The Number One Talisman Cultivator in the World of Immortality

If I want Sang Yu to have a harem, I can try all of these 🤤🤤 I got it from the comic series and it took me a day to finish it. There are no big surprises in the overall plot. It looks pretty good. I hope that the author will get better and better, and that the later works will get better and better.

I really like it, I really like it. The writing is great, and the heroine is so funny. I like Lu Yuanting the most from the factory so far. I love this one. Can the heroine have a harem? Even if she stays with her all the time in the future, it's okay. [Crying]

Oh my gosh, I really like the interaction between Xiao Sangyu and Han Qin. It's funny and fun, and you won't fall in love too quickly. Han Qin talks about killing, but his behavior is another. The bickering between the senior brothers and sisters is so interesting, funny and fun, good to read, write more, love to read

I just want to make a suggestion: The character of Lu is very well created, and Han also attaches great importance to love and justice. Isn't the ancient god undergoing baptism? Treat these good boys as fragments of the ancient god's baptism in the lower world. It happens that the clones fall in love with the heroine. Later, the ancient god wakes up, the fragments merge, and all the memories return. In this way, the ancient god will also fall in love with the heroine, and they create the world together.

It's super cool, but it's a bit annoying for people in the comment section to criticize the female protagonist because they like the male protagonist. You can like the male protagonist and want the female protagonist to accept the male protagonist, but you can't criticize the female protagonist under the banner that the male protagonist is a good partner. The female protagonist has never scorned those male protagonists. The female protagonist has always clearly rejected them. Those male protagonists also know that the female protagonist does not like them. Moreover, their strength cannot protect the heroine at all, nor can they bear the heroine's secret. The heroine is really good. It would have been better if the heroine didn't have a cp, and she was surrounded by thousands of flowers. She was so beautiful that no leaves touched her body. Of course, it would also be nice for the hero and the supporting actor to become the heroine's subordinates.

The plot is very interesting and well worth watching. Here's what I have to say. The only thing I don't understand is why there are so many insulting words in female videos? It disgusts me (it's just my personal opinion, I can ignore it if I don't mind). There are many words that can express a person's emotional fluctuations. I don't understand why you use insulting words in female videos. In addition, objectively speaking, the story is novel and not cliche. It is basically a novel that can be said to be invincible and has great potential. It is definitely worth entering. I am waiting for updates every day. The heroine is very kind and single-minded. There is no emotional line but the emotional line is very delicate. Sangyu baby is so cute and awesome. Super smart and the characters are very detailed. The author's writing style is very good and the writing framework is also very large. I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot.

I can't bear to go to bed after 3 o'clock in the morning. This is the only full-length novel I have read so far. Lu gives me a good feeling. Although the sect forces me, I respect the heroine very much. Han is also very good. The characters of these two supporting characters in the early stage are well created. If you really want the ancient god to become a CP, can you write Lu and Han as his clones? After all, the characters are so good that it would be a pity to abandon anyone.

It's really fun to watch the heroine level up and fight monsters all the way! But I feel a little uncomfortable every time I read the poem "Disobedience to Women". There are also some inexplicable female rivalries in the front. The heroine's friends are mostly men. But when I look at the back, I find that the author is also growing. For example, the heroine supports the female disciples who are forced to marry, etc. It faces a lot of problems faced by women, and I also like the character of the heroine. She is dedicated to cultivating the Tao of Talisman and improving herself. Although she has always been obsessed with it, she can still stand up when faced with a crisis, and it is within her own abilities. She really cherishes her life, not bad! I hate moral kidnapping, but I won't let down those who treat me sincerely. Able to bend and stretch, especially good at judging the situation! No disadvantage at all! I especially understand everyone who will fall in love with the heroine. Although the heroine herself doesn't think so, she is really a little sunshine (//∇//), so I still recommend her. Disobedient women's words are curse words for taking a mother. Every time I see it, I feel a little uncomfortable, but the plot is really attractive, so I can continue to watch it. This is the reason why I only give four points [Sending Hearts] The author listened and changed it to five stars!

I wanted to give it four and a half stars, but after a while I hesitated and decided on five stars. Overall: quite satisfied, the writing is good, there are ideas that make people read, the setting is also good, I like the heroine very much, the character is well portrayed Reasons why I want to deduct half a star: Some of the characters and some of the words are still a bit like "male videos". For example, for the plot of female competition for men, the female protagonist calls the male character "brother". It has been described many times that Nangong's sword spirit likes small skirts and beautiful scabbards. Female bosses are love brains, etc. Finally, the reason for giving it five stars: 1. The author listened to the advice and made changes after seeing someone reminding him in the comment area (but it may be because some of them have been written long ago and it is not convenient to make changes, and the whole text has not been changed) 2. The writing is really good, the plot is really interesting, and the characters are three-dimensional and full-bodied. 3. Words that make people uncomfortable and there aren't that many plots (except for the sword spirit) 4. I think that this kind of heroine novels are still in the stage of continuous progress and development. Someone writes it first, and then changes the wording and stereotypes (I think that as long as the heroine has the good virtues of self-improvement, unwavering belief, integrity and kind character, she can be called a heroine) Finally, if you are very, very concerned about it, you don't have to watch it. I personally think that the flaws outweigh the flaws.

It's very good-looking. The second male brother Han and the female protagonist are mutually beneficial. They are enemies. When the third male Lu is in a secret realm, his fellow disciples sacrifice the female protagonist to save him. He wants Lu to choose again, but the female protagonist has grown to the point that he is no longer a being that he can pursue. Han can only follow the female protagonist's footsteps and only wishes her well. Only the male protagonist, the ancient god, will bite his lips to suck blood as soon as the female protagonist cannot defeat the old monster and wants to level up! You touch the light and look at the light, there is someone else's blood on your body, and you still want to run away? Well, the whole drama is over

The more I read this novel, the more I get attracted to it. The heroine is smart and calm. As a top talisman cultivator, she is thoughtful and neat. Her operation of talismans amazes everyone. Lu Yuanting is calm and reliable, and silently protects the heroine. The interaction between the two is natural and delicate, and the two-way running atmosphere is full of atmosphere. The plot has a tight rhythm, the fighting between cultivators is exciting, the characters are full and not procrastinating, and the emotional lines are gradual. The more you read, the more you like it. It is worth reading carefully. Lu Yuanting is really white. I beg the author to let him be the male protagonist. He is too miserable [crying] The author is very old. He updates four times a day. Pay attention to your rest. The author also reads every comment and patiently helps readers answer questions. It's really good. Just rush in and it's done [laughs]

I followed it from the comic and it is about to be tied. Please write a review carefully. There are a lot of negative female characters and female characters in the early stage, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. Also, the male co-stars often have sexual intercourse. When I watched the comic, I hated Han Qin for always stealing A Yu's opportunities. After reading the article, I calmed down and felt that Han Qin was okay and not that bad. I have to say that the author listened to the advice. Looking back, it has improved a lot. Yaoyao and the female partner of the Rogue Cultivator Alliance who drank together appeared. Some girls started to have a positive image. I like Tong and Guoguo. The two babies are so cute and heartwarming. But I would like to make a serious suggestion about Xiao Zi and Long Li, Ye Xuan and Guo Guo. It looks uncomfortable. There is always a grown man clinging to the little girl. This refers to the little girl's character and appearance. Although they have lived for many years and are not real underage girls, this kind of plot will be a bit uncomfortable. TuT Currently, my favorite male protagonists are Lu Yuanting (a completely white moonlight male god, well, who wouldn't love this Lu Yuanting!) And Yin Wuhuang (there are not many people who like the Big Demon King, but I kind of like this gradually hahahahaha) The author, please do a lot to update!

I like Lu so much, he is so generous and upright, mainly because he is willing to give up to the heroine! Is the male protagonist really that ancient god? I thought it was just a tool to make the heroine more powerful, because I really can't imagine such an excellent and beautiful heroine being with a savage in the description (sorry, that's what I think when I read it now), or the heroine's unique beauty is completely acceptable. When I first read it, I thought it was a novel about pure immortality with the heroine fighting monsters all the way and upgrading without a male protagonist. I'll give it a try and read it again...

I like Lu Yuanting so much, he is a completely well-rounded male protagonist (a compliment, the author has written all the supporting male protagonists with pretty good characters, and sometimes I feel that their actions are more logical than the female protagonist). Lu Yuanting is a gentleman, although I am a little regretful that he is not the male protagonist. After looking at other comments, the male protagonist seems to be an ancient god? Let's take care of ourselves first and then talk about it.

It's really well written, I like it very much. Is it possible to have a harem? The heroine's baby is so good. I feel like I'm not worthy of the heroine's baby alone. [Adoration][Admiration][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Overall, this is a novel about a female protagonist who has no flaws, and is worth reading. I don't understand how it got an 8.4 Rating. In my mind, it is definitely rated 9.1+. Let's talk about the advantages first. The plot is very smooth and refreshing. There are many foreshadowings and the subsequent chapters are connected so that it is very smooth to read. There is no doubt that the heroine is the strongest. Although she is a big heroine, she is not rigid. She borrows strength when needed. It is great👍🏻 It can be seen that the author has put much thought into polishing the plot. I have tied it after watching it for three days in a row🫶The author is working very hard to update, I hope you can also pay attention to your health! Let's talk about the shortcomings. First of all, the vicious female supporting role in the previous article is too high, but it seems that it is gradually improving in the later chapters, which is acceptable. Secondly, the stereotypes are too serious. Those who have become immortals and become girls just like pink and dress up. Even a female dragon can't escape the saying that they just like to be beautiful. Men are not delicate and delicate, so they are just like girls. (Of course I can also understand this. The stereotype is not that difficult to change. I hope the author can slowly improve it. You can also understand the author's thoughts on some of the sarcasm in the article.) Generally speaking, it is the same as what I said before. The flaws do not hide the advantages. As a novel with a heroine, it is still very good. There are just some small flaws. I hope the author will get better and better. Come on! I'm still confused as to why it only scored 8.4🌚🌚The first long review on Tomato is dedicated to this book Reading it now feels like AI🌚

OK, Chen Guang Xiwei's writing is also very good. Okay, I just called my whole family here. Those who should resign should resign, and those who should drop out of school should all read this novel full time at home. Okay, I am Feng Feng's awesome brother. Kras, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig trotters. He just wants to eat 200 servings of this stuff every day. Krass, the bean bag tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, os: I finally got something delicious to eat. This book should be updated with 4 chapters every day. It would be better if you add more chapters to me every day. Then I must praise it highly and support it. It is very awesome, and it is also very suitable to my taste. It is awesome, OK. I directly wish the author that one will get one, two will get four, forty-six, seven-seven-forty-nine.

It must be praised highly. If you like watching Xiu Zhen, you must watch it! ! Micro-group portrait, the heroine is very upright and does not suffer any disadvantage, does not abuse the heroine, and does not compete with women. This is written on my heart. It has been a long time since I have read the book I like, and it is not enough [crying][crying][crying]

It is a very rare female channel about cultivating immortals. It is not cliché, there is no digging for spiritual roots, there is not so much love, hate, and vicious female supporting characters. The female protagonist responds to the old clichés (there is no female competition, only competition for resources, this is the real immortality novel), showing the heroine's step-by-step cultivation of immortality from the grassroots, and there is also emotion. There are not many lines but not too many and it will not take up too much of the heroine's career line. This book is very novel and non-traditional. The story of the heroine's creation shocked me. It is not the routine I imagined. It breaks the inherent thinking. It is very interesting and interesting. The upgrade flow is so good that it must be praised by five stars! ! !

It looks good. I feel that each of the male characters is very good and has his or her own personality. Sometimes when I look at it, I feel that this male character is better than that male character. Hahaha, I feel that they are all very good and have affection for the female protagonist.

I like Sang Yu very much, he is strong and sober, I like Lu Yuanting who respects Sang Yu enough, I like his gentle senior sister (unfortunately she was offline early), I also like the master who loves A Yu, as well as the peak masters and their disciples. Every character in the author's works is very distinctive.

The plot of Sirius World is currently the best, because most of the female characters created in the previous volumes are annoying and make people feel a little uncomfortable. On the contrary, all the male characters related to the protagonist are portrayed very well. The Three Evils of Montenegro are very good, both women and men are good, everyone is good, I hope it can continue to be like this! ! ! Update quickly author [love]

Tied to chapter 172, it is so exciting and unconventional. There are no scumbags, no fiancés breaking off the engagement, and all the silly jokes. It is very comfortable to read. I rarely see female characters who practice talisman in fairy tales. Most of them are sword cultivators or alchemy cultivators. I didn't expect that a talisman cultivator could be so powerful! Moreover, the author also handles the emotional scenes very well. The male characters are all described in a three-dimensional way, each with their own personality charm, but it does not delay the heroine's cultivation. Although others want to fall in love with her, the heroine only wants to become stronger and practice cultivation. Although a small part of the plot in the early stage is a bit frustrating, it is a setback that everyone must go through on the road to growth. If you survive, you will have a brighter future! The heroine will change the map soon, and we look forward to more exciting plots in the future!

"The male protagonists are all love-minded, but I, Sang Yu, am the real immortal cultivator" is a perfect reading experience! The only female talisman master in the immortal world, Sang Yu, has a very eye-catching character. She does not rely on anyone. She devotes herself to studying the rune path and gradually reaches the top of the rune path by copying the original patterns of the ancient gods. She breaks the dual prejudice against female cultivators and talisman cultivators in the immortal world. The career line is solid and refreshing, and the description of the talisman battle is full of atmosphere. Every plot of drawing talismans, breaking formations, and making ancient talismans is very enjoyable to watch. Sang Yu will not stop seeking the truth for love. The duel is evenly matched, and there may be a two-way rush in the future. The sympathy between the strong men far exceeds the clichéd love lines of ordinary immortals. The main line of the career in the full text is clear, the emotional line is delicate and restrained, and the sweetness is just right. Sang Yu is sober and independent, the ancient god is affectionate and dedicated, and the character and bond are both brilliant. Whether you want to see the heroine Fu Xiu counterattack, or you prefer CP with a strong sense of fate in the future, this book is worth reading again and again! From a personal point of view, apart from Lu Yuanting and Han Qin, the one that makes me most excited and particularly optimistic is the line between Gu Shen and Sang Yu!

This novel feels like the novels I read back then. There are characters with more backgrounds from different continents and fuller characters. Some novels are too narrow and restrictive. This content has a plot and plot. I like it.

The plot is okay, and the world view is very grand as a theme about cultivating immortals, but I hope the heroine can accept them all. Have you ever heard that "the more lovers you have, the more impressive you are~" Haha [making a face] But first of all, as a female subject, the most important thing should be to respect women. Disobedient words (that is, words that insult women) should be rarely used, and it is not annoying to always write women as vicious female supporting characters. However, the wonderful human plot makes up for this. Secondly, the progress of the protagonist's training is a bit slow. Although this ancient god provides the runes so that the heroine can create a great path, I think if it were not for the heroine's intelligence, these runes would be just a decoration, but it is not worth it to make the heroine's training progress so slow. Although it can be seen that the author really wants to make the ancient god an official partner, but I personally think it is not as good as Lu Yuanting. But overall it feels great, and the emotional line is delicious😋, so I can accept it. Finally, I have read more than 300 chapters now, and I can see the author's changes. There are more positive roles for women (because in the past, there was no [face covering] except for the heroine). If the plot and characters in the later period can make up for the early stage, then this can be called a mid-range game with a high score. I hope this book will have more and more readers, the plot will get better and better, the characters will become more colorful, the book will become more popular, and the author will write more and more books every day! [Laughs] However, I thought again and decided that giving it a four-star rating would be a bit too damaging to the author, so I changed it to a five-star rating. After all, the author is so obedient, so I hope the author can let the heroine accept more. I am Yuantinggu, please don't let Lu lose too miserably. (It's okay if the author doesn't do this, I am not dead, I am not dead...) (Maybe these remarks are a bit morally kidnapped, but I have no other way to express my innermost desires. Please don't scold me, thank you)

Great! This is the first novel that I decided to give five stars even before I finished reading it. I was attracted by AI comics at first, and the plot is really good. The more I read, the more I became addicted to it. I would like to make a small wish, please ask the author not to write a harem plot [crying] When I read the introduction, there was no harem mark, but then I saw a lot of comments suggesting a harem plot, and I immediately felt mixed emotions. I really only love the couple Sang Yu and Lu Yuanting with all my heart. When I think about the harem, I feel sad [crying], but it's really good-looking and I'll update it by the way. Hehe

It's tied, not bad. It's one of the few female-driven fairy tales that can be watched. It's much better than those that are actually otaku fight novels that are disguised as fairy tales. There is no plot where the heroine is slandered and quarreled by the green tea heroine.

I watched the comic first and then read the novel. The overall trend is pretty good and quite attractive. However, there are still some parts in the novel that made me uncomfortable. For example, the reason for calling Nangong brothers is that the heroine thinks she is a "female man". There are still plots such as the preference for boys over girls in the world of immortality. In female-channeled novels, I still hope to be more female-centered. After reading more than half of it, I really couldn't stand it anymore. There are all kinds of "mom", "mother", "fuck" and so on. Please stop writing such degrading words in female videos. It really affects the viewing experience. I really don't like this kind of words. It's very ugly. I also quite like the direction of the novel. I stayed up late to read more than 400 Chapter 1, I hope the author can make some changes. It can be seen that the author is very careful in portraying the heroine's character and personality. She is very good in all aspects. I also like the slow narrative style. If it were not for the above small flaws, I would give it full stars. I hope the author can get better and better, write better and better, and make a lot of money.

Well, to objectively evaluate this article, the writing is very good, but I feel that the heroine's emotional line is a bit strange. Let's talk about the heroine and the previous sect. They are disconnected inexplicably. When I read it, I felt a little strange, just felt very baffled. Then when the heroine saves people, I think it is good not to be a virgin, but to save when it is time to save. It is not that everyone does not know it, it has nothing to do with myself. The emotions I know are not very deep, so I think there is something strange. Another point is that it is very strange that many men like the female protagonist. Maybe most of the female protagonists I watch are big female protagonists. Even reading this article I feel a bit strange, but the relationship between the female protagonist and Hitomi is very good, but the evaluation is worthy of 5 stars because it is really beautiful.