I Can't Regret My Youthful Youth

Just like watching a movie, true stories can always touch people's hearts. I believe this book will definitely attract many people to watch it in the future. This book mainly writes about the deep impressions that passers-by in life have brought to "me". The author is very powerful, the characters are full-bodied, and the group portraits are well depicted, which can arouse readers' resonance and memories. At the same time, it also reminds readers to cherish the present moment (which I personally understand) and not to regret it after losing it. When we feel the sadness in our mouths at this moment, we should also pay attention to the happiness of the clothes on our bodies and the people in front of us at this moment. [Sending Hearts]

①The description of this book is impeccable and the writing is delicate. So far, I see that the character descriptions in the chapters are quite good ୧•̀ꇴ•૭, but the first few chapters are too good at writing and pursue gorgeous words, which may give people a feeling of impatience ฅ⁽͑ ˚̀ ˙̭ ˚́ ⁾̉ฅ, because everyone comes to see the story, not how it is described (what I mean is: use gorgeous words to pave the way for major plots or key plots, but there is no need for ordinary trivial matters) ②Because this is about youth, it is indeed relatively dull. For example, for me, I always want to skip chapters and don't want to read a messy story (mainly because it feels a bit cumbersome, but it may also be my own reason) ③This book is about youth. I think there will still be many people who come here for the single youth heroine. However, there is a little interaction in the text and I have no desire to read it (for my own reasons, this book is not bad) ④The plot has not been fully developed yet. I believe that the rest of this book will be absolutely exciting and has great stamina. ⑤Lastly, the author is quite interesting. I also listen to readers' suggestions. There are not many such treasured authors.

I personally feel that the daily writing has a little bit of the charm of "Thatched House", but it doesn't feel like Tomato's style of painting. Li Shubo is a bit cowardly, a bit impatient, and a bit fond of playing games, but this is very real, isn't it? This is probably the case for a ten-year-old boy. Moreover, the young man is constantly growing. In addition, the writing style of this novel is very good, really very good. As for the plot, if you read too much Shuangwen, you may find it a bit bland and boring, but this is what this type of novel should be like, isn't it?

I've finished reading it. How can I put it? The writing is good, the content is real, and the sense of immersion is okay. The growth of the protagonist is visible to the naked eye, and the characters are well portrayed. I know this is your autobiography, but some of the current content gives people a dull and somewhat depressing feeling. The protagonist's family, Qingmei's, and Sister Xiaoshui give people a There is a sad feeling. Qingmei gives people the feeling that there are many things in their hearts. My mother stopped talking. I don't know how to express it, and I don't want to say it. I always feel that there are knives behind it, and there are more than one. The overall evaluation is that it is a medium-sized novel, but it cannot be read as a simple campus romance novel. It can be read as a novel about life growth and emotion. The above are some of my opinions on this book. Here I would like to give you some suggestions. I feel that this book is not suitable for younger people. It is suitable for older people with more life experience. It may be more touching. So if you want to write a good autobiography, you should write it according to your ideas. If you want more people to accept it, then you have to write it in a sweeter and more beautiful way (of course this is just my personal opinion). Overall, the writing is good.

How can I put it, when I read this book, when I read the first chapter, it reminded me of the feeling I had when I read "Old Things in the South of the City". I really like this way of writing that uses the eyes of a child to see the world with a sense of ignorance and clarity, and interprets this cruel world with the unique innocence of a child. My ability to express myself is not very good, so I'll just say this much. All in all, it's a very nice book (๑＞ڡ＜)☆ [Bird food masterpiece][Add one to bookshelf][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Overall, it is a very realistic novel, and it even reminded me of some unbearable dark history (Kougua! It's better not to recall that kind of thing for good health). The male protagonist is a child who grew up in love. He is very lucky. Both Sister Xiaoshui and Jiang Qin took care of his young heart. He has a pair of very good parents. Overall, it is a very good novel.

Personal evaluation: Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The character creation is very good. The male and female protagonists have very clear and three-dimensional personalities. 2. The writing style is also good, and the descriptions of the environment, scenes, body movements, expressions, etc. Are all very accurate. 3. The logic is relatively smooth and there is no bloody plot. 4. The supporting characters are flesh and blood, have their own thinking and logic, and are not empty paper characters. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. First person. (I personally don't like it, and I believe there are many book friends who don't like it. This will filter out some readers.) 2. Not cool. (It's plain, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away. It's even a little inexplicably depressing.) 3. The plot is scattered and the pace is too slow. (I have deliberately calmed down to watch it, but I still can't help but skip chapters. Some plots are really unattractive. To put it bluntly, they are a bit watery.) 4. It felt a bit like "The Tenant" when I read it. It was too realistic. This is not necessarily a shortcoming, but it is wrong in Tomato. It's as powerful as a big tank, but it only gets scolded in Tomato. In reality, there is no harem. In the end, there is no way to avoid the gift girl or the knife. Finally: I don't have a strong desire to read it at the moment. The only thing I am curious about is what it will be like to meet Sister Shui next time. Will Sister Shui be released from prison? After all, in order to conform to the values, it is inevitable to go in and make some changes.

The writing is very good. Although it is very slow at first, the big rhythm is fast and the small rhythm is slow. It is also in line with the genre of memoir. The youth of writing also makes me calm down and immerse myself in it. I really like Sister Xiao Shui and Jiang Qin. Keep writing.

The writing is quite good, but the updates are too slow. It seems that a few people were reading Candice O before. They usually update a few pictures a day, but you update a few pictures in a few days, or not at all. It's hard to say.

Book review of "Those Things in My Years" Reading "Those Things in My Years" is like being gently pulled back to the 00s, a time when there were no smartphones and no pressure to involute. There is no system, no golden fingers, just a period of childhood and adolescence that is the simplest, most real and heart-wrenching. The story of the protagonist Li Shubo seems to be just the daily life of an ordinary child: growing up with her grandmother, running around the village carrying a broken radio, having fun with her best brother Tao Zi, playing house with her friends under the old locust tree, and secretly hiding a gentle and clean girl in her heart - Jiang Qin. The author's writing style is very light, but very powerful. The loneliness, confusion, joy, embarrassment, and heartbeat are all written with extraordinary realism. You will be happy with him for a long time because of a wild strawberry, blush because of a joke, and remember it for many years because of a gentle concern. The further you read, the more you will understand the sentence in the introduction: Before you learn the word love, you have to go through its entire process: ignorance, attachment, debt, and long-lasting nostalgia. This book does not have ups and downs, but it has a magical power that slowly warms people up. It not only writes about Li Shubo's childhood, but also about the old times that none of us can get back. There are green plums, playmates, summer wind, sugar that is sweet to the heart, and love hidden deep in my heart that I dare not say. If you also miss those simple and clean days, This book will remind you of those years and things of your own. To us, the youth of hindsight.

I really like this book "My Things in Those Years", it is true and easy to read. It's just that the current narrative is a bit random and fragmented. It jumps from small village to county town, elementary school, sixth grade, visitor, departure, drowning, first grade of junior high school, one section after another, lacks main line and connection, and looks a bit messy. It is recommended to sort out the plot, use a thread to connect childhood memories, and polish the key plots more, it will be more exciting!

Five stars! A very nice coming-of-age article! The writing is delicate, the daily life is warm and true, the growth line from the countryside to the county town is very immersive, the characters are created superbly, Sister Xiaoshui really poked me! The ending of the chapter on the graduation exam is perfect. The young man's farewell is warm and sad, and has great stamina. I have already locked this book and am waiting for the update! It would be better if there were more

The writing style of the book is good, but it has few words and describes a lot of things, so it was rushed. And in the first ten chapters, maybe I am just too sensitive. I felt a little depressed, but not very depressed. The character narration could be a little more accurate, and the perspective of the protagonist is very good, but one of the supporting characters could be brought out in more detail. There are two pitfalls in the tenth chapter, which is a bit of a test for the subsequent connection. Jiang Qin itself is also a very good image. If you want her to be the heroine, you can reduce the "little intimacy" in Yang Tong's actions and explain the age difference between the male and female protagonists, which can make some readers who skip reading feel better. The writing style itself is very good, and the connection is a bit abrupt. The characters and plots can be more detailed, the plot arrangement is not so tight, and one or two things are selected to be more realistic. If they are not important, they can be brushed off in one go. Just like Liu Leilei's plot, the author should have wanted to add it, but it was too hasty. Come on [eat melon] It's still okay [eat melon] [OK]

Well, just write a comment. First let's talk about the advantages of this book. ①Personal name. To be honest, there are very few first-person narratives in the novels I have read, and even if they are, the authors don't grasp the narrative very well, making the writing very confusing. But this book didn't give me this feeling. The logic is very clear. It narrates the surrounding life from the perspective of "my", giving people a sense of reality and novelty [laughing], and making it easier to resonate. This shows that the author's writing skills are quite good [Admiration]. ②Content. Compared with other autobiographical articles (I have read it, let me tell you if you have not), this book has an advantage, that is, it is very true. Anyway, it was very immersive for me, and it brought out the few memories of my childhood [eating melons], especially the time after graduating from elementary school. The author uses delicate writing to describe the confusion when graduating from elementary school, the curiosity when entering junior high school, the discomfort during "extra practice"... Etc., All are described. But, author, why did someone like you when you were in elementary school? I'm so blessed (I'm jealous [crying]). ③Characters. This is what I think is the best thing about this book, that is, the characters are very three-dimensional, especially Sister Xiaoshui and the others. Doing unspeakable things while being very good to "me" makes people feel very contradictory, but also very reasonable. After all, people are multi-faceted. I hope the author will continue to maintain it in the future, come on [Adoration] ④ Enlightenment. Well, I can't actually say this. I just feel that when reading this book, I always have an indescribable feeling. I feel that as I watch Li Shubo grow, I am also growing. It's hard to say this. Also, the writing style of this book is very good, and there are some good sentences written by a group of Chinese class representatives in the comment area, which can be accumulated. ⑤Emotion (it seems that I have written a bit too much, tsk, forget it, keep writing). This book contains very rich emotions, such as "my" attachment to Sister Jiang Qin, and my reluctance and complicated feelings for Sister Xiao Shui. The author describes it vividly and contagiously. Especially the part where Liu Leilei (that's probably his name) drowned, I felt very uncomfortable watching it. I don't know why, maybe it's the weight of life (the little pearl dropped [I almost cried]). OK, now that we've talked about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. In fact, it's not a big problem. It's mainly a reminder to the author. ① I feel like "I" have little interaction with Sister Jiang Qin at the moment. I am more like a sister than Qingmei, uh, but it seems like she is just a sister. Anyway, the author should pay attention and add some drama to Sister Jiang Qin. ②The first few chapters seem a bit depressing and may dissuade some readers. The author should be careful, the article should not be too depressing, but now it is quite ok, not so depressing anymore. ③I can't think of it at the moment, I'll talk about it later when I think about it. But I hope the author can mention the whereabouts of Sister Xiao Shui at the end. After all, this person touched me deeply [eat melon] (it's not mandatory, it all depends on you, the author [blowing kiss]). Okay, that's all for now.

The writing is very good, a bit like Fangyuan's book, but the successes and failures are also real. Fortunately, the content is very touching, and the sense of immersion is still very strong even without a main plot. The failure is that there is no room to discuss the plot. All plot directions are planned and there are no variables.

The appearance of the characters is very jumpy, and there is no recognition process. A person's name suddenly appears, which looks a bit weird. The plot feels very depressing, and I can't say that. The protagonist is well protected, but he lives on the dark side of society. I have always lived in the sunshine. This dark side of childhood is a very new experience for me, and it is also the reason why I feel depressed and unable to feel the childishness. Thanks to the author for letting me experience a life I have never experienced before (#^.^#)

The characterization of the characters is very detailed, and the characters' images are fully displayed through psychology, action, and environment; the plot controls the conflicts and has a good sense of rhythm; the characters gradually progress the protagonist's psychological growth. (Okay, this is not a composition.) All in all, all in all, I give you a five-star recommendation. The only drawback is that there are too many foreshadowings (laughing in the comment section, hahahahahahahaha). The main reason is that I usually read novels without thinking, but I still found it very satisfying𝑪𝒊𝒂𝒍𝒍𝒐~(∠ω< )⌒★

After reading ten chapters, maybe I am not used to this style. After reading it, I always feel that I am missing a sense of substitution and identity. It is like standing outside and listening to someone tell a boring story. I should revise, adjust, and delete it. Lack of sense of substitution, Maybe you can try to change the style. It should be a little bit different to enhance the sense of substitution and authenticity.

I saw Chapter 24. To be honest, this is the first time I have read a biographical novel on Tomato. From my perspective, as an online novel, it is unqualified. It is not refreshing and the rhythm is too loose, so it is normal that it does not become popular on Tomato. This type of article is very familiar. Why, because it is similar to the article in the Chinese textbook. It can be seen that the author's line drawing skills are very strong. Since I am just a bad reader of romance novels, I will not comment on the depth and meaning behind it. If we only look at it from the perspective of romance novels, First of all, the source of the initial favorability between "me" and my sister can be mentioned, which is why my sister favors "me". Secondly, with "my" current personality, it is really difficult to imagine how I would interact with my sister again (how to get admitted to the same or nearby high school), because it would be a very difficult point to deal with if we are in different places. Furthermore, if you start writing in detail from junior high school, it is best for the subsequent events to be linked to the sister, otherwise the emotional foreshadowing will be too little and it will appear very abrupt. It depends on what kind of novel the author wants to write. If you want to be popular with tomatoes, it is best to take up the majority of the emotional line; without it, the pace of autobiographical novels is too slow, and most readers now read in fragmented time. The last thing is, let me take a look again when I have time, and then I can catch up with the big army. As a digression, it's best not to write about irrelevant things, such as the radio in the first chapter. If it doesn't appear later, it would actually be a bit baffling. (Personal opinion, purely for self-pleasure, you criticize me, you are right, I am just a bad reader of romance novels, and the tonic attacks me)

How should I put it? The descriptions in all aspects are outstanding, whether it is body language, expression description, environment, dialogue, inner feelings, metaphors, etc. Although the article is short, it contains a huge amount of information, which increases the interest of reading and the imagination of readers. The characterization is very thought-provoking. From the perspective of the protagonist, it captures the overlapping characteristics of the concrete and hazy impressions of the characters very well.

The writing style is smooth, and the words can convey a simple and realistic sense of story, which is in line with the genre of the book. After reading it, you can immerse yourself in the book and read the story. Although the plot has not been developed yet, you can understand the ups and downs of many subsequent stories. I look forward to the subsequent development.

This book is written in the first person about the characters the protagonist meets when he grows up. The ones that impressed me the most are Sister Jiang Qin and Sister Xiao Shui. I can only say that I like these two very much [I almost cried], but Sister Xiao Shui makes me feel pity [I almost cry]

In fact, I didn't feel much at all when I first watched it. Later, I think Sister Xiaoshui is not a very good person, but she will protect him, and she is very bad because she does dirty things. It's very contradictory, but also excusable. This is a real experience and a portrayal of life. As for the daily content, it felt bland. I didn't feel it until the first year of junior high school, maybe because Sister Jiang Qin was also there. The book is not finished yet, but I hope it all ends well. This book is written from the first perspective, that is, the perspective of "my". The feelings are very intuitive and very real. After all, this is the author's personal experience (as stated in the introduction), and the characters are very real. Looking forward to the follow-up

It's very real, very similar to my experience

It's super nice. As a memoir of my own, I can see that the author still wants to write it well, but it always feels a bit lacking. But I will follow it to the end. As one of the first fans, come on, author.

The author is a freshman. I only have the hope for happiness in my heart. Your works are too mellow and I can't taste them all. I really hope that lovers will eventually get married and there will be no difference in the world! [Almost crying] I'll hide it in the snow for now, and wait until my life has turned into wine, then I can taste the mellowness of others. I still can't say goodbye🥺, why can't the stories in the book not leave regrets?

The overall text is good. The plot is compact. The reason why I don't give full marks is because I feel that the transition later is difficult.

The writing is delicate and beautiful. I hope it won't be a knife attack. I hope Jiang Qin can have a happy ending with the protagonist.

The writing is detailed and beautiful, and the writing is extremely real. The most important thing is that this is what the author has personally experienced.

It's reasonable to give yourself a five-star rating, right? Jiang Qin or Sister Xiaoshui, who do you like more? My answer: Jiang Qin is the kind of person I would look up to when I was a teenager. Sister Xiaoshui is the kind of person I look back on when I grow up and realize that I actually am.