The Chessmaster's Day in the Dark

Japanese modern Pa, slightly abused. The author's writing style is like a stream, always flowing quietly, with pain embedded in the depth of the words. I started writing it before I even finished reading it. The first half was painful to read. Very depressing. Words are truly magical. Difficulty breathing, unable to shed tears, stomach aches, heart palpitations. Not thinking, just feeling the pain. Why don't you want to think about it? Because you can't calm down, it rains heavily in your heart. This rain comes from looking at a person's wet life. Yan Sheng's life is like a river that disappears in the Gobi desert. No matter how turbulent it is, it doesn't matter. His life was built on mistakes, and the meaning of existence was something destined to be denied. So what was the persistence? What is the struggle? A painful life, a sad life. When I saw Yan Sheng resigning from Lunar Eclipse, I breathed a sigh of relief after reading this book, congratulating him for finally having the courage to take off the layers of shackles on his body and run in the direction of "people". He is walking, taking off everything on his body and running towards "people", the imperfect and broken ones, the ones who can accept this, the true self, who will always be on the road of searching before there is a real answer. A barnyard grass facing the light gradually emerges from the damp atrium. Suddenly I want to embrace the person who dares to take off the shackles and move forward. He is a rebel. I really like this title given to him by netizens. I couldn't help but blame Yan Sheng's pain on the appearance of Yuanyi - it was as if Yuanyi was a shadow that shone on Yan Sheng from birth, making even breathing painful and torturous for him. The article compares the relationship between Rihei to twin trees, with their roots entangled underground. With the tangled root system underground, can you tell whether they are supporting each other or strangulating? I am reminded of a sentence from other articles: Yan Sheng's feelings for Yui Yi are as complex as a mess, but the core one is undoubtedly a kind of almost obsessive care. Indeed, it is never simple jealousy or hatred, it is an emotion that I cannot describe accurately now. I'll add more after I finish reading it ()

God. This is the first time I have seen Wenquxing doujin with such a strong ability in narrative, description and character creation. To be able to write fan fiction into a novel, the author's own output ability is already quite terrifying. . Especially the first to third chapters, which are related to Yuanyi, perfectly conveyed the sense of oppression and terror inherent in the Son of God, as well as his own sense of inhumanity, which was not reflected when Crocodile drew the comics. It was so well written. . Until now, I can read it very smoothly. There is no ink mark at all, and there are no redundant words. I can only say that I have a thorough understanding of the product, so powerful, shocking and delicious.

The language is exquisite, the plot is reasonable, interesting, logical and novel, and the writing is very real. It can be seen that the author has a wide range of experience and knowledge. The writing style effectively reflects the emotional entanglement between the two people. It may be criticized as being too cumbersome, but I personally prefer this heavy feeling. Many of the descriptions in this book touched me deeply, and the whole thing stands up to scrutiny. All in all, it is an excellent work. As a fanfic, it is at the T0 level. I am sorry that so few people read it because no one discusses it with me. I hope that this book will be seen by more people one day.

The teacher's writing style is very delicate, his words are precise, and some of his professional knowledge is also very well-tested. It can be seen that it covers a wide range of topics and is very powerful!! Modern PA does not know OOC at all, and the description of emotional changes is also step-by-step, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the writing style is also superb. The control of emotions is very good, and the brother's situation is very concretely displayed. The first few chapters are very depressing, and the unyielding Yan Sheng is where his charm lies. After surviving the first and second chapters, there will be very warm scenes of getting along with each other. Some scenes are particularly shocking and beautiful. Some people don't like to read serious things, but my wife's writing is really good. I hope more people can see this excellent work. There are spoilers below: In the first few chapters, Yan Sheng went from closeness to pity to fear of his younger brother's talent, but he still guided Yuanyi to come into contact with various things that he had never been exposed to. He has been working very hard to catch up with Yuanyi, but the gap has been widened in terms of Go, academic performance, and research projects, and he has gradually been overshadowed by Yuanyi's light. Fear, unwillingness, jealousy, despair. Yan Sheng tried his best until the end, squeezed out every ounce of himself, used pain as fuel to pursue Yuanyi, and gained his father's approval. As readers, we watched him slowly collapse, but his appearance could not reveal even a trace, and he was not allowed to be weak or retreat. Stomach pain follows you like a shadow. It is not obvious at first, but then it gradually shines with each time Yuanyi makes a blow, like a needle or a knife, and gradually spreads to the body, becomes entangled, and becomes a part of the body. Appearing suddenly at every critical node is heart-wrenching. Yuanyi in the novel is more inorganic. Everything except love can achieve achievements in a short period of time that others cannot surpass in a lifetime. Yuanyi is present in every painful and difficult scene. Although there are caring actions, they are all indifferent, as if they will never be moved by him. But the previous ones are all from brother's perspective, so we will also misunderstand Yuanyi along with brother, thinking that Yuanyi will never understand Yan Sheng, but in fact it is not the case. He is actually looking for better possibilities in his own way. He is also working hard and accompanying him. He kept looking at his brother who was in pain and chasing after him. Because of his existence, everything makes sense. Flute, chess records, specially delivered stomach medicine, and breathing techniques to relieve stomach pain are included throughout. The plot is taken care of before and after, and some small ingenuity is particularly touching. People who watch it are very moved. For example, they agreed to complete the kite that they could not finish flying in childhood. The distance between the two of them keeps changing as they get along with each other. Yuanyi cooks virtuously (not), always cares about his brother's feelings, stays, reluctantly, and waves when saying goodbye. Every time Yan Sheng gives Yuan Yi candies, it is like we have really glimpsed a subtle part of their lives.

After reading halfway through, I found the author's character creation to be really good, very good, and the twisted feeling in Iwakatsu's body was well expressed. Moreover, this Yuanyi can be said to be the character design that fits the original work the best among all the fans I have seen. The light temperament is not as kind as the original work, but it is wise, very good, very good. The Yan Sheng in this book is the kind version of Yan Sheng, very kind, but just like the original book, he doesn't cherish himself at all and always hides his thoughts and wishes. Yan Sheng should be more selfish and treat himself better! (But my stepfather is still annoying, and I will chop him into pieces for you)

I was caught by the writing late at night and into the early morning. The teacher's writing is very rational and precise, and the fit with Yan Sheng's perspective is perfect. I can really feel the pressure and hatred from my brother. My stomach started to hurt halfway through watching it and I really don't understand why Yuanyi exists. What does he want to do? His existence makes me suffer, but if he didn't exist, he would be locked up in Jiguo's high-pressure cage forever... Sun, you don't understand people's hearts. ヽ(;▽;)ノ I look forward to the teacher's next article and continue to read it word for word!

Look! The writing style of the first chapter is very attractive. There is a faint feeling of stomachache between the lines of the development that overflows the screen (creating the high-pressure atmosphere of Hao Niu). I have to say that although there are some repeated emphasis in the middle, it also echoes the previous text very well!

After reading it for the first time, I felt that the emotions I had suppressed for a long time finally relaxed. The whole article describes the process of Yan Sheng accepting himself, as well as the transformation and definition of the relationship with Yuanyi. It was not until later that Yuanyi felt that Yuanyi was not so human hhh. Both of them are brave. Yan Sheng was subjectively "I want to do this", and Yuanyi tended to "this is more efficient" in the early stage, but the definition of mutual anchors was so touching. The two later went through a lot of things (no spoilers) and influenced each other, and finally managed to see the light of day. This is one of the few excellent modern novels I have read. I feel that the author has a wide range of knowledge and can write some professional terms in a way that readers can understand, allowing them to better understand the behavioral patterns and thinking logic of the characters in the article. I feel that this kind of description can help modern readers understand the gap between talent and hard work better than the original swordsmanship (laughing). I almost despaired from Yan Sheng's perspective, but how can I put it, the two people are really going in both directions, and Yuanyi is even more firm and pure. Brother is so gentle. Well, I don't know what to say. My wife's writing style is really good. She patiently responds to readers' comments. She feels rational and delicate. I am sure that your work deserves to be loved! ❤️

The writing was so good that I felt it was different from the articles I had read before. It was not a thin description that simply revolved around the emotions of the main characters in the story. I felt that I had seen something deeper in this article. The emotions between the characters were intertwined and blurred, and it was more real. The characters were not simplistic and more complex. And other relatively thin articles that are simply used to kill time. It allows readers to empathize or think deeper into the story. . The teacher's description of each character is very realistic and vivid. There is a feeling that this world is real. Hey, I don't know how to express myself and I don't have any literary talent. . It's a little bit out of context. But what the teacher wrote is really beautiful! Where are the people! How come there are so few!! It's unreasonable!

I really like this book so much. Why are so few people reading it? I have read it before. The goddess is so powerful. It really shocked me. The writing is very good. It is not OOC. I think this book is the least OOC. It completely matches my impression of Yuanyi. In the early stage, I felt sorry for Yan Sheng one-sidedly. It hurt me so much when I read it. Yuanyi used his own way to protect Yan Sheng. In the end, he redeemed Yan Sheng and told him that he didn't need to be so perfect. In the early stage, I thought it was enough, but it turned out to be even more severe. The two of us worked hard to be together openly and honestly. We were very nervous, but we were destined to have a sense of security. How could it be so delicious? When it was over, I was really reluctant to leave. When I looked back, I found that the goddess was posting extras every day. Every extra post smells so good. I opened it every morning and was immediately stunned by the fragrance. I am so happy. Goddess, can you see your own face when you wake up in the mirror every day? Goddess is happy every day. I will always follow you. What the goddess wrote is worth rereading many, many times ٩(*´◒`*)۶