Those Years, Those Things of Mine

Just like watching a movie, true stories can always touch people's hearts. I believe this book will definitely attract many people to watch it in the future. This book mainly writes about the deep impressions that passers-by in life have brought to "me". The author is very powerful, the characters are full-bodied, and the group portraits are well depicted, which can arouse readers' resonance and memories. At the same time, it also reminds readers to cherish the present moment (which I personally understand) and not to regret it after losing it. When we feel the sadness in our mouths at this moment, we should also pay attention to the happiness of the clothes on our bodies and the people in front of us at this moment. 💕

①The description of this book is impeccable and the writing is delicate. So far, I see that the character descriptions in the chapters are pretty good ୧•̀ꇴ•૭, but the first few chapters are too good at writing and pursue gorgeous words, which may give people a feeling of impatience ฅ⁽͑ ˚̀ ˙̭ ˚́ ⁾̉ฅ, because everyone comes to see the story, not how it is described (what I mean is: major plots or key plots are paved with gorgeous words, but ordinary trivial matters are not necessary) ② Because this is about youth, it is indeed relatively dull. For example, I always want to skip chapters, and I don't want to read messy stories (mainly because it feels a bit cumbersome, maybe it's my own reason) ③This book is about youth. I think there will still be many people who are attracted by the single heroine of youth. However, there is little interaction in the text and I have no desire to read it (for my own reasons, this book is not bad) ④The plot has not been fully developed yet. I believe that the rest of this book will be absolutely wonderful and has great stamina. ⑤Lastly, the author is also very interesting. I also listened to readers' suggestions. There are not many authors of this kind of treasure.

I've finished reading it. How can I put it? The writing is good, the content is real, and the sense of immersion is okay. The growth of the protagonist is visible to the naked eye, and the characters are well portrayed. I know this is your autobiography, but some of the current content gives people a dull and somewhat depressing feeling. The protagonist's family, Qingmei's, and Sister Xiaoshui give people a There is a sad feeling. Qingmei gives people the feeling that there are many things in their hearts. My mother stopped talking. I don't know how to express it, and I don't want to say it. I always feel that there are knives behind it, and there are more than one. The overall evaluation is that it is a medium-sized novel, but it cannot be read as a simple campus romance novel. It can be read as a novel about life growth and emotion. The above are some of my opinions on this book. Here I would like to give you some suggestions. I feel that this book is not suitable for younger people. It is suitable for older people with more life experience. It may be more touching. So if you want to write a good autobiography, you should write it according to your ideas. If you want more people to accept it, then you have to write it in a sweeter and more beautiful way (of course this is just my personal opinion). Overall, the writing is good.

I personally think that the daily writing has a little bit of the charm of "Thatched House", but it doesn't feel like Tomato's style of painting. Li Shubo is a bit cowardly, a bit impatient, and a bit fond of playing games, but this is very real, isn't it? This is probably the case for a ten-year-old boy. Moreover, the young man is constantly growing. In addition, the writing style of this novel is very good, really very good. As for the plot, if you read too many Shuangwen, you may find it a bit bland and boring, but this is what this type of novel should be like, isn't it?

Overall, it is a very realistic novel, and it even reminded me of some unbearable dark history (Kougua! It's better not to recall that kind of thing for good health). The male protagonist is a child who grew up in love. He is very lucky. Both Sister Xiaoshui and Jiang Qin took care of his young heart. He has a pair of very good parents. Overall, it is a very good novel.

How should I put it? When I read this book, when I read the first chapter, it reminded me of the feeling I had when I read "Old Things in the South of the City". I really like this way of writing that uses the eyes of a child to see the world with a sense of ignorance and clarity, and interprets this cruel world with the unique innocence of a child. My ability to express myself is not very good, so I'll just say this much. All in all, it's a very nice book (๑>ڡ<)☆ [The God of Sparrow Food] [Add One to Bookshelf]💕💕💕

Personal evaluation: Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The character creation is very good. The male and female protagonists have very clear and three-dimensional personalities. 2. The writing style is also good, and the descriptions of the environment, scenes, body movements, expressions, etc. Are all very accurate. 3. The logic is relatively smooth and there is no bloody plot. 4. The supporting characters are flesh and blood, have their own thinking and logic, and are not empty paper characters. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. First person. (I personally don't like it, and I believe there are many book friends who don't like it. This will filter out some readers.) 2. It's not cool. (Bland, tasteless, and a pity to abandon. Even a little inexplicably depressing.) 3. The plot is scattered and the pace is too slow. (I have deliberately calmed down and watched it, but I still can't help but skip chapters. Some of the plots are really unattractive. To put it bluntly, they are a bit watery.) 4. It felt a bit like "The Tenant" when I read it. It was too realistic. This is not necessarily a shortcoming, but it is wrong in Tomato. It's as powerful as a big tank, but it only gets scolded in Tomato. In reality, there is no harem. In the end, there is no way to avoid the gift girl or the knife. Finally: I don't have a strong desire to read it at the moment. The only thing I am curious about is what it will be like to meet Sister Shui next time. Will Sister Shui be released from prison? After all, in order to conform to the values, it is inevitable to go in and make some changes.

The writing is very good, a bit like Fangyuan's book, but the successes and failures are also real. Fortunately, the content is very touching, and the sense of immersion is still very strong even without a main plot. The failure is that there is no room to discuss the plot. All plot directions are planned and there are no variables.

The writing is quite good, but the updates are too slow. It seems that a few people were reading Candice O before. They usually update a few pictures a day, but you update a few pictures in a few days, or not at all. It's hard to say.

Well, just write a comment. First let's talk about the advantages of this book. ①Personal name. To be honest, there are very few first-person narratives in the novels I have read, and even if they are, the authors don't grasp it very well, making the article very confusing. But this book didn't give me this feeling. The logic is very clear. It narrates the surrounding life from the perspective of "my", giving people a sense of reality and novelty🤭, making it easier to resonate. This shows that the author's writing skills are quite good🥰. ②Content. Compared with other autobiographical articles (I have read it, let me tell you if you haven't), this book has an advantage, that is, it is very true. Anyway, it was very immersive for me, and it brought out the few memories from my childhood🍉, especially the time when I graduated from elementary school. The author uses delicate writing to describe the confusion when graduating from elementary school, the curiosity when entering junior high school, the discomfort during "extra practice"... Etc., All are described. But, author, why did someone like you when you were in elementary school? You are so lucky (I'm jealous😢). ③Characters. This is what I think is the best thing about this book, that is, the characters are very three-dimensional, especially Sister Xiaoshui and the others. Doing unspeakable things while being very good to "me" makes people feel very contradictory, but also very reasonable. After all, people are multi-faceted. I hope the author will continue to maintain it in the future, come on🥰 ④Enlightenment. Well, I can't actually say this. I just feel that when reading this book, I always have an indescribable feeling. I feel that as I watch Li Shubo grow, I am also growing. It's hard to say this. Also, the writing style of this book is very good, and there are some good sentences written by a group of Chinese class representatives in the comment area, which can be accumulated. ⑤Emotion (it seems that I have written a bit too much, ugh, forget it, keep writing). This book contains very rich emotions, such as "my" attachment to Sister Jiang Qin, and my reluctance and complicated feelings for Sister Xiao Shui. The author describes it vividly and contagiously. Especially the part where Liu Leilei (that's probably his name) drowned, I felt very uncomfortable watching it. I don't know why, maybe it's the weight of life (the little pearl dropped🥺). OK, now that we've talked about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. In fact, it's not a big problem. It's mainly a reminder to the author. ①I feel like "I" have little interaction with Sister Jiang Qin at the moment. I am more like a sister than Qingmei, uh, but I seem to be just a sister. Anyway, the author should pay attention and add some drama to Sister Jiang Qin. ②The first few chapters seem a bit depressing and may dissuade some readers. The author should be careful, the article should not be too depressing, but now it is quite ok, not so depressing anymore. ③I can't think of it at the moment, I'll talk about it later when I think about it. But I hope the author can mention the whereabouts of Sister Xiaoshui at the end. After all, this person touched me deeply🍉(It's not mandatory, it all depends on the author😘). Okay, that's all for now.