(Multiple female protagonists + invincibility + saving black heroes + a small amount of MC + Terra)
There, in the deep heavens, a supreme being looked at the world full of darkness in all the worlds and was determined to change everything. However, because He could not come in person, he decided to let his descendants save these dark worlds. This time must be a different romantic story than before.
Reader comments
Generally speaking, it can reach a mid-range level, with invincibility, harem, and online combat power, which is quite exciting. However, there are a few points I want to mention. One is the emotional line of the protagonist. It may not be easy to describe. It is basically a straight shot, with no transition links, and a little foreshadowing. It is not very comfortable to watch, but it eats meat faster than most fans. Second, in terms of plot, the pace is on the fast side. I think you can write a few more chapters about traveling through the underworld to save the world, describing the transitional life, the difficulties encountered, and the emotional changes. This book basically only has one world in three or four chapters. If the progress is too fast, you can try to slow down a little. Please describe it more, otherwise the life of this book may be shorter, but because the combat power is online, the difficulty is basically zero, and it is also a difficult point to write a transition. I wonder if the author can try to balance the proportion of daily and combat chapters to make the novel longer. As for the writing style, I think it belongs to the general public and is not particularly outstanding, but it is still enjoyable to read. I hope the author can continue to polish the plot and try to describe more daily life. After all, there is no suspense in the battle. He can write more about the pull between the little girlfriends. I believe many readers will still like to read it. I believe the author can write better and better, come on
I come to predict, I come to witness, I come to reverse, I become the end, let new stories be written by me, hold high the wheel of time, and go against the times.
The writing is very good and suits my taste, but the number of words is a bit small and not very satisfying, but it is understandable.
Do the heroines include Sunset Shimmer, The Three Sirens, Starlight Glimmer, and Iris?
Will there be those awesome weapons in Minecraft? It's interesting to think about it.
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
It's been a long time since I've watched it, and it's a bit interesting. It's a story that's really focused on the narrative.
It's pretty good, and it suits my taste. I hope I won't stop updating it in the future.
Generally speaking, it can reach a mid-range level, with invincibility, harem, and online combat power, which is quite exciting. However, there are a few points I want to mention. One is the emotional line of the protagonist. It may not be easy to describe. It is basically a straight shot, with no transition links, and a little foreshadowing. It is not very comfortable to watch, but it eats meat faster than most fans. Second, in terms of plot, the pace is on the fast side. I think you can write a few more chapters about traveling through the underworld to save the world, describing the transitional life, the difficulties encountered, and the emotional changes. This book basically only has one world in three or four chapters. If the progress is too fast, you can try to slow down a little. Please describe it more, otherwise the life of this book may be shorter, but because the combat power is online, the difficulty is basically zero, and it is also a difficult point to write a transition. I wonder if the author can try to balance the proportion of daily and combat chapters to make the novel longer. As for the writing style, I think it belongs to the general public and is not particularly outstanding, but it is still enjoyable to read. I hope the author can continue to polish the plot and try to describe more daily life. After all, there is no suspense in the battle. He can write more about the pull between the little girlfriends. I believe many readers will still like to read it. I believe the author can write better and better, come on
I come to predict, I come to witness, I come to reverse, I become the end, let new stories be written by me, hold high the wheel of time, and go against the times.
The writing is very good and suits my taste, but the number of words is a bit small and not very satisfying, but it is understandable.
Do the heroines include Sunset Shimmer, The Three Sirens, Starlight Glimmer, and Iris?
Will there be those awesome weapons in Minecraft? It's interesting to think about it.
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
It's been a long time since I've watched it, and it's a bit interesting. It's a story that's really focused on the narrative.
It's pretty good, and it suits my taste. I hope I won't stop updating it in the future.
Looks good, support it
Will the author write about Derpy? [Cry]
Come on brother, keep an eye on you!