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The writing is okay, but the female characters in it were changed to something different. The yandere and dark version of Mitani Miko, the slut version of Yamada Ryo, they look too OOC, and where is Miko's best friend Yuri Kawaka? A name appeared at the beginning. Logically speaking, they should be inseparable.

I like it so much. The manga is the best without Lily.

Let's work hard [eat melon] Most of them are okay [eating melon] The protagonist is not like a human being. He is aloof and does not regard Ai Yin as a human being. He seems to be completely unable to understand that people are not saints and sages. Who can have this truth? Ai Yin, who has just returned from the UK, is indeed utilitarian, but from the beginning it was the protagonist who got involved first, and coldly pushed away when he did not need it. It is not very understandable. Even if he thinks badly, in terms of heart, how good is the protagonist? [Eat melon] From the very beginning, you approached her with a clear purpose. After you used her, you abandoned her, and on the other hand, you felt that Aiyin's purpose was impure. How could you be so pure? With this kind of character, it's too ugly. If you explain it after using it, it won't be so ugly. Can't you sincerely apologize? What's the difference between tarnishing others just to make yourself look bright and beautiful, and being a villain? Why can't we treat others as human beings? [Laughing] Of course, you can still watch it if you ignore the love sound part [face covering]

It's well written, but a little illogical in some places, and some plots are a bit stiff, but overall it's okay. The character of the male protagonist has changed after just writing a few chapters?

The writing is very good. I don't know much about it, but I can feel that you really put your heart into it. The story is tight and even though some of the plots are abrupt, it's really interesting. I really hope you can finish it. Even if it's not very good, I really want to see the beauty. Good ending. The stories you write are like your mood, and the characters you write are like your children. I will read the stories you write with my heart and don't be disturbed by external objects. If you see something right, learn from it. If you are wrong, please learn from it. Come on. @ Frost Snow Xuyu

It's very special and well written, but the pretending to be a naughty dog ​​makes me feel a little uncomfortable.

Generally speaking, it is highly recommended. It is not one of the more common fanfics that has a lot of changes to the original character's emotional settings. Although some of the changes are more magical and abstract, and most of the female protagonists are moving in the direction of favoring women, but overall the plot is very novel, the plot has ups and downs, and the protagonist is very individual. However, there is a contradiction here. The span of the protagonist's personality is a bit large. In just a few dozen chapters, it feels like a different person, especially in the role of Chihaya Aine. Although the plot about the character Chihaya Aine is very novel and interesting, just because of Chihaya Aine's vain character, the protagonist is a bit indifferent to her, but it is too indifferent.

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Good-looking, so good-looking, Miko, who is under extreme pressure, and Pochi, who is a cosmic social terror, is also a hot girl, the character description is very good, especially Miko, like a drowning person who fell into the water and struggled hard, he finally grasped the life-saving straw and would not let go.

There is no need to comment on a good book [laughing] (Every character is written in line with the original work, especially Pochi-chan [laughing], which is not OOC at all. The plot is very good. Come on, author! [Laughing])

I didn't like the setting of the main character at the beginning of the game being a soul-transporter. But later on, the characters of the heroine were designed to be consistent with the characters, but some were a bit too idiosyncratic. I knitted 18 pieces very quickly, and I had a lot of work to do, and I also wrote quite a lot of words.

It's not bad. It's a magically revised version of the variety manga that focuses on a female harem. Shura Field is very interesting. I hope I can finish it.

It's very nice, but I hope the author can add five equal parts. The author's big gift entrance

It's okay, it's enough for me. I don't read two-dimensional movies, so I read fan comics for the first time. Maybe it's my first one. I don't understand all the protagonists' characters. For book lovers who read it for the first time, you can read it and listen to it when you're bored. It's quite good.

It's well written, and it's different from other comics. You can read it with confidence.

I really like this novel. I haven't felt this way about reading a book for a long time. Although most of the characters don't fit the characters, I still have to look at the fandom to see if they fit the characters. Give me some more support for the author, come on

The writing is really good, the writing, the characters, the plot and the rhythm are very sophisticated, and they are all very good. Although I have only seen 78 points, there is already a vaguely dangerous atmosphere, which makes people look forward to it. It's really good-looking, the main character is quite humane, and it's good that there are no dirty jokes.

Although I have only read a few chapters, I feel that the author's writing style is pretty good, and then some people say it is ooc, but fortunately I have basically only known the heroine in it and have never read it, so it is more comfortable to read. Old bookworms with a tricky appetite will definitely be able to read it, and for newcomers, it is an eye-catching novel👀

The article is well written, and the author is also very active. I hope to continue to work hard. I am still yandere, and I am still yandere, Poch-chan.

It's pretty, but it's a bit short when sitting.

There are very few novels about Yotsugamiko, either they are introduced randomly, or his position is replaced by someone else. It is really not easy to find one [almost crying] [almost crying]

For someone like me who has never watched anime, it is a little difficult to read.

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To sum up, I personally feel that this book is pretty good, but don't read it with your brain in mind, because there are many things that cannot be pondered over, just read it once and forget about it, it's a magically modified version of the harem manga, the system is cheated, and it's a cool read without any brain.

It's so beautiful, I really like it. Good luck to the author.

Good luck, one of the best [Blowing Kiss] among all the comics

It's still highly recommended. The hostess agency has done a good job, but it has a common problem with variety comics. The latter part is not as good as the previous ones. From the author's time of 6 o'clock to now 7.5, The writing is getting better and better. I hope to continue to work hard.

Awesome Delicious It's been a long time since I've seen such a high-quality comprehensive comic.

It's okay. There's nothing serious about the works above the passing line. As for the OOC characters, it's not a problem for me. After all, I've read novels. The books are good, but I'm worried about the author running away.