Bai Yueguang in the World of Immortality? Just a Jade Pendant Wholesaler

First of all, I gave it four stars because of the mechanics of Tomato, which is actually worth five stars! Then I have Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I just want to read 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, OS finally let me see something good. It must be highly praised and supported. The plot is awesome. The characterizations are all awesome by Claes. The author is awesome and the author ended the game. It's awesome, ok, ok, I just wish the author that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine.

I enjoyed reading it. The author wrote it well. The relationship between the heroine and the harem is very exciting. I am looking forward to how Xiaoxing, the owner of the divine bone, will treat the heroine. But it seems that Xiaoxing is the deputy CP. Hey, I quite like this setting, but it is a pity that he is not the heroine's man [laughs] It's just that Lin Fan's plot is not very well written, but the subsequent plot is still okay, the author, please keep writing.

It's very interesting. The author's writing is very good. I also like the heroine's character. I just love this kind of thing [laughing] [admiration] I wonder if the author can write less about female competition in the plot below. Female competition is really not in the public's taste right now. I hope the author will listen to my opinion. If you have time, can you revise Lin Fan's performance earlier? I feel that this character is not very comfortable.

The others are really good and I didn't find any major flaws, but Lin Fan is so annoying that I deducted one star. The heroine has been being plotted and beaten all the time, and she feels a bit aggrieved.

It looks good. As for Lin Fan's early performance, I'm a bit dissatisfied.

Many people criticize it, but I think it's pretty good. Every author will slowly improve in the writing process, so don't be too harsh. Each character has his own personality and growth line. If the whole thing is fine, there is no need to hang on to one or two words. For example, Xiao Liu Ya, his setting (or appearance) is that of a child, so he can't be forced to be rough. The rebate setting is also quite interesting. If you are pursuing the ultimate pleasure, you can go to the male channel next door and read the male protagonist's article. It's better to be more patient and look back. The heroine is already good enough, and there is no need to worry about Zhou Xiaoxiao who is different from her, let alone target her. Lin Fan is indeed a bit annoying in the early stage, but looking back, you will find that he is actually a loyal dog character, and the heroine has many other CPs. I have read Chapter 102 so far, and there is no plot similar to Lin Fan's early stage. Everyone is loyal to protect the heroine. As for the female competition everyone mentioned, in fact, Twilight Yue later turned to the Lily line. The book also hinted at Twilight Yue's own growth and independence. The plot is constantly changing and growing. Come on, author. Seeing you explaining Lin Fan all the way, I can feel that you have carefully polished the story and characters. The subsequent plots are becoming more and more attractive. I look forward to the next content!

This book is really good. The heroine's character is well developed. Don't be dissuaded by Lin Fan. You can find from the beginning that Lin Fan is a gentle person at heart, similar to central air conditioning, so he has those troublesome things. The world view in the back is very grand, and I especially like that the male protagonist is a female protagonist. The woman is also the heroine, and there are not many deputy CPs. At present, there is only Yun Jiusi × Yun Qingxue, and there are not many scenes. After all, it is not easy for the heroine to steal someone who already has someone she likes. Overall, it is very good. She quite likes Gu Chong, and everything is fine. The author keeps it up. In fact, I really think that the male protagonist is very happy. Is it possible that the female protagonist is planning the plot and just being a tool? It's not just the male who enjoys it, the female protagonist is also very happy, okay?

It's really beautiful. I've seen a lot of people say that the heroine is the hero's blood bag, and they think it's aggrieved. But actually I think this is also a refreshing point. After all, the fiancé originally wanted to have a harem, but for the heroine, he is constantly growing and changing, especially people who like the fiancé have fallen in love with the heroine [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [blowing kisses] How can it be aggrieved? It feels like the fiancé is more like a tool. It's so cool to let the girl who was originally his harem get to know the heroine out of jealousy, and then be impressed by the heroine's personality and fall in love with the heroine. [Adoration] This fiancé is more like a middleman introducer. [Laughing and crying] The author writes about the process of getting along with other sisters, this fiancé is entirely for the sake of the heroine. The main character is preparing to open a harem later. I have read many books about a female protagonist opening a harem before, in which the fans feel sorry for a certain male protagonist and hope that the female protagonist will be with him forever. This book is perfect. No one feels sorry for a certain male protagonist. The only one everyone loves is the female protagonist. It makes the heroine and other male characters get along more harmoniously. It is completely refreshing.

It's very interesting. I highly recommend reading this book. I can't stand it anymore

Not to be underestimated, it's pretty! ! ! It's like the feeling of happiness when you open a bucket of instant noodles and it turns out there's really a bucket of braised beef inside~ Just this male-female thing, just this investment in raising gu, just this my standard, just this genius flow (sesame stuffing) is so cool! ! ! Slightly routine, but fragrant but not greasy. After all, the reason why a routine is a routine means that it is durable and can stand the test (provided it is well written) 👍 Neither the mother nor the mother is scolded, there is no plot where the heroine is attracted by one day and becomes sour tomorrow, and there is no ambiguous charm for the male supporting characters. So even if there is a slight concession of neutral words, I feel that the flaws are not concealed, because the author is really unattractive! Regardless of whether you are a destined girl or a destined man, everything is for Song Wanqing. No matter whether you are a scumbag, a "love rival" or a villain, you all shine for Song Wanqing! ! !

Immortal goods come, as long as you survive the previous chapter 3.40, This Lin Fan will basically have no role in the future. He has fake bones, a dank male ghost, a yandere, aloof, and seems to have a brother rice bowl? There are gentle senior sisters, junior sisters, rivals and so on. It's really fun. The heroine can sleep with whoever she wants [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] It's really fun to watch

The heroine has a very charming personality and the characters are well portrayed. The Son of Destiny belongs to the heroine, the Daughter of Destiny belongs to the heroine, and their harems also belong to the heroine, hahahaha. The writing is smooth and there are foreshadowings. It is worth reading. Come on, author [please update]

What a great book! I almost gave up at the beginning, but I persisted because of the setting. I originally wanted to watch it for a slap in the face, but I didn't plan to watch it after the supporting role of the fiancé was involved. After all, this man is too oily and cheap, he loves everyone everywhere, and his sisters are all over the world. Even though I know that he is just the blood bag of the heroine, I despise it. And if the Destiny Child in the future looks like this, I will really be disgusted. But when I saw the heroine helping Jiang Jiang, I realized that the author should have more ideas, not just like those crappy clichés, so I continued reading. Sure enough, the subsequent plot was much better, but the setting of the heartthrob was a bit boring and not my cup of tea, but I like the main plot setting very much, and I really look forward to the heroine fighting against destiny. Although the strength of the two sides is currently unclear. It looks like a natural chasm, but I believe that the heroine can definitely counterattack the so-called Lord God and ascend with all the geniuses, instead of being like the original setting. Therefore, the innate bloodline and divine power of the Son of Destiny after his ascension are only nourishment for the Lord God, and are thrown back to the lower world with his body cannibalized by the family as a tonic for longevity... These people are really vicious! Looking at the plot design, the number of words in this article should not be less than one million, at least around 1.5 Million. I look forward to it~

It's super beautiful. When I saw that the score was only over 6 points, I was scared. I didn't dare to look at it because I was afraid it would hurt my eyes. But the introduction and title are really attractive. As a result, when I checked the comment section, all of them were five-star positive reviews, and there was not a single negative review. I looked at it tremblingly. It's amazing at first glance, it's very well written. But why are there so few people urging updates? There are very few people following the update. The rating is also very low. However, the article is good.

(There are slight spoilers!) I had forgotten to rate it, but suddenly I found out that the score was so low. I felt very sorry for the author, so I came here to briefly express my opinion. I glanced at the comment section and most of the negative comments were for Lin Fan (the nominal fiancé of the female protagonist), but in fact, in my opinion, Lin Fan is not considered the male protagonist at all. I can only say that he is a relatively important passerby. He will not be around after about thirty or forty chapters. The other men are all very fragrant, even the short-lived little Gu Chong is very fragrant, not to mention Feng Xiaowu who hates the bright moon for not shining on me. The heroine has no heart! ! ! She doesn't care about any man, so she doesn't care about Lin Fan either. Men are not important to her‼ ️They are all tools for her future (of course women are the same) So everyone, give it a chance. If you find that you really can't accept Lin Fan after reading two chapters, you can quit, but I believe that the female protagonist Baobao will let you stay!

Okay, okay, I hope there are more details about the heroine and those Destined Sons and Destined Daughters.

I like it so much! ! ! Song Wanqing seemed to be an angel trapped in the mortal world, not belonging to the mortal world at all. The dream-like beauty is like a thin-winged dragonfly or glass artwork, or like melting ice crystals or cherry blossom petals. His hair is like a rare metal that can capture light, and his eyes are like gems from another world. Even the darkness seemed to be afraid of her and didn't dare to get close. It was late at night, but she was bathed in the moonlight.

Super pretty! This is the true heartthrob, not the heartthrob! The heroine is super smart and tough, has a quirky personality, is very cute, and the plot concept is also very good, especially the truth about the ascension is very unexpected 🥰 Love watching it

Why did Lin Fan have so many scenes in the past? It's beautiful and beautiful, this is the real heartthrob

Very well written. But it is recommended not to write balance literature

This looks great. There are male and female CPs, with more male ones.

I know that Lin Fan creates a sense of coolness, but the sense is not good, and the secondary CP feels a bit balanced, but now the later stage is not bad, the original three-star level is now a four-star level.

She's pretty, but she hates her fiancé. I don't know.

Great, I finished reading it in one sitting

Very nice! Author, please come back soon [cry][cry][cry]

Come on, some people like it, and some people don't like it. It's hard to agree with everyone. Don't be discouraged, author.

Why is the rating so low? It's delicious, it's fragrant rice!

Recommended, recommended, good-looking, good-looking [OK][OK][OK][OK]

She is very good-looking and everyone likes the heroine and is conquered by her ☺️☺️☺️

A super nice article about cultivating immortality, highly recommended