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I hope the author will continue his efforts and create a new and unique Valkyrie novel on Tomato. I have a few suggestions here and I hope the author can comment on them. 1. I personally suggest that when adding Chinese characters to this novel, you should not forget the original characters. Civilization should let a hundred flowers bloom, rather than admiring one's beauty alone. The original meaning of this anime is that humans are fighting against the power of the gods, but many Tomato novels misinterpret this meaning. I not only admire the glory of Chinese historical figures, but also want to see the stars of heroes from all over the world shine. I hope the author will not only write about Chinese characters. 2. Never accept Brünnhilde, she already has a boyfriend, the dragon-slaying hero Siegfried, if the author wants to add a girlfriend to his master. I personally recommend Seven Girls - Reggie Leif. When two miracles meet, they may burst out with new brilliance (I hope there will be no less Valkyrie scenes in the original work, and it is best not to have too many female protagonists) 3. I hope to add some dialogues or events between Chinese characters and characters in the original work, such as: Lu Bu, Xiang Yu, and Thor drinking together, Tesla and Luban discussing technology, Hercules and Lu Zhishen, Simon Haye and Zhang Taofang, Thunder and Lightning Gatekeeper and Wu Song, Jack the Ripper and Bai Qi, Leonidas and Guan Yu, etc. Hope to see their conversations and events I hope the author has a bright future and moves forward bravely [Like][Like][Like]

The world is unkind and regards all things as stupid dogs, grass and insects. What we have to do is to prove our way as humans to those gods who think highly of themselves. Xiang Yu proved the art of war that is strong yet soft, Li Bai proved the way of poetry that breaks through oneself and forgets frustration, Guan Yu proved the way of martial arts that is upright and awe-inspiring, and Gagarin proved the way of pioneering that breaks through oneself and lasts forever. ． People use their own way to shout to the gods, but the insects have never been truly defeated! This book is well written, using the final Valkyrie as a carrier to write about the time when human stars shine.

It's a very interesting book, but there should be more foreigners in it. I'm not saying that Chinese people are not good, but they are all well-known figures. You can find some foreign ones, which may be refreshing.

The story is wonderful, but I think a big drawback is that almost all human players are from China. Even though China has a rich history of 5,000 years, the survival of mankind cannot only rely on the power of one country. Only the unity of the people of the world can win the victory of mankind. In fact, Loki can also play Sisyphus [laughter]

It's a good book, but I have a suggestion, that is, don't make almost all Chinese ancestors, that is, 55 or 64 points between China and foreign countries. Otherwise, it will be a bit strange to be all Chinese, and it will feel like there are only Chinese ancestors in human history. Sasaki and Okita Souji can change it. These two can win purely because of their nationality. Finally, cheers author, keep writing, don't stop updating [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Yes, the sense of immersion is strong, and the character description is very good. If it can be maintained, then this book will be one of the representative works of Tomato Valkyrie fan fiction [Eating Melon]

You deserve 5 stars, much better than the unknown author next door, no! It's insulting to compare you to each other.

I think it's pretty good. I changed some things and it's much better than the original.

This is no longer just an online article, but almost a masterpiece that has been handed down from generation to generation - touching the origin of the human spirit. The author's profound cultural literacy really amazed me [Admiration]

The details are well written, which is rare in Tomato Not relying on cheating or crushing, every sage fought with faith, integrity, and character. Currently, there are good stories about Xiang Yu's pride, Li Bai's poetry, Guan Yu's loyalty, the First Emperor's world, Zhuge's fire, Confucius' Tao, and Che Guevara's spirit. Remember the author must not stop updating

Like it, really like it I particularly like Gagarin's part. I hope there will be more like Che Guevara and Gagarin. Is this the shining star of mankind? I don't know why I don't like to watch it.

I finally found gold among a bunch of big copies. The author is well written. Don't stop updating [crazy]

A very good novel

Simple, a good review [shy]

Come on, come on, come on, why is there no one there?

It's very good-looking. It's rare to see a tomato with fine grains. The characters are very vivid. Every character is vivid and not brainless. Even if you haven't watched Valkyrie, you can still enjoy it. I recommend it.

This book is absolutely beautiful. There are only some flaws, but the flaws are not outweighed.

It's very beautiful, the characters are well created, and the plot is well arranged.

It's exciting, it's cool, come and see

Very good. Why is no one there? [What]

Really beautiful, highly recommended

Awesome, I fell in love with Xiang Yu's writing

It's really well written, surpassing the original work

It's really well written. You understand history.

Really very beautiful

The story world is huge A rare good book in this circle

Good, good, good, good, good

So far I have only read Li Bai and Xiang Yu's What to Say? The writing is very good.

It's so beautiful. The author's skills are very deep. Come on.