Iron Ten***

What is a real dream? 😭Dream? 🧐The dream is... Genshin Impact, start🤓 When I was 10 years old, I played Genshin Impact and entered the continent of Teyvat; 😋 Playing Genshin Impact at the age of 20, pursuing adventure and divine grace;🫡 Playing Genshin Impact at the age of 30, all you have to do is fight for the machinations of the Seven Kingdoms and the elemental reactions; 🤗 Playing Genshin Impact at the age of 40, I understand the ups and downs of the world and the rules of life; 🤔 Playing Genshin Impact at the age of 50, what you see is the various states of sentient beings and the reality of nature; 😳 Playing Genshin Impact at the age of 60, looking at the moon phase in Liyue, the river of destiny is flowing; 😁 Playing Genshin Impact at the age of 70, I saw through the sinister abyss and the price of the Eye of God. 😨 Until he was old and his strength failed, he traveled all over the continent and fought in the spiral abyss, and suddenly he looked back. 🤓 Genshin Impact is not a game, it is clearly a mirror reflecting the floating world. 😊 From the first dandelion rising in the wind to the dim light at the end of the wandering, We never really caught that flying Paimon. 😔 When the deadline is approaching, how many people can see clearly? Even though Paimon is still by our side, we are already trapped by daily routine, desire, and wear and tear. 😭 It is difficult to raise the Heart of God and shout that sentence - the area ahead is not open yet. 😣 I just sigh that time is like the wind, and if I live up to my youthful spirit, it will be difficult to control Tewat again. 😩 However, the ancients said: If you hear the Tao in the morning, you will die in the evening. 🤓 If you can understand that although you are a traveler in this life, you have actually lived this journey, then you can live up to this life and make this journey worthwhile. 😇 Thinking about this, I couldn't help but smile, slowly closed my eyes and said: Teyvat is worth visiting in this life. Then sleep peacefully, as if falling into a pure land like a sea of ​​stars. 🥳

First of all, this is a transformed military text. It is true that the subject matter is novel and there are few competitors. The overall performance of the book is acceptable, the world view is well established, and the character creation can also make readers feel something, allowing them to continue reading. But there is a fatal problem in the work: excessive traces of AI polishing. I can imagine that the author should have completed the outline and handed it over to AI for polishing, but this directly resulted in too much nonsense, irrelevant descriptions and redundant details in the content, and even bracketed comments appeared. This is a writing problem that no author will have. This is the biggest feature of AI writing, it will explain. It is precisely because of this problem that the reading fluency of the novel is greatly reduced. It can be said that it is difficult for readers to get the pleasure while reading, which will seriously affect the reading experience. I hope the author can adjust his writing style in time or revise the uploaded content starting from the first chapter, otherwise he is likely to lose a large number of readers in the future. I should change the rating, or say this is my third review review. To be honest, there are indeed very few articles on this subject, really very few. Moreover, the author's writing is good, most of the information retrieved is relatively correct, and the overall historical trend is consistent with reality. When you read it carefully, you will find that this is a person's path of struggle and a person's growth. It is a person who is deeply confused and walks towards the light. It is a man struggling in the mud, surviving in despair, and rediscovering the road to "peace" on the battlefield. From being at a loss at first, to being firm and persistent later; from walking alone, to suddenly looking back, there are thousands of lights behind me. Those seemingly inadvertent foreshadowings are all gifts that have already been written by fate. All the wanderings have finally turned into the starlight that illuminates the way forward. When you gain something, you lose something. What is lost in this book is humanity (all human emotions). The protagonists (whether Lina or Lin Yan) all have a sustenance: a real living sustenance of their own; a sustenance that hopes for peace and development. Every time the protagonist fights against the system, he is looking for "balance." I have read several books, and they are all looking for a balance between supernatural power and reality. This must be difficult. For now, I can feel the confrontational psychology of the protagonist from between the lines. Some people may not like it, but if you read it carefully, you can really empathize with it and the meaning is very profound. The war is not over yet, the author still needs to work hard [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

Well written. But I think there is a problem with books of this kind, that is, the protagonist cannot interfere in issues such as the Wansee Conference, and just sits back and watches 17 million people killed by civil science. Genocide is not like a tightrope that goes unmentioned.

German Battlefield Valkyrie (Youth Version). Very nice

From the first look, it looks okay. I just don't know why you have to hide your hair color? . His family has had silver hair before, which means that not only the protagonist has it, but others also have it.

It is rare to see a book about De Meow, but this book is not only well-written, but also wonderful. The characters are described delicately, the plot is ups and downs, and the rhythm is tight and orderly. I hope the author will keep writing and don't stop updating. I will keep following it.

This subject matter offends me so much. World history, wars, epics, almost everything is available. Even though there are some problems with the setting and writing, and the details feel a little off, this is a book I want to read.

I haven't seen such a nice article for a long time. You must have had a hard time writing it. I would like to give you a five-star encouragement [I understand]

Although it looks good, the yellow button on the back really makes me want to escape, but escaping is useless, so I came to urge the update. What a delicious novel! The progress bar is about to reach the end, and the "Update" button is about to appear - but is it really so? (Press pause) Here, please allow me to pay homage to the audience and ask you to take the time to listen to what I see. ⭐Ah, the legendary writer⭐ ❤️The gospel official of words❤️ 💔How long will it take for you to update a new chapter💔 📚Relive history! 📚 🌊Cross the ocean of text and data traffic🌊 ❤️Bring the latest updates right in front of my eyes❤️ 🤫The process of reading your text🤫 🎓Always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying🎓 🤲🏻If there is a one in ten thousand chance, you can update ten chapters a day🤲🏻 🥰My victory will be certain🥰 🥵In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of breaking news.

The plot is okay, but some details need to be paid attention to. For example, the wearing method, position and equipment of the medals are a bit wrong. When the author has time, you can read the World War II army individual equipment (German version) and the decryption of the German reward system of World War II. Optimizing the details will make the look and feel better [Sentiment]

It's okay, don't get banned

It's amazing. It's the best World War II time-travel novel I've ever read. The plot is full of life and depth. I highly recommend it. It's just a little slow in the early stages, but it's super interesting in the later stages. It's not invincible, there's no male protagonist, it's super real, and the female protagonist is super tough to kill.

The early stage is indeed general, and the later becomes more and more exciting. It is indeed possible. It can only be said that all hardships come with joy. Just like things slowly develop, this book is also developing slowly, from bad to good, so you can stick to it.

There are a lot of small poison spots, but with high poison resistance, it looks okay.

The beginning is very engaging and the details are well described.

Author In that era, the middle name Feng represented a smooth path forward in the military system. The Junker nobles were a group that Hill did not dare to touch casually.

Yes, it's very enjoyable to watch. The pain and struggle of the protagonist slowly changing from human to non-human with the help of the system is extremely delicious [shy]

Well written and beautiful

New authors still need to be encouraged, and I hope they will write better and better in the future.

Let's make a brief comment after seeing Chapter 43 At present, (in my personal opinion) this book is a military novel with a German background during World War II. In addition to the time travel, it is relatively novel and interesting. After entering the military academy, there are frequent training descriptions, as well as a large number of descriptions of survival and escape in the wild, as well as subsequent plots, etc. It does not meet my taste, so I will give it 4 stars. There may be people who are good at this. You can watch it by yourself.

The rhythm is good, the thinking is clear, and it gives a sense of war.

I have read 10 chapters (one chapter is almost 10,000 words long) and it is very well written and has a smooth rhythm. Come on, the author, keep up the good work.

Nothing to say, just watch it

The rhythm is good and the character creation is also very successful.

Very good, it makes people feel the urgency and cruelty of war, come on💪

The description of the battlefield is okay.

Reality. There are details. Good characterization

It looks good, I just hope I don't completely lose my emotions.

I was attracted purely by this theme, and the fighting is fun. . .

The scale of the battle is too small, either a platoon or a company, and it does not play a key role in the early stage. It is recommended to start a strategic legion-level battle and not keep playing checkpoints.