Canterlot's Love Master

After reading Chapter 22, I would like to briefly share my views. The characters are vivid and not OOC, the multi-line emotional entanglement is full of suspense, and the sweet and sadistic rhythm is controlled very accurately. When it's sweet, you can't help but raise the corners of your mouth, and when it's sad, it can't help but make you feel a little worried. It's not long but full of atmosphere. In Chapter 22, AJ's heart beats when he approaches on tiptoe, and he feels embarrassed and angry when he is interrupted by a cowboy hat... It makes people's hearts beat as they follow the plot. In just tens of thousands of words, the characters' delicate emotions and sense of atmosphere are filled to the brim. The multi-female setting makes people curious about the next emotional direction. Finally, we come to our summary: This book uses delicate writing to outline a "short but gorgeous" heartbeat: Penguin records the morning light of the ice field, and the lover hides the starlight in his eyes. The pull between the two is like the evening wind blowing across the ice, the ambiguity is fermented under the shelter of the cowboy hat, and the parting seems to lengthen the gentle shadow under the street lamp. The cowboy hat can't block the ambiguous wind, and the street light can't remove the shadow of parting. The delicacy and regret of love are written in an immersive way. At the same time, the multiple heroine settings make this love that takes place in Canterlot add an intriguing layer of twists and turns. It's so sweet and worth watching. It makes people look forward to the next content. Five stars have been awarded. Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day, a certain day of a certain month - the man was lying weakly on the bed, his face could not hide the paleness. There was a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of his eyes. The hoarse little voice murmured: Don't forget to update...

Excellent book, I keep it up. I feel it is as good as the one by Lao Ka (Kalilem), and the emotional lines and scenes are well described. I read it in one go, and I basically didn't feel a lot of repeated words. It is much better than Platinum Yiyi's book. Although that book is very sweet, some of the words used in it feel a bit too frequent, giving me a feeling of boredom, but this book does not. Looking at the characters so far, I feel that they are okay, and there is no OOC feeling. It is worth reading.

Very good, the love story is written very delicately, and this part is also very foreshadowing. Unlike some sand-glyphs, two people suddenly fall in love. But actually, I think the author's track is not acceptable, because writing a harem story in Equestria Girls might not be realistic, and readers might not accept it. The best solution is to create a branch plot like the old card next door, or to recruit one or two harems, but in fact, combined with this animation. Love should be unique, should exist only in one person, and should be paid by both parties. Instead of becoming a philanderer and accepting many heroines (if you are a siren, just pretend I didn't tell you)

Here are my recommendations for the book and author/. 1% Of the titles read "harem story" #, but they always break up. It is recommended not to break up all the time. You can think about what a normal harem story is like. 2% Don't use too much rhetoric #metaphor # You can use it appropriately, but if you use it too much, it's a little suspicious of AI or water word count. It's not that you are not allowed to use it here, but you are asked to use it appropriately. 3% Add more humorous plots#Add more humorous and funny abstract plots#For example, a chapter on American bullying, it feels good The author's writing style also needs to be improved. It can be seen that the writing style of Applejack's chapter is very different from the current chapter of Twilight Sparkle. The author should work harder 4% suggested that the author open a book club for easy communication, thank you I hope the author can respond positively

I think the author's writing is very good, the emotional line is very delicate, and it has a light and sweet feeling, which makes the readers want to read on. The author also buried a lot of pits and I don't know how to fill in 🤔 I don't know how other people read this book (anyway, I fell in love with [hurt Shame]) There is only one small problem, that is, with the current relationship between the protagonist and Applejack, it is difficult to think of how the protagonist can accept the remaining female protagonists. Let's see how the author writes. Finally, I hope the author's book can become a big hit [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

After reading this book, my only thought is that I hope the author will not stop updating. I haven't seen such good quality eqg fanfics for a long time. My Little Pony is quite rare, and there are even less My Little Pony Girls. I hope the author will keep up the good work [Top post][Top post][Top post]

It looks good, but the protagonist pays attention to emotions.

It's so beautiful, I want to write a pony book for a lifetime, the author😭

I have to say that the author's control over emotions is really impressive, and his writing style is exquisite. It is recommended for those who don't mind the three views on love mentioned in the introduction. I wonder if the author will consider writing a new novel about a single female protagonist with pure love [please update]

By the way, what does the author plan to write after conquering all the girls?