The End Times: Trading the Overlord for Fengxian from the Start

I hope that the author will continue to work hard and create a new and unique Valkyrie novel in Tomato. I have a few suggestions here, and I hope the author can comment on them. 1. Personal suggestion: When adding Chinese characters to this novel, do not forget the original characters. Civilization should let a hundred flowers bloom, instead of admiring oneself. The Valkyrie at the end of the anime originally meant that humans are fighting against the power of the gods, but many novels in Tomato novels misinterpret this meaning. , I not only admire the brilliance of Chinese historical figures, but also want to see the stars of heroes from all over the world shine. I hope the author will not only write about Chinese characters. Second, do not accept Brünnhilde. She already has a boyfriend, the dragon-slaying hero Siegfried. If the author wants to add a girlfriend to the master. I personally recommend The Seventh Lady - Reggie Leif. The meeting of two miracles may burst out with new brilliance (I hope that the role of the Valkyrie in the original work will not be missing, and it is best not to have too many female protagonists). Third, I hope to add some dialogues or events between Chinese characters and characters in the original work, such as: Lu Bu, Xiang Yu, Thor, the three of them drinking together, Tesla and Luban discussing technology. , Hercules and Lu Zhishen, Simon Haye and Zhang Taofang, Leiden Left and Right Guards and Wu Song, Jack the Ripper and Bai Qi, Leonidas and Guan Yu and so on. Hope to see their conversations and events I hope the author has a bright future and keeps moving forward 👍👍👍

The world is unkind and regards all things as stupid dogs, grass and insects. What we have to do is to prove our way as humans to those gods who think highly of themselves. Xiang Yu proved the art of military affairs with softness in strength, Li Bai proved the way of poetry that breaks through oneself and forgets frustration, Guan Yu proved the way of martial arts with great justice, and Gagarin proved the way of pioneering that breaks through oneself and lasts forever.. People use their own way to shout to the gods, but the insects have never been truly defeated! This book is well written, using the final Valkyrie as a carrier to write about the time when human stars shine.

It's a very interesting book, but there should be more foreigners in it. I'm not saying that Chinese people are not good, but they are all well-known figures. You can find some foreign ones, which may be refreshing.

The story is wonderful, but I think a big drawback is that almost all human players are from China. Even though China has a rich history of 5,000 years, the survival of mankind cannot only rely on the power of one country. Only the unity of the people of the world can win the victory of mankind. In fact, Loki can also play Sisyphus [laughter]

It's a good book, but I have a suggestion, that is, don't make almost all Chinese ancestors, that is, 55 or 64 points between China and foreign countries. Otherwise, it will be a bit strange to be all Chinese, and it will feel like there are only Chinese ancestors in human history. Sasaki and Okita Souji can change it. These two can win purely because of their nationality. Finally, cheers author, keep writing, don't stop updating 💕💕💕

Yes, the sense of immersion is strong, and the character description is very good. If it can be maintained, then this book will be one of the representative works of Tomato Valkyrie fan fiction 🍉

You deserve 5 stars, much better than the unknown author next door, no! It's insulting to compare you to each other.

I think it's pretty good. I changed some things and it's much better than the original.

This is no longer just an online article, but almost a masterpiece that has been handed down from generation to generation - touching the origin of the human spirit. The author's profound cultural literacy really amazed me [Admiration]

I like it, I really like it. I especially like Gagarin's part. I hope there will be more like Che Guevara and Gagarin. Is this the shining star of mankind? I don't know why I don't like to watch it.