Arknights: Kazdaele Is the King of the World!

Overall, it looks okay. The author can polish the plot arrangement and writing more, and the effect will be better. It's pretty good. I've entered the rhythm after seeing more than ten chapters. Cheers, author [like] The author has his own plan, which involves a bit of psychological knife, but it should not kill anyone. What follows is something I wrote when I was feeling a bit emotional, but it's half-hidden: The story behind the plot must be changed to "betrayal of ideals" as written in the introduction, which is a bit speechless🤔 (usually this kind of introduction is just a joke, I didn't expect it to come true) The previous writing was prosperous, but this turning point feels like the protagonist firmly believes in the prophecy of the convergence of the world line, and then obeys the prophecy and realizes the prophecy. From the look and feel, the protagonist has become like a patient who has endured humiliation and endured the burden silently while waiting for a reunion. Mingpai feels guilty, as if the protagonist has taken Tabo's place...😂It's hard to hold back [face covering] It feels like the author has some bad taste and is a deliberate reproduction of the legendary story "The Tower of Babel will inevitably fall". Maybe it's because I personally prefer to explain things frankly and clearly. With sufficient information, the truth will always become clearer and clearer.

I think it's quite interesting, and the logic is clear. I didn't bother to criticize someone in the comment section who said "the protagonist is arrogant, and treating everyone equally is the greatest inequality" without even looking at the main character in the article, the Holy Virgin Mary [laughing]

Before reading the book, I thought it was about military and political affairs... But it turned out that the military was engaged in it, the government was engaged in it, it was exposed, and people accepted it, but it turned out to be a honey trap. Generally speaking, it is a book written by myself, not so much about those magnificent plots, but more about the parts that touch the softness of the soul. If you want to read this book, all you have to do is bring not a brain or knowledge of these characters, but a pack of tissues and a heart

Everything about this book is good, but there are few updates. There is only one update per day. Readers are starving to death. Author! ! ! Author! ! I'm so obsessed with your short things! Can you feel my love for your short things through these cold words? Can you feel my red cheeks through the screen? If you could see it! If you can feel it! Please continue to cultivate and spread your short things! Let it and the weeping willows by the lake fall into the lake of my heart! Let it and the dense rainforest plants spread more! Spread this more! …………I can't edit it any more……Soichi…Update soon! ! ! Author! ! ! Don't make me beg you! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

All right! There is a system but no conventions. After reading more than ten chapters, I can feel the author's writing style. The writing ideas and details are very good. It can be seen that the author has done a lot of research on the world view and plot of Arknights.

Kids, I've cleared Arknights! You may say that by coincidence or not, rough stones can grow out of the ground, and tombstones can also grow out of the ground. You said that coincidentally, people with primitive diseases will turn into rough stones after death, and people will turn into tombstones after death. The most important point is that both can extract something from it. Eh? Are you talking about coincidence? Our great Lord Moss who eats tombstones happens to eat tombstones. Just clear the original stone and prepare to think about how to elbow the demon and sea heir.

Gua! I want to see it, what I want to see is this mouth and teeth! I hope it will be a happy ending. Nan Xing has successfully made the world of Terra beautiful [crying] Everyone will have no regrets and can live a happy life. I gave it five stars because I wanted to see "Nanxing imprisoned Xiaote in order to achieve peaceful purposes. Afterwards, Xiaote became angry and trained Nanxing hard" [Shy]

Enjoy it, enjoy it very much! (Referring to enjoying it very much) I think about it, I really want to! (I really want the author to update it soon) Great, he is my favorite savior of Kazdaele, who can turn the tide, help the building collapse, and save the demon king brother and sister [crazy] [crazy]

After reading Chapter 55, overall it's pretty good. After the protagonist gains strength, he can control himself and walk on his own path. Idealistic, capable, yet not indecisive Oh, great review

Damn, I forgot to add a comment here. This book can be said to be the most humane book of Arknights that I found on Tomato. It is neither divinity nor animality. The protagonist is not arrogant after getting the system, but the greater the ability, the greater the responsibility. It can be said that the author you write is so clear that I can't stand other books [face covering] There are too few books that are not too OOC and can write emotions well. Author, you are creating miracles!

I have an indescribable feeling, I feel my heart is quiet, and my worries disappear. This is a work worth calming down and appreciating. Let me add a small moment of happiness to the peaceful night.

The author's writing style is profound and he has a unique understanding of the characters' souls. This is a rare Ark article by an author who loves porridge, who feels sorry for the regrets in the story and wants to have a happy ending. The story is not boring and the plot is very stable in daily life. I also feel that there are enough regrets in the story of Ark, and I need to be happy with my words! What else can I say? A big cup, it must be a super big cup. [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

The writing is very good and delicate, describing many insights and understandings of life. Check this out and it will really warm up Hart! The operator has an online IQ and a reasonable personality. The protagonist is gentle but not indecisive. The logical chain of all actions is clear and reasonable. The plot develops at just the right pace, and the system plug-ins are well explained, not forced. It's really enjoyable to watch the characters fight for the peaceful goals of Kazdaele and so on. It's really great to stay up all night to catch up on this book! All the words written so far can be classified as my favorite novels written by Zhou Er. It's rare to see a novel with such reasonable logic on Tomato. I'm so touched... Author, you must work hard. The writing is so warm

The fine chaff among the fine chaff, a very excellent work [laughs], it perfectly fits my fantasy of the protagonist. Author, you must write down the kouya, I will always support your kouya [sending my heart]

It's rare to see a high-quality Ark fanfic that suits my taste. I was attracted to this game because of an Ark fanfic in the first place. The author's writing style is also very delicate, making the characters come alive and fully revealed. The main character who is also in this novel is another very charismatic person who not only attracts the characters in the novel but also me. This kind of person is so beautiful, admirable and desirable

It's too heavy for one person to bear everything, which makes the atmosphere behind it feel a bit depressing. The protagonist seems to have the potential to become Lelouch (whisper bb

It feels like there are multiple female protagonists, otherwise it would feel like it would be a bit unfinished.

Not to mention the rest, I was halfway through listening to the book and suddenly wanted to play. As a result, there were two entries for senior senior operators in the public recruitment. So, the first one went to Kelsey for nothing, and the second one went to Zao Lu [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

It's a very good book. I can definitely say that as long as I don't commit suicide or something OOC later, I'll start 9.2.

It is one of the best among the Ark fanfics I have read [Like] It's beautiful, come on [blow a kiss][blow a kiss]

Come on, author, I haven't seen such a beautiful Ark article for a long time, come on

Excellent Ark fanfic, the author is still a cat girl who can meow, I recommend Meow

It's very good-looking, integrating development and some emotional dramas (Ines, Indelachi, etc., But there is no clear plot in what I've seen so far). Friends who want to watch the integration of emotional drama, development and planning, feel free to try [Blow Kiss]

A particularly principled author, and also very ideal.

It's very interesting. It's very similar to Su Xinglan's book. The characters and plot are very good. I like it.

(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Come on, author!

I like this

Very nice, please write more

That's great!

Nanxing, we love you so much