Watching the Original Honkai: Star Rail: From the Start, Welt Takes Center Stage
观影原崩铁，开局盘点瓦尔特
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 153k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
60Chapters
167Reads
17Listens
47.7kReads · all time
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Reader comments 4
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The plot is too monotonous. You wrote the content of the film and television broadcast in such detail, but you wrote very little about the audience's reaction and there was no interaction.
It's somewhere between three and four stars. After some hesitation, I gave it three stars. 1. After watching it for a while, I realized that the sky chat has a colon, but the plot dialogue does not. This is too hidden and is not conducive to distinguishing the situation when reading. 2. Writing the video is a bit long, and it always feels a bit hurried when reading it. Most of the time, the whole video is played directly, and the viewers only comment a few sentences below, which lacks the sense of interaction during key plot points. Inserting some audience comments into plot highlights can help adjust the rhythm and experience. 3. Too many typos
Break a sentence, break a sentence
Too ordinary.