Slam Dunk: Starting with the Kuroko’s Basketball Template, I Cross Up Rukawa

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This novel... Is what I have always wanted to read, a novel in which the skills and templates of Kuroko Basketball are used in Slam Dunk or NBA!

The writing is good, but skills control the protagonist and the protagonist controls skills are two different concepts. What I first want to see is that the protagonist works step by step through the system to use the abilities of the Age of Miracles for personal use, instead of being controlled by skills and having to switch templates back and forth.

What do you say? If it was an old author, it would definitely be one to two stars, a negative review. But if you are new, just encourage it. The disadvantages are many. I won't list them one by one. But it's better to say it once or twice. A question of coolness. It's okay if the protagonist is lazy or something. But what is important is that the team does its best. Instead of winning, he fell into a huge headwind, and the protagonist took action. This is enough to change the situation in an instant. Just like the scene in Lingnan. , Seems to have used some skills, seems to have scored a few goals. But the sense of existence is really thin. I feel that the presence of immortality in that period is higher than his. In short, it means dealing with the problem. The physical strength of the protagonist in the early stage is definitely a weakness. So it can be roughly described like this. The team was caught in a headwind. The protagonist comes to the rescue. But don't let the protagonist find his own reasons. He is a salty fish, and his mentality is that of a salty fish. , When the system's punishment has not been used once, and the pain has not been tasted. Don't change this setting. It's up to the coach or teammates to open the door for him to play. Then the protagonist lives up to expectations and turns the situation around in a flash. Can be set within 5 minutes or 10 minutes. After being behind by more than 30 points, we caught up with all our skills and firepower. Then you can describe a physical crisis or something. It can be done as messy as it is, anyway, it is the climax of a period, and it must feel like flying. Not like what you wrote. I want to feel good, but I just can't feel good.

Well written and very detailed. Not that kind of hydrological detail. But the disadvantage is also this, a game is very long, and there is definitely no substitute for chasing books. You can only watch one game after finishing it. Then it depends on the author's update efficiency. He really started to mess with other people's games. The protagonist disappears for more than ten chapters.

Come on, it's supposed to be fun like this, and it's not too over the top to ruin the characters. It's more friendly to fans of the original work. It's cool. It's the first time I feel like this kind of cheating is real. Other types of it are just belittling the original characters, and then it's over the top, and I don't understand it. It's fake and fake.

Why is the score so low? It's very good-looking, and there's no bullshit heroine or anything like that. It's a good book. One more thing, never have a female protagonist. A person who can't wake up every day, whose physical strength is not up to standard, and who still practices hard. If he only spends 5 seconds talking to the heroine, I will collapse.

The more than 240 pictures so far are generally good, and it is a breath of fresh air in Tomato Basketball articles, but there are still problems. In theory, the latest chapter should be said to be in a semi-crushing state from the first leveling game to the present, but the feeling is still not much different from the first chapter. There are obviously many descriptions of training, including Rukawa Kaede's hard training. In Nian and Sakuragi's Awakening, the growth aspect should be theoretically full. It cannot be said that it can crush most teams 100%, but it has to be evenly pushed to the remaining 10%. The results still feel like it is repeating the process of everyone except the protagonist being defeated - the protagonist comes on to show off - and wins the game. At least it has to last until half-time when it is exhausted. Even if you write about surviving a half-time beating and being beaten by 20 points, the protagonist comes in to recover, I think it is reasonable. Also, the protagonist is too pretentious. I really jumped to watch the part when Akashi awakened. It seemed a bit too exciting and written at the top. Many words were used a few times and it was enough. I really didn't follow the update of Akashi's part for several days. Furthermore, I spent a lot of time writing about the battle between the other two schools. I didn't read those 10 or so chapters. They have nothing to do with the main plot and are not considered branch plots. Just watching the battle has no specific meaning. Generally speaking, the rest is pretty good. The use of skills and pretentiousness can be regarded as making full use of various templates. There are not many people who write about black basketball, and even fewer who write well. Come on.

I think it's pretty good. I don't know why the score is so low. It's much better than those 8/9 scores that were painted out in a bunch. You can watch the protagonist draw the pen, and the fight is balanced. The characters are not broken. Sometimes there are daily routines. It's very passionate.

To be honest, only those who have watched Slam Dunk can understand how vivid the images in the author's words are. The author's description of those scenes in this novel always brings to mind those famous scenes while watching Slam Dunk. The author is so awesome [Blowing Kiss] His writing skills are really good, and he made up for our regrets. I really don't understand why the rating is so low? For those who really don't understand, go and watch Slam Dunk before watching it.