[Single Fruit] [Fruit + Dominance] [Multiple Heroines]
It can emit light and shoot lasers...
That's right! It's Kizaru!
Can shoot magma balls...
That's right! It's Akainu!
It will freeze, freezing the sea...
That's right! It's the blue pheasant!
Brings light to everyone, laughs, and has the sound of drums...
That's right! It's Nika!
Hahaha... All wrong! Just a simple giant of light~
Ye Ensi saved her life with her blood, successfully passed the screening of the infinite heavens, and started traveling through the world of novice pirates:
[Novice Task 1: Establish a Pirate Group]
Ye En: I announce the establishment of the Ye En Pirates!
[Novice Task 2: Recruit crew members]
Ye En: Hey, this friend, poor monk... Oh, no, I can tell at a glance that you and I are destined!
Do you want to join a gang? With no five insurances or one housing fund, 007 will work until death~
[Novice mission three: Kill Im!
Ye En: "???"
Build a team, recruit people, and you want me to fight the big boss?
Is this right? !
Reader comments
I have finished reading the latest chapter. Let me summarize this book. The protagonist is a carbon copy of Luffy. His character is basically off-kilter and nonsensical. This is probably the style of writing that the author wants to create. But I think it's okay to watch the animation. The novel is a bit embarrassing. (Whether book friends can accept it depends on themselves). However, the good thing is that at least the protagonist is not the type with a head full of red or a Celestial Dragon with distorted views.
Then the author said that it is difficult to see the emotional line of many female protagonists. After all, it imitates the sense of companionship in the original work, and there is no ambiguity. It can only be said that it is slightly better than Luffy, so book friends who want to read Thurse can leave it.
The protagonist's strength is relatively reasonable at present, and he has not suddenly become so strong that his combat power collapses, and he has not been weakened. It is well received. The writing style is that of a novice, and the author also said that he should lose his mind.
In short, this book is suitable for those book lovers who want to pass the time and read books.
Emperor Huang Tian was worthy of everyone, but he was only sorry for Yun Yun in the Star Forest. They all blamed Yun Shan for the arranged marriage and insisted on marrying Xiao Wu. Tang San snatched Shi Hao's million-year soul ring in order to save Xiao Wu. Otherwise, Shi Hao would have been nine reds and one blue gold. In order to save Shi Hao, Feng Qing'er used the Infatuation Curse to block Tang San's magical skills and never returned. However, Shi Hao finally succeeded Yan Emperor. Practicing the Burning Technique for both punishment and protection, he obtained the Divine Seal Throne of Eternity and Creation, and was recognized by the Immortal Killing Sword and the Shura Demonic Sword. Mikami Yunlan Sect beheaded Tang San, the god of death, and took back the million-year soul ring. Shi Hao retreated to attack all forbidden spells for the sake of the sentient beings in the eight realms. He used Fulong Xiangtian to give the fourteen-winged archangel Sariel a dragon head, and then used Ten Thousand Swords to return to the sect. Angel Holy Sword, Seven Killing Sword, Shura Demon Sword, Zhuxian Sword The remaining swords of Lord Gui merged into one and killed the Archangel Sariel. Although the Evil Condensation Pearl was shattered and the demon system was destroyed, there was no god in the world. Finally, Shi Hao peeled off the tenth soul ring, resurrected Feng Qing'er, and created the Endless Fire Realm, realizing the eternity of one thought. From then on, Wei Young Turtle guarded the Fire Realm and protected all beings in the eight realms. Shi Hao looked at the lower world and left a sentence: Once a bad person, he will always be a bad person!
After reading the novel, it's overall quite good. The protagonist is very nonsensical and feels like Luffy, but not as outrageous as Luffy. Moreover, the atmosphere of the crew is also very good. Ace's Burning Fruit has been changed to the Firefox Fruit given by the system. The advantage is that it does more damage than the original Burning Fruit. It is higher, and the temperature limit is also higher. It is at least the same as Akainu's rock fruit fruit rating. Moreover, the protagonist's steel balloon physique and light giant phantom beast fruit at the beginning are all swept before entering the new world. No one can beat him, not counting Garp. Beating Crocodile and Enero were both sweeps.
It's not bad. It can be regarded as one of the better ones among the One Pieces in Tomato. The character design is not OOC, and the combat power is not broken. It is just that there are too many crew members. As a result, the old crew members basically no longer appear in the later stage. For example, Carmen has not appeared in more than 80 pictures [face covering]. The update speed is also a bit slow, but the high quality can make up for this.
Just watch it, no one will say a word when you look at it [laughing evilly]
(Sexy author, good reviews online [laughing evilly])
The writing is okay, but for now it's still following Luffy's route. I hope there will be some original islands in the future, or I can write about islands with a relatively similar background in the original work. Some of my own adventure stories will be much more interesting.
The protagonist is well portrayed, free and easy yet domineering. I hope the author will work harder and update it. Don't be funny just for the sake of being funny.
Personally, I still like to upgrade my articles so that I can write them for a longer time.
The author has done a lot of research on the characters of One Piece, and the logic of the characters' actions is not surprising.
The way the characters get on board is also well written.
This book does not stress the combat power, but the foreseeable shortcoming is that after becoming invincible, it turns into a hydrology.
Does anyone still accept Im? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so to so so so so so to so so to
Although I have only read thirty chapters, I think I can now say that this is a masterpiece of Pirates fan fiction. The characters that have appeared so far are very consistent with the original image, and the plot is handled in considerable detail. All fan fiction should be based on this standard. Those who deliberately change the character in order to advance the plot or to show off the protagonist can only be regarded as second-rate.
Come on, author! Keep it up [Like]
Except that the main character is a fool like Luffy, they are pretty good.
The advantage is that there are many female protagonists, the plot is very interesting, and the male protagonist is entertaining
The disadvantage is that there are many female protagonists but none of them are recommended.
Even though it's so abstract, it's still quite fun, and it's relaxing and enjoyable. Every time I watch the anime, I think it would be great if I told them what will happen in advance. On the way to becoming invincible, I can pick up girls along the way.
It's a pretty good-looking Pirates fanfic, so don't be a eunuch, even if it's bad, it's still better than a eunuch.
Yes, I feel like this novel has great potential. It was very smooth to read, and I saw the latest chapter in one fell swoop. This is a rare thing [thinking]
Several negative reviews have given it, it's strange [what] the main character is a bit abstract, but I hope everyone will take a look at it before making a decision [crying] It's been more than 60 chapters, and I haven't seen any bad points yet. The protagonist is abstract but does not bow down, and there is currently no poisonous point.
The taste of pirates is authentic.
It's just that the number of words is too few at the moment to satisfy my appetite, so I'll keep it for now
Let's set the tone. This book is currently ranked in the top three among the dozens of pirate novels I have read. Don't let it slip in the future! Little author! ! !
It's very interesting to watch and I watched it in one sitting, even though the main character looks a bit like Luffy. The author hurry up and update, I can't get enough!
You can still watch it, but I feel like there are very few people urging updates. From early morning to now, there are only 99 people in total, including me. I feel that the author is powering for love now, and I am almost starving to death. I just hope that the author can work hard.
The writing is good, but... Updating one chapter in one day is a bit too little. Many chapters are less than the basic 2,000 words of the novel. If only three chapters could be updated a day. Maybe more people will watch it...
First of all, they didn't follow the ship. Secondly, the crew members they took in were all good. At least they didn't have any thunder stuff. Not counting fanatics, they should have taken them in if they encountered them. Although the author made a lot of comments and comments, it was pretty good and didn't affect my reading experience very much. So far, in my opinion, this book has no flaws. Every book will have flaws. After all, not everyone will be satisfied, but I am very satisfied, but the author is too short. If the subsequent author does not make any mistakes, I will give it a five-star rating.
It's quite fun to hang up, and the characters I chose to board the ship all have a good look and feel. Good reviews.
It's still a five-star rating. It feels like it's rated lower now.
Aba Aba... Aba... Five stars
Pig's trotter is a pure fun person, I can't stop laughing when I look at it
Okay, the main character is pretty good
Personally I think it looks good
Good looking, recommended, keep it up
Come on, novelists
The book is good, but even Ultraman hasn't read the whole thing and doesn't even know that Tiga can cure DNA gene pollution.
Yes, there is no poison, but the strength of the Giant of Light has not been fully unleashed.
Updates are too slow. Can the author make 10,000 updates a day?
I have finished reading the latest chapter. Let me summarize this book. The protagonist is a carbon copy of Luffy. His character is basically off-kilter and nonsensical. This is probably the style of writing that the author wants to create. But I think it's okay to watch the animation. The novel is a bit embarrassing. (Whether book friends can accept it depends on themselves). However, the good thing is that at least the protagonist is not the type with a head full of red or a Celestial Dragon with distorted views. Then the author said that it is difficult to see the emotional line of many female protagonists. After all, it imitates the sense of companionship in the original work, and there is no ambiguity. It can only be said that it is slightly better than Luffy, so book friends who want to read Thurse can leave it. The protagonist's strength is relatively reasonable at present, and he has not suddenly become so strong that his combat power collapses, and he has not been weakened. It is well received. The writing style is that of a novice, and the author also said that he should lose his mind. In short, this book is suitable for those book lovers who want to pass the time and read books.
Emperor Huang Tian was worthy of everyone, but he was only sorry for Yun Yun in the Star Forest. They all blamed Yun Shan for the arranged marriage and insisted on marrying Xiao Wu. Tang San snatched Shi Hao's million-year soul ring in order to save Xiao Wu. Otherwise, Shi Hao would have been nine reds and one blue gold. In order to save Shi Hao, Feng Qing'er used the Infatuation Curse to block Tang San's magical skills and never returned. However, Shi Hao finally succeeded Yan Emperor. Practicing the Burning Technique for both punishment and protection, he obtained the Divine Seal Throne of Eternity and Creation, and was recognized by the Immortal Killing Sword and the Shura Demonic Sword. Mikami Yunlan Sect beheaded Tang San, the god of death, and took back the million-year soul ring. Shi Hao retreated to attack all forbidden spells for the sake of the sentient beings in the eight realms. He used Fulong Xiangtian to give the fourteen-winged archangel Sariel a dragon head, and then used Ten Thousand Swords to return to the sect. Angel Holy Sword, Seven Killing Sword, Shura Demon Sword, Zhuxian Sword The remaining swords of Lord Gui merged into one and killed the Archangel Sariel. Although the Evil Condensation Pearl was shattered and the demon system was destroyed, there was no god in the world. Finally, Shi Hao peeled off the tenth soul ring, resurrected Feng Qing'er, and created the Endless Fire Realm, realizing the eternity of one thought. From then on, Wei Young Turtle guarded the Fire Realm and protected all beings in the eight realms. Shi Hao looked at the lower world and left a sentence: Once a bad person, he will always be a bad person!
After reading the novel, it's overall quite good. The protagonist is very nonsensical and feels like Luffy, but not as outrageous as Luffy. Moreover, the atmosphere of the crew is also very good. Ace's Burning Fruit has been changed to the Firefox Fruit given by the system. The advantage is that it does more damage than the original Burning Fruit. It is higher, and the temperature limit is also higher. It is at least the same as Akainu's rock fruit fruit rating. Moreover, the protagonist's steel balloon physique and light giant phantom beast fruit at the beginning are all swept before entering the new world. No one can beat him, not counting Garp. Beating Crocodile and Enero were both sweeps.
It's not bad. It can be regarded as one of the better ones among the One Pieces in Tomato. The character design is not OOC, and the combat power is not broken. It is just that there are too many crew members. As a result, the old crew members basically no longer appear in the later stage. For example, Carmen has not appeared in more than 80 pictures [face covering]. The update speed is also a bit slow, but the high quality can make up for this.
Just watch it, no one will say a word when you look at it [laughing evilly] (Sexy author, good reviews online [laughing evilly])
The writing is okay, but for now it's still following Luffy's route. I hope there will be some original islands in the future, or I can write about islands with a relatively similar background in the original work. Some of my own adventure stories will be much more interesting.
The protagonist is well portrayed, free and easy yet domineering. I hope the author will work harder and update it. Don't be funny just for the sake of being funny.
Personally, I still like to upgrade my articles so that I can write them for a longer time. The author has done a lot of research on the characters of One Piece, and the logic of the characters' actions is not surprising. The way the characters get on board is also well written. This book does not stress the combat power, but the foreseeable shortcoming is that after becoming invincible, it turns into a hydrology.
Does anyone still accept Im? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so to so so so so so to so so to
Although I have only read thirty chapters, I think I can now say that this is a masterpiece of Pirates fan fiction. The characters that have appeared so far are very consistent with the original image, and the plot is handled in considerable detail. All fan fiction should be based on this standard. Those who deliberately change the character in order to advance the plot or to show off the protagonist can only be regarded as second-rate. Come on, author! Keep it up [Like]
Except that the main character is a fool like Luffy, they are pretty good.
The advantage is that there are many female protagonists, the plot is very interesting, and the male protagonist is entertaining The disadvantage is that there are many female protagonists but none of them are recommended.
Even though it's so abstract, it's still quite fun, and it's relaxing and enjoyable. Every time I watch the anime, I think it would be great if I told them what will happen in advance. On the way to becoming invincible, I can pick up girls along the way.
It's a pretty good-looking Pirates fanfic, so don't be a eunuch, even if it's bad, it's still better than a eunuch.
Yes, I feel like this novel has great potential. It was very smooth to read, and I saw the latest chapter in one fell swoop. This is a rare thing [thinking] Several negative reviews have given it, it's strange [what] the main character is a bit abstract, but I hope everyone will take a look at it before making a decision [crying] It's been more than 60 chapters, and I haven't seen any bad points yet. The protagonist is abstract but does not bow down, and there is currently no poisonous point.
The taste of pirates is authentic. It's just that the number of words is too few at the moment to satisfy my appetite, so I'll keep it for now Let's set the tone. This book is currently ranked in the top three among the dozens of pirate novels I have read. Don't let it slip in the future! Little author! ! !
It's very interesting to watch and I watched it in one sitting, even though the main character looks a bit like Luffy. The author hurry up and update, I can't get enough!
You can still watch it, but I feel like there are very few people urging updates. From early morning to now, there are only 99 people in total, including me. I feel that the author is powering for love now, and I am almost starving to death. I just hope that the author can work hard.
The writing is good, but... Updating one chapter in one day is a bit too little. Many chapters are less than the basic 2,000 words of the novel. If only three chapters could be updated a day. Maybe more people will watch it...
First of all, they didn't follow the ship. Secondly, the crew members they took in were all good. At least they didn't have any thunder stuff. Not counting fanatics, they should have taken them in if they encountered them. Although the author made a lot of comments and comments, it was pretty good and didn't affect my reading experience very much. So far, in my opinion, this book has no flaws. Every book will have flaws. After all, not everyone will be satisfied, but I am very satisfied, but the author is too short. If the subsequent author does not make any mistakes, I will give it a five-star rating.
It's quite fun to hang up, and the characters I chose to board the ship all have a good look and feel. Good reviews. It's still a five-star rating. It feels like it's rated lower now.
Aba Aba... Aba... Five stars
Pig's trotter is a pure fun person, I can't stop laughing when I look at it
Okay, the main character is pretty good
Personally I think it looks good
Good looking, recommended, keep it up
Come on, novelists
The book is good, but even Ultraman hasn't read the whole thing and doesn't even know that Tiga can cure DNA gene pollution.
Yes, there is no poison, but the strength of the Giant of Light has not been fully unleashed.
Updates are too slow. Can the author make 10,000 updates a day?