The Chess Player Is Getting Darker

Japanese modern Pa, slightly abused. The author's writing style is like a stream, always flowing quietly, with pain embedded in the depth of the words. I started writing it before I even finished reading it. The first half was painful to read. Very depressing. Words are truly magical. Difficulty breathing, unable to shed tears, stomach aches, heart palpitations. Not thinking, just feeling the pain. Why don't you want to think about it? Because you can't calm down, it rains heavily in your heart. This rain comes from looking at a person's wet life. Yan Sheng's life is like a river that disappears in the Gobi desert. No matter how turbulent it is, it doesn't matter. His life was built on mistakes, and the meaning of existence was something destined to be denied. So what was the persistence? What is the struggle? A painful life, a sad life. When I saw Yan Sheng resigning from Lunar Eclipse, I breathed a sigh of relief after reading this book, congratulating him for finally having the courage to take off the layers of shackles on his body and run in the direction of "people". He is walking, taking off everything on his body and running towards "people", the imperfect and broken ones, the ones who can accept this, the true self, who will always be on the road of searching before there is a real answer. A barnyard grass facing the light gradually emerges from the damp atrium. Suddenly I want to embrace the person who dares to take off the shackles and move forward. He is a rebel. I really like this title given to him by netizens. I couldn't help but blame Yan Sheng's pain on the appearance of Yuanyi - it was as if Yuanyi was a shadow that shone on Yan Sheng from birth, making even breathing painful and torturous for him. The article compares the relationship between Rihei to twin trees, with their roots entangled underground. With the tangled root system underground, can you tell whether they are supporting each other or strangulating? I am reminded of a sentence from other articles: Yan Sheng's feelings for Yui Yi are as complex as a mess, but the core one is undoubtedly a kind of almost obsessive care. Indeed, it is never simple jealousy or hatred, it is an emotion that I cannot describe accurately now. I'll add more after I finish reading it ()

God. This is the first time I have seen Wenquxing doujin with such a strong ability in narrative, description and character creation. To be able to write fan fiction into a novel, the author's own output ability is already quite terrifying. . Especially the first to third chapters, which are related to Yuanyi, perfectly conveyed the sense of oppression and terror inherent in the Son of God, as well as his own sense of inhumanity, which was not reflected when Crocodile drew the comics. It was so well written. . Until now, I can read it very smoothly. There is no ink mark at all, and there are no redundant words. I can only say that I have a thorough understanding of the product, so powerful, shocking and delicious.

The language is exquisite, the plot is reasonable, interesting, logical and novel, and the writing is very real. It can be seen that the author has a wide range of experience and knowledge. The writing style effectively reflects the emotional entanglement between the two people. It may be criticized as being too cumbersome, but I personally prefer this heavy feeling. Many of the descriptions in this book touched me deeply, and the whole thing stands up to scrutiny. All in all, it is an excellent work. As a fanfic, it is at the T0 level. I am sorry that so few people read it because no one discusses it with me. I hope that this book will be seen by more people one day.

The teacher's writing style is very delicate, his words are precise, and some of his professional knowledge is also very well-tested. It can be seen that it covers a wide range of topics and is very powerful! ! Modern PA does not know OOC at all, and the description of emotional changes is also step-by-step, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the writing style is also superb. The control of emotions is very good, and the brother's situation is very concretely displayed. The first few chapters are very depressing, and the unyielding Yan Sheng is where his charm lies. After surviving the first and second chapters, there will be very warm scenes of getting along with each other. Some scenes are particularly shocking and beautiful. Some people don't like to read serious things, but my wife's writing is really good. I hope more people can see this excellent work. There are spoilers below: In the first few chapters, Yan Sheng went from closeness to pity to fear of his younger brother's talent, but he still guided Yuanyi to come into contact with various things that he had never been exposed to. He has been working very hard to catch up with Yuanyi, but the gap has been widened in terms of Go, academic performance, and research projects, and he has gradually been overshadowed by Yuanyi's light. Fear, unwillingness, jealousy, despair. Yan Sheng tried his best until the end, squeezed out every ounce of himself, used pain as fuel to pursue Yuanyi, and gained his father's approval. As readers, we watched him slowly collapse, but his appearance could not reveal even a trace, and he was not allowed to be weak or retreat. Stomach pain follows you like a shadow. It is not obvious at first, but then it gradually shines with each time Yuanyi makes a blow, like a needle or a knife, and gradually spreads to the body, becomes entangled, and becomes a part of the body. Appearing suddenly at every critical node is heart-wrenching. Yuanyi in the novel is more inorganic. Everything except love can achieve achievements in a short period of time that others cannot surpass in a lifetime. Yuanyi is present in every painful and difficult scene. Although there are caring actions, they are all indifferent, as if they will never be moved by him. But the previous ones are all from brother's perspective, so we will also misunderstand Yuanyi along with brother, thinking that Yuanyi will never understand Yan Sheng, but in fact it is not the case. He is actually looking for better possibilities in his own way. He is also working hard and accompanying him. He kept looking at his brother who was in pain and chasing after him. Because of his existence, everything makes sense. Flute, chess records, specially delivered stomach medicine, and breathing techniques to relieve stomach pain are included throughout. The plot is taken care of before and after, and some small ingenuity is particularly touching. People who watch it are very moved. For example, they agreed to complete the kite that they could not finish flying in childhood. The distance between the two of them keeps changing as they get along with each other. Yuanyi cooks virtuously (not), always cares about his brother's feelings, stays, reluctantly, and waves when saying goodbye. Every time Yan Sheng gives Yuan Yi candies, it is like we have really glimpsed a subtle part of their lives.

After reading halfway through, I found the author's character creation to be really good, very good, and the twisted feeling in Iwakatsu's body was well expressed. Moreover, this Yuanyi can be said to be the character design that fits the original work the best among all the fans I have seen. The light temperament is not as kind as the original work, but it is wise, very good, very good. The Yan Sheng in this book is the kind version of Yan Sheng, very kind, but just like the original book, he doesn't cherish himself at all and always hides his thoughts and wishes. Yan Sheng should be more selfish and treat himself better! (But my stepfather is still annoying, and I will chop him into pieces for you)

I was caught by the writing late at night and into the early morning. The teacher's writing is very rational and precise, and the fit with Yan Sheng's perspective is perfect. I can really feel the pressure and hatred from my brother. My stomach started to hurt halfway through watching it and I really don't understand why Yuanyi exists. What does he want to do? His existence makes me suffer, but if he didn't exist, he would be locked up in Jiguo's high-pressure cage forever... Sun, you don't understand people's hearts. ヽ(；▽；)ノ I look forward to the teacher's next article and continue to read it word for word!

Look! The writing style of the first chapter is very attractive. There is a faint feeling of stomachache between the lines of the development that overflows the screen (creating the high-pressure atmosphere of Hao Niu). I have to say that although there are some repeated emphasis in the middle, it also echoes the previous text very well!

The writing was so good that I felt it was different from the articles I had read before. It was not a thin description that simply revolved around the emotions of the main characters in the story. I felt that I had seen something deeper in this article. The emotions between the characters were intertwined and blurred, and it was more real. The characters were not simplistic and more complex. And other relatively thin articles that are simply used to kill time. It allows readers to empathize or think deeper into the story. . The teacher's description of each character is very realistic and vivid. There is a feeling that this world is real. Hey, I don't know how to express myself and I don't have any literary talent. . It's a little bit out of context. But what the teacher wrote is really beautiful! Where are the people! How come there are so few! ! It's unreasonable!

After reading it for the first time, I felt that the emotions I had suppressed for a long time finally relaxed. The whole article describes the process of Yan Sheng accepting himself, as well as the transformation and definition of the relationship with Yuanyi. It was not until later that Yuanyi felt that Yuanyi was not so human hhh. Both of them are brave. Yan Sheng was subjectively "I want to do this", and Yuanyi tended to "this is more efficient" in the early stage, but the definition of mutual anchors was so touching. The two later went through a lot of things (no spoilers) and influenced each other, and finally managed to see the light of day. This is one of the few excellent modern novels I have read. I feel that the author has a wide range of knowledge and can write some professional terms in a way that readers can understand, allowing them to better understand the behavioral patterns and thinking logic of the characters in the article. I feel that this kind of description can help modern readers understand the gap between talent and hard work better than the original swordsmanship (laughing). I almost despaired from Yan Sheng's perspective, but how can I put it, the two people are really going in both directions, and Yuanyi is even more firm and pure. Brother is so gentle. Well, I don't know what to say. My wife's writing style is really good. She patiently responds to readers' comments. She feels rational and delicate. I am sure that your work deserves to be loved! [Love]

I really like this book so much. Why are so few people reading it? I have read it before. The goddess is so powerful. It really shocked me. The writing is very good. It is not OOC. I think this book is the least OOC. It completely matches my impression of Yuanyi. In the early stage, I felt sorry for Yan Sheng one-sidedly. It hurt me so much when I read it. Yuanyi used his own way to protect Yan Sheng. In the end, he redeemed Yan Sheng and told him that he didn't need to be so perfect. In the early stage, I thought it was enough, but it turned out to be even more severe. The two of us worked hard to be together openly and honestly. We were very nervous, but we were destined to have a sense of security. How could it be so delicious? When it was over, I was really reluctant to leave. When I looked back, I found that the goddess was posting extras every day. Every extra post smells so good. I opened it every morning and was immediately stunned by the fragrance. I am so happy. Goddess, can you see your own face when you wake up in the mirror every day? Goddess is happy every day. I will always follow you. What the goddess wrote is worth rereading many, many times ٩(*´◒`*)۶

Like. This is a novel that needs to be read slowly and with your brain. Some emotional changes are handled very delicately. People with strong empathy may have started to suffer from stomachaches following Yan Sheng. Compared with those "fast food" novels, this one is suitable for "chewing slowly" and is not suitable for quick reading without thinking. It is easy to fail to connect with the following plot and miss details. Then when watching, you can appropriately pair it with some soothing or dull music to make it more immersive. What I have always wanted to say is that the output is really large. Most chapters are three to four thousand words, and the most is even 10,000 words. (The point of large quantity and full control) Finally, I really like the writing style of the boss. I hope I can follow this book until it is finished❤️.

The boss's writing style is very good, as delicate as a stream. . The relationship and differences (gaps) between stepbrothers are well written: Yuanyi has always been loved silently. He has also had his share of misfortunes, but he has spiritual support. He has a mother, a brother, and friends. There was pain in it, but there was happiness. He felt that love was good, he felt that love was warm, so he still loved his brother when Yan Sheng was on the road to becoming his enemy. Yan Sheng cannot feel love, but Yan Sheng also longed for love, but his father was a dominator. There was no love, only so-called respect - and even this quickly disappeared after Yuanyi discovered his talent. All the desire for love was suddenly stopped, and now Yan Sheng, who was shaped in the lunar eclipse, would not be loved, because he had grown into a person who did not need love. He doesn't know what love is, and it's hard for him to be touched by love because he can't receive emotions and even avoids them on his own. At this time, a person who seems to be strong in everything comes to love him, just like a person with frostbite soaking in hot water. Others think it is good to soak in hot water in winter, but he just feels like he is going to rot. . . In short, Yan Sheng, I feel sorry for you. . . Because I suffer from a serious stomach disease, big mood swings will cause stomach pain. When I watched it, my stomach really throbbed and hurt (this is because I was immersed in it). .

Your wife wrote so well! ! Highly recommended! ! ! It has a very graphic feel, a strong sense of life, a daily style, and is very real! ! The emotions are rich and the characters are vivid. Just watch the two brothers arguing through a screen! ! Each chapter is quite long, and I'm still not finished reading it by the end of the chapter! ! ! [Why is no one watching? ! ! ]

It's a dad's level. I was depressed when I saw it earlier. Yan Sheng just needs to be himself [crying] You can watch it. It's very professional. I can only say that the story is so tight that I can't stop. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Show it to me, why does this hemp rope feel like it's about to break? Come on, let me compete with you [laugh][laugh][laugh] It feels like this rooftop is so low to the ground. Come on, let me compete with you [laugh][laugh][laugh] This pond feels so shallow. Come on, come on, let me compete with you [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] Oops, I'm a little insomniac, come on, let me take sleeping pills and let me compete with you [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] The knife seems to be not sharp anymore, it's okay, I'll test it [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] The early part was quite sadistic (it made me want to die), and I easily got a stomachache when reading the article. However, there is interaction in the later part. In short, it is very sweet, and the author is also very diligent. It has been completed. Very beautiful, highly recommended

Yan Sheng and Yuanyi in the book are not just shells, they are really touching, especially the details of life described by the teacher! Warm and natural, this is how the life of two brothers should be. The ordinary and steady flow of water is slow and slow. All the things that stand in front of them can be softened bit by bit until they are resolved. When I first saw the first few pictures, it really made me feel depressed (╥╯╰╥)ง. It's really a little bitter melon, but it's really sweet when it's sweet. I'm so happy.

This book is very deliciously written. The author of QAQ has very good control over the characters, and the interactions he writes are very delicate! ! ! Not only are the psychological activities written very close to the characters, but the scenery is also immersive! Moreover, the writing style is also very stable, and it is really enjoyable to read it in one sitting. . . I also cried many times during the movie. I burst into tears when I saw Yan Sheng realize that he does not have to be "perfect". . Yan Sheng and Yuanyi's daily lives have a faint sense of happiness. . . It makes people feel warm after watching it... Thank you to the author ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა

It makes me feel sick to my stomach Throbbing pain. Even my head was dizzy. This should be an evaluation that expresses the book's accurate and absolute description of Yan Sheng's psychology. The author is awesome. A faint, depressing, and clear feeling of breathless despair. Why is it so uncomfortable even now? Five-star review provided

The teacher's writing is very good, and the logic is very good. Sometimes you can understand the plot that you didn't understand before, and the teacher's emotional scenes are very well written, and the description is very delicate. The teacher wrote Yuanyi's genius character in this book really well... Yan Sheng's inner drama in the early stage was also written very well. I really understood Yan Sheng when I read it earlier, especially those chapters in high school. I actually felt a little jealous... Anyway, the teacher wrote it very well. I haven't finished it yet. It is a very good work.

The writing style of this article is really good, and the narrative ability is very strong, but the early stage is really too depressing, maybe because the main perspective of this article is Yan Sheng, but his sense of substitution is really too strong, so strong that when I first started reading, I wanted to strangle Yuanyi to death, or sew his mouth shut. He put the pain from Jiguo Yansheng that was not explained in the original work, and strongly explained that it was Jiguo Yuanyi, just like Yan Sheng was obviously working hard Things are within Yuanyi's reach. Geniuses are no different from ordinary people in front of the Son of God. No matter how hard they try, it is useless. For someone with strong self-esteem like Yan Sheng, Yuanyi's speaking ability in the early stage was really too direct. It was so direct that it didn't look like comfort or concern, but more like ridicule and showing off. It was like trampling Yan Sheng's proud things and self-esteem to pieces [almost crying] [smile]໒꒰ ྀི ′̥̥̥ ᵔ ‵̥̥̥ ꒱ྀིა

The emotions are delicate, the content is substantial, and the plot is very clear. The teacher's writing is very, very, very good, and it gives people a strong sense of empathy. I can completely understand why Yan Sheng collapsed. The worldly expectations are too heavy, and he can't bear the pressure. In addition, his twin brother is more dazzling. If you live in this family, everyone will collapse. Highly recommended! I really recommend reading it. I feel that this is the second best one I have read in Rihei (because I haven't finished it yet).

Finished spreading flowers! This book is really well written by the teacher. Every time the text is accurate, it just whets the appetite and makes people look forward to the follow-up. The teacher writes about the pressure and tension when two people deal with the crisis in a very detailed and appropriate way. When I read it, I was really affected. My heart suddenly tightened and I worried about what they would do if they were caught. The daily life was also very warm. After reading it, my mind was full of Chidori. They will have their own happiness in the following days. It is really good that the story ends at the happiest time. In addition, I will not put N brush. !

I haven't finished reading it yet. The grain produced by the boss is very affordable. I don't recommend it for the emotional line, because this book is about the ordinary life of an old man after marriage, and Yuanyi's human-machine sense is well reflected. , Yan Sheng's stomach hurts repeatedly in the front, and it's very warm for the two of them to make kites together in the back, but they still have the knife, and it's okay. The ending is he (´-ω-`). The extra story written in this book is super delicious and very graphic (●°u°●) " This book also portrays the divinity of Yuanyi very well. After Yan Sheng no longer has the experience of the Warring States period, they seem to have survived the two tribulations better. In this book, he is a very kind and emotional person, and his stomach is very fragile. It is the most real him. The underlying code of [admiration] is still there, and it is delicious (●°u°●) "Yan Sheng, Yan Sheng, your background is gentle, and your life is perfect! Let's create a wonderful ending with your brother! (With such a good book, I met such an uneducated me)

It's been a long time since I've seen a long Japanese article! The plot created by the author is very smooth, and the description of the psychological contradiction of the brother is very good, and the step by step of the brother to seeing himself is very smooth and fascinating! I was also very surprised after learning about my brother's setting! But subconsciously, I also thought it was delicious😋. This modern pa book is really very good-looking. It was a bit sadistic in the early stage, but it was okay in the end. In short, the more I read it, the more excited I became! They are Yuanyi and Yan Sheng! It's unique, and the bond between the two has never been broken! As long as we are together, no matter what we do, we will be happy! Very delicious!

The first few chapters almost killed me. TT From the perspective of my brother, the pressure was really unbearable. . But even so, he was not willing to say harsh words to Yuanyi. He was so soft-hearted. . Very well written TT

The writing is very good! But it's really a knife. In the teacher's writing, Rihei is like a pair of miserable mandarin ducks [crying]

Very well written! The writing is beautiful, natural and smooth, and the plot is very contagious! It can make people deeply feel the awkward emotions in Yan Sheng's heart and the complicated feelings of the two brothers (including different brain circuits...). The previous plot is really immersive (the writing is still too delicate...), It is a bit depressing, but it is still very enjoyable to watch! However, this also allows readers to have a deeper understanding of Yan Sheng's psychology. He is really a little bitter gourd. . . But the writing is still very good! Well worth a look!

The character design is very authentic and not OOC at all... It's a masterpiece. It fits the characters better than most of the Japanese and Hei fanfics on the market, and the writing is amazing and powerful... It's easy for viewers to get involved and feel really suffocated... It hurts so much and tastes so delicious.

The author has a good grasp of the rhythm of the plot, and some of the psychological descriptions and scene descriptions are also great! ! ! There are some particularly cute places in Brother's book, which are worth seeing! ! (And the author's interactions are also very cute)

Madam's writing style is natural, and her emotions are revealed naturally. The plot is just a matter of course, and there is no sudden feeling. It makes people feel that it should be like this. Yan Sheng, you have really worked hard... The first few chapters really gave me a stomachache. When I saw Yan Sheng's memories from time to time, I felt a little resentful that iron cannot be made into steel (? Maybe)