Weird Daqian: Copy the Book and Turn It into a Beautiful Girl at the Beginning

The subject matter is okay, but the plot is about changing marriages. I don't want to dampen the author's passion for writing. I'll change the introduction when I have time. Just don't deceive others.

The story is simple, the writing style is high-quality, and the writing is partial to hydrology. The description of women's clothing and body is good, but there is very little description of female abortion. It is an imaginary oriental ancient background and a negative setting. The heroine's ability is similar to gaining strength but is not affected by mental pollution. This ability is invincible in the negative setting~ Interacting with the male partner, but there is no obvious emotional line. Don't ask, the miner doesn't need a husband~ Hahaha! The battle scenes are well described, very interesting and worth following.

Very nice, five stars. But mine: the protagonist is the Virgin. The Holy Mother is not derogatory, but as the protagonist of the novel, some people don't like it, and the audience is different like no cp, single heroine, or multiple heroines. The protagonist's own camp is the same, but the audience is different. It does not mean to belittle the Virgin, but it is used as a minefield. In my opinion, helping others or repaying kindness as much as possible without involving one's own interests is kindness, and sacrificing one's own interests for others to help others who have nothing to do with oneself is the Holy Mother. So if you are wondering about the level of the protagonist, the Holy Mother, you can read this. Maybe it's because of the description. At first, I felt that the protagonist was a kindhearted person who repaid his kindness and was willing to repay his kindness if he was treated sincerely. However, in the later stage, he suddenly had to sacrifice himself for others and take risks to save strangers (although he was originally forced to do so, but judging from the description, it really felt like he was doing it for those strangers who were innocent but had no kindness to him.)

Haokang! The pace is not sluggish and the potential is quite high. This kind of subject matter is quite rare, but it's just not very interesting to watch! I have read a book with the same theme, "I have been an oiran for a long time, what happened to being a Qi practitioner" with more than 2 million words. It is finished. Those who are hungry can read it, and the author can also refer to it.

Because I wrote it, I want to give this book a five-star rating [shy]

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It's very well written. It's about cultivating immortals, a bit like the Lord of Mysteries. The writing is also top-notch. If you don't like short stories, you can give it a try. The only drawback is the plot twist. It seems a bit stiff at the moment. It relies entirely on giving the protagonist chicken blood to promote the plot. Everything else feels good.

Not bad! The protagonist is just an ordinary person! Not a cool article. You can take a look! The author should be a female writer, and the protagonist she wrote gives the impression that she has been completely transformed into a woman! There is no masculine characteristic left!

The wedding single version of Changsheng Yiyi is very well written, keep up the hard work!

So far so good The protagonist is really naughty and stupid. He knows that he will not be infected and will not pretend. He waits to be discovered and needs to be reminded by others before he knows how to pretend. He is also very curious, and I don't know how many times I have died without a golden finger. When things happen, they always "don't care what others do and do their best to live their lives", but they are sentimental and meddle in other people's business. Then he was beaten half to death every time. I don't want to be taken advantage of by the oiran, so I just think about it in my mind and act like a mute if I don't say anything.

Very good, very potential, come on, this subject matter is very good

It's good-looking, and it's a young lady who writes about the emperor's uncle [laughing evilly]

It's quite beautiful. Come on, the author is awesome.

At a glance, this book has the qualities of a fairy grass. If you like it, it's worth reading.

The setting is quite interesting, but there is no hook, the plot is too flat, and I have no motivation to read further. Come on, author!

The novel is very good and the author is very polished

The writing is okay and I will give you support.

It looks good, support it.

Stay alive, author.

So happy [laughing evilly] Recommended [send heart]

Pretty good book

If you like it, that's it

Come on, it feels good

Very nice! ! Don't be a pigeon! I will never keep a book again!

So far it looks pretty good, so who is the main star? Okay, the subject matter is good, but it's a pity that it's not to my taste. The introduction should be changed to determine the direction. I hope I can continue writing it.

It seems interesting so far. Why is it rated so low?

It's the first time I've seen this. Maybe I'm not old enough, but it really feels good.

Not bad. The author's writing is good, but it looks a bit like a married woman.

The setting and theme are quite good. Those who like to cultivate immortality can give it a try [laughing]

It's nice to watch, and the plot setting is good.