I Am at *****

I really like the author's purely academic style without a female harem, with strength and transformation as the main plot. The only thing that I feel is lacking is the lack of supporting characters. Snape in the Harry Potter world is very good, but the others feel like pure tool people without that kind of more advanced interaction. Especially in those low-level worlds, such as the fighting world, those fighting masters have simply become stepping stones and disposable tools. Some supporting characters should be arranged to break through the shackles and bring new inspiration and even surprises to the protagonist. Don't just have a one-man show by the protagonist.

It's okay. It's one of the more anticipated novels among foreign persimmons. But the world is growing too fast, and I feel like the author can't grasp it. There are a lot of inconsistencies, and sometimes the time jumps forward suddenly. In the last chapter, I still don't know whether Aaron was born, but in the next chapter, Aaron is dead.

The author's previous writing is pretty good, but unfortunately I don't know many worlds, like Night City, which I haven't seen. Wait, so I can't understand the rest and just leave. I wish the author will write better and better, and I wish you all a bright future.

I think it's pretty good.

It's okay, but the world changes too quickly. I suggest changing the world in chapters 20-30.

Now the world only writes about mixed martial arts. Is there anything you want to read after finishing Wuxia?

Good, good, good, polite child