Kuaiwen: What's Wrong with the Frail Heartthrob Who Eats Soft Food but Insists on It?

At first I thought it was some cliché drama about time travel and escape, and I didn't watch it with any special expectations. It wasn't until I finished watching it with tears in my eyes that I felt I had seen it right. The first is to give everyone an ending, everyone has something, and everyone is not lacking. This is the real give-and-take, and everyone who eats all is happy and satisfied. I really have been feeling sorry for each couple. . . Second, the writing style is very good, not flashy rhetoric, clean and straightforward expression of feelings, comfortable. The metaphor is very good, but through the words you can really feel the anger of the characters, just like real people. Third, the rhythm and plot are well controlled, leaving everyone with their own emotional development process, allowing people to understand and understand why they love and why they have to do it. The fourth is to fill in the gaps. Even the small supporting characters use words to shape their images in the ending. The words are very short, but very vivid. Finally, I also hope that the author can continue to maintain the writing style you like and the plot you want to write. Thank you for bringing us such a good article!

It's very shocking. This is what I really feel about delicate writing and smooth emotional lines. The plot of the whole article is just right, there is no inexplicable love and hate, and there is no abuse for the sake of abuse. The protagonist has a gentle personality, but he has never been wronged too much. He will always live a good life on his own, nestled in a soft bed, whether sleeping or playing with his mobile phone. These descriptions make people feel soft. Xie answers love with actions, Qi gradually learns to love, and Si expresses love. Everyone has distinctive characteristics and personality, and they are not a cookie-cutter template. When I saw the ending of HE, it felt like a dream, a bubble that would burst with just a prick, separated from the previous plot, and not very realistic.

The writing is very good and the characters are well created. I selfishly want to make them happier. The four little bitter gourds made me cry several times. Be more happy

Very shocking, very well written! The first small world is a bit sad, and the characters are described in a three-dimensional way. Everyone can't help themselves, and they can't help themselves... I can really feel everyone's inner thoughts from their identity and standpoint, feel their psychological activities, and understand their entanglement, unwillingness, possession, and love. Xie's unwillingness after being abandoned, Qi's persistent love, Si's cautious desire, and Shen's inner struggle when walking through the plot, as well as the transformation from anger and fear at the beginning to being slowly domesticated after being imprisoned... The writing is really delicate and delicate! While I was reading it, I kept marveling at how you could write so well! The psychological activities are so real, I really feel that they are really alive in the book! The teacher's writing style is really strong! The plot is very well written, without any template or routine. This is the most eye-catching book I have read in the past few weeks! ! I will update every day! !

There are several NPCs who are not facial makeup, and their sincerity can be seen in the delicate plot and emotions. The male protagonist is also very fragrant. Even though he tries his best to play the role of a vain and shallow character, the fragrance of his soul is still lingering.

It is simply shocking and delicious [Love] [Love] [Love] The early days of Xie and Chao Chao were simply an old married couple living a normal and sweet life. I always thought that the card left by Chao Chao would make Xie feel soft when they reunited later, and later resolved the conflict [almost crying] [almost crying] It was the time when I liked the old married couple the most. I wanted to hate Xie but knew I shouldn't hate him. If there were no conflicts and tasks, they could stay together in an ordinary way. I really like Qi's line but I always feel that it's not the real Chao Chao, he's just playing a role and his character is wrong. That's not him. I was so immersed in the role that I thought Chao Chao had changed. [Crying] Qi's he line in the extra episode is delicious With my roommates, I can only feel so tired. Every time I finish a mission and return to the rented house, I still have to maintain my character. The first world I see makes me die [crying] I hope the second world will be sweeter and kinder to Chao Chao. In the ending, I personally hope Chaochao can escape painlessly, and I can feel sad and remorseful as others torture me to death. Don't abuse Chaochao, don't abuse Chaochao, don't abuse Chaochao! I think Chao Chao is a weak and cold person. Because of his poor health, he doesn't like to move and likes to read in a daze. He seems slow only in terms of emotions, but he is sensitive to the warmth and coldness of the world. A person who is very sensitive to other people's emotions. A very gentle baby, sincere to sincere, if there is no mission, I feel that Chao Chao will really fall in love with them. Later, the image of Chao Chao was perverse and indulgent. He felt guilty at the beginning when doing tasks, but there was not much description later. The character description is very similar to the mission character, but I always think that it is Chao Chao who is immersed in doing tasks. This is not his character.

The following is for reference only and is purely personal experience: you can read it without thinking if you are rushing to write. I think some books really need to be read by yourself to taste them. This book is very suitable to my taste and I can give it a high rating. I am the kind of person who can enjoy both sweet and cruel things. I don't care about attack and control, but only watch the plot. The first world is not a cool novel in the market sense, it is sour. The psychological description of each character's mental journey is very real and detailed. If you read it, you will put yourself into that character and stand in the other person's position and point of view to think about why, especially the BE ending of Si and Qi in the end (because I only wrote this now). It's very powerful, and I can tell that the author has put a lot of effort into creating these characters. There are flaws, but I think the flaws are outweighed by the flaws for me, and the author is really trying his best to satisfy people who want to eat sweets and eat knives. He can write both HE and BE, but I don't recommend not watching it, so I don't watch the ending of BE. It's too shocking. The ending of BE is Li Si In the dialogue with my sister in the plot, Niuniu's "Is uncle a bad person?" The police's reply made me cry on the spot, "He just did something wrong, but he is not a bad person." Si's guilt has to move forward. As a victim of a structured environment, the family relationship between him and his sister is the real family relationship, and the target of the attack is not aimed at his sister. Sister, she did not target Si, but directly pointed at Si's parents, who symbolized this structural error, and pointed out their hypocrisy. However, Si was a kind person. The last sentence "The bowl of blood relatives was always filled, and he did not dare to pour it out until weeds grew wildly from his throat and entangled the unspoken spring." It made me feel numb. Qi's sadness comes from nothingness. Compared with Si's heroic ending, it's really hard for me to describe Qi's ending. He spent his whole life for his family and had no self, so he didn't understand love. It was the protagonist who gave him warmth and gave him the feeling of home. But it was too late for Qi to realize love. The author also wrote very well about Qi, "After all, the jade is broken without a trace, the fire is extinguished into ashes, and in front of a full hall of cheering spectators, he plays a reunion where no one goes to the appointment." It was really hard for me to let go after reading it. I just felt that it was too delicate, the interpretation of love and the cause and effect of hate. Shen's character is also very good. The only flaw is that there is not much description of Shen's inner feelings during the tasks. It is a bit regretful, but I still want to say that the flaws are not concealed. The author also humbly accepted many people's suggestions and said that he plans to revise the article later. It really feels very good and has great stamina. After reading it, I feel a little dead, but I have to wait for the HE episode soon, so I am alive again. I hope the author can continue to do more.

Da Da must keep writing. I really like Da Da's writing style. Is this the kind of writing that Tomato can have? It even has the flavor of a classic? And it doesn't feel like having sex with your teeth. It's completely bland but interesting. . . . . I like it very much

I finished reading it tonight. It was very good. The sourness and pull were very touching. The teacher's writing style is also very good! ! ! ! ! ! I used to prefer this kind of sour text, and I didn't have many books to read. In the afternoon, I read the teacher's text and read it casually. I read it without realizing it. Teacher, I love you so much ꒰ᐢᵒ̴̶̷̤³ᵒ̴̶̷̤ᐢ꒱♡ It's been a long time since I've read such a "delicious" text. It's so magical. I couldn't stop reading it! Don't miss this novel if you like this feeling! Come and see! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Teacher Ni, you should have a good rest. Don't be tired or idle. When can you see the explosion of liver?

I originally read this novel about the charming beauty Shou Xiaotian. I was so moved as soon as I finished reading the first world. During this period, I lamented countless times that the writing style is so good. The characters' emotions are described very delicately. When I read it, I didn't feel like I was reading a novel. , Like a literary film, I watched it with a somewhat picky attitude at first, but later I was really impressed by the author [crying] [crying] [crying]. I actually met such a powerful author in 🍅. With just one sentence, I gave him a rating! ! ! !

The author would like to express some personal feelings. First of all, the author's writing style is really good. Some sentences can be said to be golden, and they are very touching. Secondly, the author's character creation is also very full. Really, both Xie and Gong Er are very charming. Gong San is a little less charming but still okay. The protagonist Shou's charm is especially reflected in Gong Yi's relationship. It feels like he is a charismatic person who has broken through the limitations of the system. As a result, the character of the protagonist Shou in the later part is not very similar to that in the previous part. It feels a bit disconnected. He is so ruthless towards Xie in the later part, a bit like an NPC who just wants to complete the task. The existence of the system is even more hateful, like a pure evil person. Personally, I feel a little bad. The narrative and plot of the story are not well constructed, and it's a bit BE for the sake of BE, but in fact, the three attacks are very good. But maybe because the title of the book is money-worshiping and it requires constructing such a character, it was difficult to write. I think the author's literary talent and the shaping of the story in each unit are enough to shape a good story. In other words, the first story can also be written as a happy ending, with NPs all together. The storyline can have twists and turns, but the ending does not need to be so cruel and abrupt. Maybe it's my personal preference, but it's a bit uncomfortable to see a novel with very warm characters and successful character creation but strange story development. I would prefer a better ending. Although there are extra chapters at the end, the main text is too depressing. It's just my personal thoughts, don't mind the author.

Let's have a little more happiness, Shen Suichao꒦ິ^꒦ິ I think the pairing of Chao Chao and Xiao Xie is so sour, that kind of early rental house literature, and also, if there is no system, Chao Chao might be able to live peacefully with Xiao Xie. How wonderful is that... Give a little love to Shen Sui Chao... Xiao Xie was so kind to Chao Chao in the early days. I don't know what he will do to Chao Chao in the future. I hope I won't do anything I regret… (ps, can you clear up the misunderstanding quickly) I think the large writing style really made my heart ache.

What a fairy, what a fairy! So pretty! ! Why is my wife so awesome? I can't stop looking at her. I love this wet smell. It makes me so happy! Can you update 10,000 words a day? ! ~\(≧▽≦)/~

I just finished watching the first world at 3 o'clock in the morning. I'm so damn happy [crying][crying][crying] My tears are almost dry. I won't say anything anymore. Just wash it for me under control. The author is very attentive. Every character has EF lines, some are 1V1 individually, and some are together. , It simply satisfied the fantasy of all the endings, and every ending was very good, not a single attack was out of place, the last 1V3 really made me happy to death, the author must be a god, and the final biographies of Niu Niu and the others really made me cry to death. "Mom is not a shrew, she is a hero." The sunlight stretched the shadows of the mother and daughter very long, casting them on the dusty ground. They were crooked, but tightly nestled together, as if they were trying to find their own way out of this hard world, not so straight but solid enough. [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] Goddess, come on, you must continue writing, the old slave will always follow you [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

It's really beautiful. The few words express their love for Sui Chao very delicately. The fast-travel stories I've watched before were all about the protagonists teasing each other to get in love with each other, but in this one, Sui Chao brought out their desires and the meaning of life. BeThe ending is inevitable for things to happen. This is their life. It feels like the characters are already very rich. It's just like a dream they had, so forget it, but they regret it. It's very well written. I've only read the first world but I can't wait to write a review. Come on, work harder and write more. Can I bring up 10 chapters a day?

My master is in the cold winter again, Goddess... The writing is really awesome. I kept crying when I read it. Damn it. The writing of the Goddess is very literary and artistic. It feels like reading a memoir. Every character is very well-shaped. Hesitation, insincerity, paranoia... Every one of them is just right. It just sticks to that point, not too much, not too little. It makes people sad to watch. Goddess, why do you write so awesomely [crying]

It's very beautiful. The author's writing style is so good. It's not the kind of exaggerated rhetoric. He only uses plain and simple words to affect the emotions of the characters and the readers' moods, including the description of the scenery. It's really good!

The writing is very good👍The protagonist's body is weak, but his aura is overwhelming. He has a very unique charm: he accepts all favors calmly, but is never bound by them. This kind of indifference and unyielding attitude makes the aloof attacks, loyal dog attacks, and yandere attacks from all over the world unable to stop. The author is very good at writing about interactions. A glance, an inadvertent touch, and a specious soft word are all full of teasing meaning. But I feel that he is not deliberately teasing, it is his innate way of survival. Recommended for updates

I finished reading the first world with sobs and sobs. It is definitely the best book I have read in recent years. It is also fate that I clicked in accidentally. The story is cliché and the rating is not high, but the content is unparalleled [crying] It is not what is available on the market. It's common to read heart-throb novels and read novels for the pleasure that is divorced from reality. However, the same content, lifeless characters, and stereotyped appearance descriptions make this pleasure become divorced from emotions, become pale, and become blurred. But boss, your writing is different. You write it really well. Everyone has a complete life and story, and everyone's emotions have their reasons. And you really love the characters in your writing. The little faxes of the characters in the back surprised me. They are not supporting roles, they just appear briefly in this story, and they all have their own complete lives. It's like you are just writing down what you have really experienced, boss. And most importantly, the writing is really good, super good. It was the first time I experienced the feeling of "sourness". It felt like I was nestled in a pool of tears. Because it is water, it will be sour and swollen. Because it is tears, all the joys and sorrows are real and vivid. I really like it [crying] I revised it several times and feel like I still can't express myself [crying] Boss, I will follow you forever.

It's so beautiful. The writing is very good. The characters in Chao Chao are particularly good. Also, the character design of Qi in the first world is particularly well done (of course the others are also very good). I look forward to my wife's next world [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's such a fairy tale, but the ending of the world is so sad... I really couldn't stand it when I saw Si Yuanqing. I thought it was a very warm redemption story at the beginning, with four little bitter gourds... [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] For the first time, I intuitively felt the power of death escape. I would like to praise the author's great writing style and described the pain of the attackers in great detail. I cried along with him the moment I saw the death escape. The story line is very complete. I highly recommend it!

The teacher's control over the layout and rhythm of the plot has reached its peak, allowing me to patiently catch up little by little. The first world was really sour and sad, and it kept raining in my eyes😭, but the teacher said that the next world is sweeter! Super looking forward to it! The character creation is also very full. Among the three characters, the most distressed ones are Si Yuanqing and his sister. It is so painful. The final ending has been decided. No matter what, I hope that my sister can finally live a happy and stable life in the small world [crying] Many details in the article can also show that the teacher has a good outlook on life. It is a blessing to eat with the teacher! (Nod) I really like the Chao Chao written by the teacher. Whether it is described from the front or the side, it is so beautiful that it is earth-shattering! It feels like the baby is standing in front of me, turning his face and smiling softly at me! Baby! Baby! People all over the world should protect our babies unconditionally! [Blowing kiss]

The writing is really good, each character has a distinct and three-dimensional personality, and everyone has an independent soul. The descriptions bit by bit are full of real stories that happen in daily life, like the gurgling of a clear spring, flowing slowly, clean and warm. I just clicked on this book yesterday, and I have just finished reading the first world. It feels different from the fast-travel novels I have read before. The structure is very complete and can be turned into a short story on its own. When I am no longer a bystander, but truly integrate into their world, I can feel everyone's pain and be moved to tears by their experiences. I was crying at 2:40 this morning TT.

Family members, this is a masterpiece, so beautiful! ! ! ! It looks crazy. Keep this level and start with 9 points! ! ! ! ! !

Really enjoyed the first world. In the early stage, it was like county literature, with a kind of blandness and happiness with the warmth of a living person. Moreover, Sui Chao gave me a feeling like the memoirs of my deceased wife, a vague silhouette, beautiful but unreal, a dream at night, looking back on the past, with tears staining my clothes. The character of Xie Chenran is so well portrayed. He is the ship and shore of Sui Dynasty for life. "The first half of his life was too miserable. I was good to him, not for this reason." "I just want him to be sweeter and more stable in the future, so that he doesn't have to suffer the same sins as before." "Otherwise... Let it be the day you bring me here." "That can be considered my new life." Si Yuanqing is also a little bitter gourd. The difficulties are getting worse and the misery is getting worse. How to live a better life amid the pressure of survival, sacrifice of blood relatives, and emotional dilemmas? Going forward is guilt, stopping is a dead end. When our shadows briefly overlap and are stitched together by the sun, when I can walk with you on the road easily, without any purpose, just enjoying the time, and we live under the light, I will give you a spring that will not wither. Qi Jianchen, I think his life is better. After all, he has no material difficulties and lives a more dignified life. In the first half of his life, he followed the golden rule in painting reds and carving living things into jade objects. For the rest of my life, I have to hold on to the embers of my inner fire, but I have to use ice to cover up the heat. In addition, I also wish him a happy wedding! In short, the novel has strong colors and emotions, vivid characterizations, delicate brushwork, and brilliant literary talent. Successful authors make characters memorable. I was very happy to find a treasure on tomatoes. Great author, come on! [Please update]

Why is the score of this book so low? It's really beautiful. The author's writing is very good. Okay, it makes me feel uncomfortable. Let me just say that I don't like reading pornographic stories. I cried so much that my eyes are swollen now. The first boyfriend of the protagonist in the first world is really well described in that small rental house. It's really that kind of plain beauty. The ending really left me a bit disappointed, and I felt so uncomfortable that I wanted to die. [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Damn it, the second world is so well written. The words are so beautiful that I, a language-poor person, don't know what to say. I can only say two words, awesome. The second world is so well written.

After reading the first copy, it can be seen that the author really loves every character she writes. Chao Chao's character is very gentle. Even if the personality of the character he plays conflicts with his own heart, the malicious behavior he imitates will unconsciously bring his own warmth. People who watch this are soft-hearted. The remaining three offensive characters are also different, and there are reasonable explanations for each person's negative character. I think what impressed me the most was Si and his sister. I didn't want to cry at first, but when I saw the scene where he went home and had a heart-to-heart talk with his sister, I really couldn't hold back [crying]

No [laughs] I didn't dare to read it at all. I only saw the chapter about the fever period. Later I thought they would be unhappy [laughs] I just came to see Xie's he. It's very sweet. If there were no other be and he chapters [laughs] [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] I'm not happy, really. I knew I had to follow the script, and I thought it was cliche, but the Chao Chao and Xie described by the author are really like Magnolia. There is a hint of bitterness in the elegant fragrance, the shadow of golden osmanthus splashed in the rain [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] It hurts, every trace of pain, a touch of sadness and moisture [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] It hurts my heart [laughing][laughing][laughing] I hope there will be less attacks later, and the morning will not be so difficult. . . . . [Laughs] It hurts In fact, I put this book on my bookshelf a long time ago, but I thought the introduction was too cliché and I didn't want to read it right away, so I just put it away. I don't know why I wanted to open it today. . . . . I feel that I read articles based on my mood and life. I have been very anxious and depressed recently, so I read heart-breaking articles specifically. This is not because I feel heartache at the beginning, but because I feel a slight warmth after reading the first few chapters. When I get to the plot, I know the outcome later. The heartache comes like heavy rain. I still haven't read the first world recently because I really can't bear the feelings in it. It's not very good to be too empathetic. I can't watch it [laughs] The author is awesome

The writing style and emotional lines of this article are undeniably smooth and perfect. I have finished watching The First Plane so far. This is my overall impression of The First Plane. ❶Because Shen Suichao came from ancient times, there are several places in the article that hint at the ancient feel of his way of speaking and his excellent calligraphy skills. The slight sense of coldness and compromise around him is actually a very good representation of my understanding of the atmosphere surrounding the ancients. The details are handled particularly well. ❷Qi Jianchen is the attacker who appears in the backcourt of the first plane. From the following article, it can be seen that Shou grew up under the control of his family, so he has an implicit yearning for his own freedom and his own home. Therefore, he is not an ordinary favorite for Shen's gentle family feeling, so the emotional line will be more smooth and natural (this is my understanding of it). Part of the reason is because the first two months have purely aroused interest, so the subsequent development will be faster. ❸Xie Chenran is the protagonist from the beginning. I felt a little bit abrupt in the early stage because I felt that living in the countryside is actually exclusive. Countryside people generally have a natural sense of introversion, so they usually provide little help when facing other people's needs and help. It's more that he was attracted by sex but he didn't feel it, and he was really good to Shen [I think one of the people in his forties handled it very naturally. He picked up the discarded salmon meat by Shen and ate it. I thought about it for a long time. 1St, it showed that Xie didn't grow up in a wealthy family, so he wouldn't suggest it. 2Nd, it was out of some kind of psychology to let Shen see that even if you don't eat, someone will eat you and you will be hungry if you don't eat. But in that episode, Shen ate normally, so I think it is 1] ❹Every part of the writing is very good. It can use metaphors to describe the characters' emotions very well. There is no procrastinating plot. It's great for someone with an impatient personality like me. Very beautiful, five-star recommendation

The writing is good, and the plot is speechless. It makes people feel warm when watching the corpse. The treasures are not just based on their faces. Everyone in the story is wonderful and there will be character biographies. At the same time, old foodies are blessed, there are BE and HE. The only drawback is that it's a bit tear-jerking at the end≡ω≡