The Great Wall of China: Light and Parallelism

I always sincerely support every author who works hard to create, and I would like to express some remarks. First of all, the frequent jumps in the plot during the reading process lead to insufficient narrative coherence and difficulty in accurately grasping the context. Secondly, although the character settings are relatively rich, the primary and secondary relationships are not clear enough and the overall structure is mixed. While some characters may play a role in subsequent plots, the current presentation takes a toll on the reading experience. Finally, my comments may not be so accurate and complete, but I will still support all the hard-working authors. If I have time, I will insist on using love to generate electricity. I wish the author success! ↗ ↗ ↗

Gua, boss, I want to praise your eloquence The writing style is very unique. The absurd and surreal writing style makes me very happy. 😋😋 I can find such a wonderful fanfic on Tomato prprprpr However, there are some problems with unclear pronoun reference and mixed sentence structure, and the switching of persons always feels a bit strange (of course it may be due to the writing style). But there are still quite a lot of knives. As I get older, I really want to eat something sweet. Overall 🥰

This is the first time I have seen a fanfic of The Legend of the Great Wall. The writing and plot are very special. I just don't know if the protagonist has a CP? Is there no plot of Gu Lang later in the second volume?

I really didn't expect to find such a cold author, cheers! ! !

Nice fanfic of many giant soldiers

I strongly support you😋😋😋😋😋

The plot is good, and I didn't expect this to have fan fiction

I haven't seen much so far, but the protagonist's mental state is reassuring 😈