not have the overlord color, and they do not show that they have the overlord color. There was no overlord color throughout the Warring States period, but the life card still showed the overlord color. I think most people overestimate domineering power and underestimate fruits. The output of top-level fruits cannot be compared to domineering power.
Xiaobai prefers to read the classic Wudi Wenba
The writing is okay, at least the first 25 chapters are okay. It's a bit OOC, but overall it's quite enjoyable if you watch it without thinking. The most important thing is that there is no pressure, which makes it more comfortable.
The writing is very good, and it's very enjoyable to read later.
It's a very good fan fiction book, and the plot is particularly good.
It's not bad. Just don't worry about it.
It's very interesting. Come on, the author. It would be better if there were more words in each chapter.
Very good. He's invincible without pretending, and he's not overly nosy either. Very speechless. . , Do you have to have a steel hand again? Can't other heroines do it?
It's interesting, come on!
Invincible, yet still timid
It's my favorite style
I'm not good at commenting
So far, it's very well written.
Wow, this is so awesome!
The author is awesome
Pretty good Naruto story
Get out that day without the wall
Pretty good, well written
I've been watching it for a long time, so I'll give it five stars.
Awesome, don't talk about other things, how is your life? Have you ever had barbecue?
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.
Good, good, good, good, good, good
It's a rare 🔥 fanfic written from a passionate and funny perspective. The original work was originally written in a passionate and funny direction, so why is there so many conspiracies?