How can it be repaired? The author, who has read so many sunny and cheerful stories, is determined to write a sunny and cheerful story.
It doesn't completely follow the plot. I started writing it from the time when civilization once was written.
Because I want to write more comprehensively and completely, it may be very slow.
(There may be problems, but it is my first book after all, so I think I will try my best to finish it.
I'm afraid of society, writing novels is just a hobby, please feel free to spray...)
Reader comments
It can be seen that he is a novice. Some of the additions of information are too abrupt. It is more suitable to integrate with the storyline and let the readers read it instead of seeing it. But he is much more capable than me. Come on.
Why do I feel like there's something wrong with the protagonist? Everyone?
Hakisaku is a cute little boy
Recommended, but is there a female protagonist?
Have you been tricked? Why are there so few people?
It seems pretty good so far, but why has no one written so many words?
It can be seen that he is a novice. Some of the additions of information are too abrupt. It is more suitable to integrate with the storyline and let the readers read it instead of seeing it. But he is much more capable than me. Come on.
Why do I feel like there's something wrong with the protagonist? Everyone?
Hakisaku is a cute little boy
Recommended, but is there a female protagonist?
Have you been tricked? Why are there so few people?
It seems pretty good so far, but why has no one written so many words?