Watching the Original Collapse of the Iron, Taking Stock of Walter at the Beginning

The plot is too monotonous. You wrote the content of the film and television broadcast in such detail, but you wrote very little about the audience's reaction and there was no interaction.

It's somewhere between three and four stars. After some hesitation, I gave it three stars. 1. After watching it for a while, I realized that the sky chat has colons, but the plot dialogue does not. This is too hidden and is not conducive to distinguishing the situation when reading. 2. Writing the video is a bit long, and it always feels a bit hurried while reading it. Most of the time, the whole video is played directly, and the viewers only comment a few sentences below, which lacks the sense of interaction during key plot points. Inserting some audience comments into plot highlights can help adjust the rhythm and experience. 3. Too many typos

Break a sentence, break a sentence

Too ordinary.